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Edited by Thebrowneyedgirl
It is about the love between two people who are not meant to be together, but ended up falling hard for each other.
The girl goes to the past where she finds a man who will become her whole life.
Even though they both love each other dearly, they will not be able to express it until a certain turn of events.
But who knows, fate could actually be the cruelest thing to play in their lives....
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"Wah! Sorry! Are you alright? Here, I will help you get up."
Shiv stretched out his hand.
'You really think I will help you get up? Now is my chance to see what you were trying so hard to hide from me!'
Shiv didn't notice that Ira had a sinister smile on her face. The moment he reached out his hand, she pulled him and tied his hands above his head with the ribbon from her robe. She pushed him to a ground and undid his clothes.
Suddenly a realization stroke her! 'What is this situation? Isn't it like I am jumping on him??'
"I never thought you would actually take the initiative. You are so straightforward..." He teased her with his soft and seductive tone.
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'It would be good if I could just get swept away in the moment atleast once... But why am I feeling scared? What is wrong with me falling in love? I just love him... I want to be with him... Is that so wrong?'
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This was so plain in writing and good talking best in word good in title and fabulous in character then its over all good to u be the best and be the healer
Has i missed to give this story a star so i am doing it now 😅 ur doing the good job now keep it up have a nice day. In Scarlet love i think u have something to say about.
It was good and i am waiting for next chapter and i am eager to know about the next chapter so upload the chapter soon. Have a cover photo to your story to be good
I will straight up say... my ratings on stability of updating, character design, and world background shouldnt be taken si seriously. Ive only read the first chapter, no i only read part of the first chapter and can only say that it was very disappointing in comparison to its reviews. The writing quality was so immature that i could read beyong several paragrapgs. There were grammer mistakes and the transition and introduction of ideas were ******* and rather hard to read. From thsi first chapter i also had found the character perceived as perfect which seemed a bit cliche. There may however be a good story line that a person who can ignore poor writing quality.
The more I read the more I feel drawn into it. To be honest the starting was so slow.... I even thought of dropping it..... But glad I din't! I really love it! So guys.... who feels like dropping it mid way, please don't do that, if you do then you will miss out something so cool and interesting!! I really really love!! Thanks for the hard work Author!! :D
I love the way you have portrayed the difference between the two worlds. I can't wait for our Ira and Shiv to fall in love. They are both cute as it is. Simply loving it 😘😍 Thanks for the chaps author
Im Waiting for your next chapter. Seetha's character is too good as of now. I hope in next chapter Shiv will play major role. Im Waiting for your next chapter. Seetha's character is too good as of now. I hope in next chapter Shiv will play major role.
Author u r doing a good work it's getting more and more interesting . I'm loving it please release more chaps. There are a lot of twists and turns as far as I have read. It's quite cool. Thanks for ur hard work. 😊
Even though this novel has just begun, it's already very interesting! Sometimes you catch me off guard! I will be thinking some kind of development but something totally different happens and that different thing is what makes it interesting in my point of view. Thanks for the chaps author! Keep up the good work 👍
This is my first time writing a novel and english is not my first language. If you find any faults or room for improvements or if you find it interesting please let me know. I will be waiting for your reviews :)
I found this story very interesting. The characters and the world is depicktedvere vividly and I will be waiting for more updates from you, author😉
The story goes around well but I feel the author needs to be working much more on the spelling and could see that there are too many characters confusing a little but all are portrayed in a very well manner. Also needs to be working on the tenses. Otherwise the story is going great with around Ira and Shiv. 👍
What ever shiv and his people are doing they should be quick, well maybe this man is a good man, then he should protect her. Even at that I love this novel but my complain is that the production is too slow.
This book is really interesting especially now that Ira is missing. The question is still, how will they rescue her ? Will she burn along with the pleasant.
