23รีวิว
4.06
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Very Good! Is Like! Top! ______________________€___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Very Good! Is Fantastic! Excelent! Continue...More Chapter please!‐----------------------‐--------------------------------‐--------------________//_/////////__////////////__________________///////////////_____________
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Better still the xx scene could be complimented with pictures Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
Such a nice story. Very cool, not so eye catchy and fun to read but it's quite okay.😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😋😋😋😋😋so hot, corny, and sexy. Turns you on 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍😍😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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I love it keep it up,......................... 😘🎇🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆 ................ ............................................... .........................................
Wohooo............................... ......Long time not to read those kind of story.. Keep it up author. It makes me want to stay bed with my hubby... Wkwk... 😂😂
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È assim mm, levas 5 estrelas por seres Tuga e por mostrares o como se escreve um belo porno hahahahah props ..(.)(.).......(|)............
This is my first review based on reading the story description. Might need a proofreader to fix minor basic grammatical errors. Also, is this historical fiction? What or whose history is this?
Fucking awesome only down side have to wait for updates......................................................................................
Its just a wet dream of an author. But do what you want i'm not gonna judge. .... ...... ..... .... ... 👌(Who the f*ck would want to f*ck so willingly.)😋
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😎😎😎
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong☺☺☺
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😋😋😋
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😈😈😈
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😋😋😋
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😈😇😈
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😇😇😇
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😈😈😈
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Dude...sigh. When I look at the synopsis and title, 8 was like :what a straightforward guy. And you just make mc a pathetic whimpy guy crying and shaking at everything. Just To make some cheap drama? Sigh. I mean, I guess. Some chud thundercock conquest would be a bit too repetitive and boring to read... But that's just...sad.
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Very Good! Is Like! Top! ______________________€___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Very Good! Is Fantastic! Excelent! Continue...More Chapter please!‐----------------------‐--------------------------------‐--------------________//_/////////__////////////__________________///////////////_____________
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Better still the xx scene could be complimented with pictures Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
Such a nice story. Very cool, not so eye catchy and fun to read but it's quite okay.😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😋😋😋😋😋so hot, corny, and sexy. Turns you on 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍😍😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I love it keep it up,......................... 😘🎇🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆 ................ ............................................... .........................................
Wohooo............................... ......Long time not to read those kind of story.. Keep it up author. It makes me want to stay bed with my hubby... Wkwk... 😂😂
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ È assim mm, levas 5 estrelas por seres Tuga e por mostrares o como se escreve um belo porno hahahahah props ..(.)(.).......(|)............
This is my first review based on reading the story description. Might need a proofreader to fix minor basic grammatical errors. Also, is this historical fiction? What or whose history is this?
Fucking awesome only down side have to wait for updates......................................................................................
Its just a wet dream of an author. But do what you want i'm not gonna judge. .... ...... ..... .... ... 👌(Who the f*ck would want to f*ck so willingly.)😋
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😎😎😎
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong☺☺☺
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😋😋😋
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😈😈😈
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😋😋😋
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😈😇😈
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😇😇😇
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong😈😈😈
Wanjirrrrr Bankehhhhhhh Dancokkk Asuuuuuuu Babiiiiiiiiii Celengan Ngacenggggg Ngentotttttt Lonteeeeeeeeeeee Tante girangggggg Ngacenggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Dude...sigh. When I look at the synopsis and title, 8 was like :what a straightforward guy. And you just make mc a pathetic whimpy guy crying and shaking at everything. Just To make some cheap drama? Sigh. I mean, I guess. Some chud thundercock conquest would be a bit too repetitive and boring to read... But that's just...sad.