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meme, so so, what is this?, narutogarden? where kids plays with kunais and some kids gets "accidentally" killed while playing hide and seek tsk tsk what kind of "?????" is this tsk tsk, can you not be more smart?, oh, i see, no wonder, elementary kids these days...
Story development is ok, and character design is what's to be expected from a fan-fic, but this writing quality, reminds me of when i just started learning English in school.
It doesnt look that promising, but im giving this rating so that it doesnt get dropped! Naruto characters thats a plus, hope this goes better! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC
stopped reading at chapter 1.. unnecessary (words) the story does not need those words inside the parenthesis the readers are not 5 year old that we need to know that the MC is speaking/looking at the person he is speaking with.. if I'm not wrong this is a novel not a comic.
I'd be in love with this Fanfic, no actually do love this fanfic, it's just the writing is so bad. It's torture trying to figure out what some things say, but yet can't stop reading it, cause I love it. MY BRAIN IS GOING TO EXPLODE!!
man se não tá ligado o trabalho que deu para ler essa sinopse ...................................................................................................................................................................................
The FIRST 10 chap was "good" except but the bull **** you are pulling off is bs like how can he have like 10 tail charak and might guy tighugust rakiagd speed and still not beat 100 nin.and how about the pregnancy it says he is now of Mexican but he us like sakura useless. Naruto could beat time in his exam period .
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The story is pretty good. I dont mean any offence by this but it doesnt look like english is the authors first language, he/she needs to get a editor to edit the grammar. The book is kind of hard to read because it doesnt look like it is written well but the overall story is good, from what i could understand.
Too BAD its been Dropped T_T...................................................................................................................................................................
Ughh only few words then, IT'S HARD TO READ...................................................................................................................................................................
meme, so so, what is this?, narutogarden? where kids plays with kunais and some kids gets "accidentally" killed while playing hide and seek tsk tsk what kind of "?????" is this tsk tsk, can you not be more smart?, oh, i see, no wonder, elementary kids these days...
Story development is ok, and character design is what's to be expected from a fan-fic, but this writing quality, reminds me of when i just started learning English in school.
It doesnt look that promising, but im giving this rating so that it doesnt get dropped! Naruto characters thats a plus, hope this goes better! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC
stopped reading at chapter 1.. unnecessary (words) the story does not need those words inside the parenthesis the readers are not 5 year old that we need to know that the MC is speaking/looking at the person he is speaking with.. if I'm not wrong this is a novel not a comic.
I'd be in love with this Fanfic, no actually do love this fanfic, it's just the writing is so bad. It's torture trying to figure out what some things say, but yet can't stop reading it, cause I love it. MY BRAIN IS GOING TO EXPLODE!!
man se não tá ligado o trabalho que deu para ler essa sinopse ...................................................................................................................................................................................
The FIRST 10 chap was "good" except but the bull **** you are pulling off is bs like how can he have like 10 tail charak and might guy tighugust rakiagd speed and still not beat 100 nin.and how about the pregnancy it says he is now of Mexican but he us like sakura useless. Naruto could beat time in his exam period .
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story is pretty good. I dont mean any offence by this but it doesnt look like english is the authors first language, he/she needs to get a editor to edit the grammar. The book is kind of hard to read because it doesnt look like it is written well but the overall story is good, from what i could understand.
Too BAD its been Dropped T_T...................................................................................................................................................................
Ughh only few words then, IT'S HARD TO READ...................................................................................................................................................................