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Could see that the author is going good as they are updating a chapter daily. Really appreciate that.👏should be doing that on a daily basis. Keep it up 👌👍
จำนวน 1
- 1 *Ordinary Days.... 6 years ago
- 2 *End of her ordinary day....... 6 years ago
- 3 *Keep calm and Smile.......... 6 years ago
- 4 *SAVE ME!! 6 years ago
- 5 *Dazzling light!!! 6 years ago
- 6 *Unknown world. 6 years ago
- 7 *Chaos. 6 years ago
- 8 *Are you retarded?? 6 years ago
- 9 *Surprise! 6 years ago
- 10 *Please wait for me, my goddess! 6 years ago
- 11 *Horrified! 6 years ago
- 12 *Sorrow.. 6 years ago
- 13 *Has the time come? 6 years ago
- 14 *The Truth..... 6 years ago
- 15 *The Promised Day! 6 years ago
- 16 *The Prophecy! 6 years ago
- 17 *A Sudden Thought! 6 years ago
- 18 *Mess with them twice as hard! 6 years ago
- 19 Surprise Attack! 6 years ago
- 20 Seetha changed to Ira. 6 years ago
- 21 Curiosity kills the cat. 6 years ago
- 22 That lucky ear!! 6 years ago
- 23 Hope we never meet again! 5 years ago
- 24 The return of the Prince 5 years ago
- 25 Is it a crime to fall in love? 5 years ago
- 26 An impenetrable shield! 5 years ago
- 27 Cover failed pathetically! 5 years ago
- 28 Alluring voice. 5 years ago
- 29 Wonder what this feeling is...... But I like it! 5 years ago
- 30 I will protect you! 5 years ago
- 31 You are more beautiful! 5 years ago
- 32 Warm smile! 5 years ago
- 33 Hug! 5 years ago
- 34 I am alive, thanks to a certain someone! 5 years ago
- 35 Creeping Danger. 5 years ago
- 36 I miss them. 5 years ago
- 37 Trust Me! 5 years ago
- 38 Spy - Part 1 5 years ago
- 39 Spy Part - 2 5 years ago
- 40 A Long Night Part 1 5 years ago
- 41 A long night Part 2 5 years ago
- 42 Cold and Cruel Night! 5 years ago
- 43 A nobody. 5 years ago
- 44 *I am nothing without her! 5 years ago
- 45 *Champa Market. 5 years ago
- 46 That voice... 5 years ago
- 47 Can I still stay by your side? 5 years ago
- 48 I will be by your side. 5 years ago
- 49 What is this? BL?? 5 years ago
- 50 Beautiful Sorceress! 5 years ago
- 51 Immunity is very much needed! 5 years ago
- 52 Thank You! 5 years ago
- 53 Immense pain. 5 years ago
- 54 You are the one! 5 years ago
- 55 Annoying. 5 years ago
- 56 Identity. 5 years ago
- 57 Sacrifice. 5 years ago
- 58 *Inner screams went unheard... 5 years ago
- 59 *A feisty young girl. 5 years ago
- 60 *A person to confide in. 5 years ago
- 61 *Turn around and take a rest. 5 years ago
- 62 *Fallen empire's Prince and Princess. 5 years ago
- 63 *Grave danger. 5 years ago
- 64 *Alliance. 5 years ago
- 65 *Investigation Bureau. 5 years ago
- 66 *Investigation Part-1 5 years ago
- 67 *Investigation Part-2 5 years ago
- 68 Will you take responsibility? 5 years ago
- 69 Sealed water source Part 1 5 years ago
- 70 Sealed water source Part-2 5 years ago
- 71 Sealed water source Part-3 5 years ago
- 72 Sealed Water Source Part-4 5 years ago
- 73 Scared of being abandoned. 5 years ago
- 74 The conformation! 5 years ago
- 75 Dangerous! 5 years ago
- 76 Seven sacred stones. 5 years ago
- 77 Unfortunate Encounter! 5 years ago
- 78 Long lost enemy. 5 years ago
- 79 Mirror World. 5 years ago
- 80 Failed Hug! 5 years ago
- 81 Time constraint. 5 years ago
- 82 Curse! 5 years ago
- 83 Mother. 5 years ago
- 84 Handsome. 5 years ago
- 85 How about we make a deal? 5 years ago
- 86 To the palace of Surasena. 5 years ago
- 87 Are you a friend or an enemy? 5 years ago
- 88 My cousins are visiting. 5 years ago
- 89 Roaming Demons. 5 years ago
- 90 The North Forest. 5 years ago
- 91 *A Beautiful Maiden. 5 years ago
- 92 *We have to protect her. 5 years ago
- 93 *Bloody Kiss. 5 years ago
- 94 *I fell for her. 5 years ago
- 95 *Lady Mia. 5 years ago
- 96 *Hug. 5 years ago
- 97 *The unfolded past... 5 years ago
- 98 *In your dreams! 5 years ago
- 99 *A mere human. 5 years ago
- 100 *You are lacking nutrients! 5 years ago
- 101 *Demon lord got pick-pocketed? 5 years ago
- 102 *I love you! 5 years ago
- 103 *Trap! 5 years ago
- 104 *Defeat... 5 years ago
- 105 *My only one... 5 years ago
- 106 *The Curse. 5 years ago
- 107 *Drought struck village. 5 years ago
- 108 *Woo me? 5 years ago
- 109 *Village of Mist. 5 years ago
- 110 The village elder. 5 years ago
- 111 Elder's son. 5 years ago
- 112 Plan. 5 years ago
- 113 Prayer. 5 years ago
- 114 The family heirloom. 5 years ago
- 115 Village of Archi. 5 years ago
- 116 Missing you! 5 years ago
- 117 Make your presence known. 5 years ago
It's very good ,I like how the story goes by and Its not very hard to understand. I think this is one of the best stories I read. And it will make you excite to know what will happen on the story so keep it up..