บท 1: my not so good intro

hi so this is my first ever writing now so please tell me about all the mistakes I make in this new story ill try to update even it its just a paragraph a day and I don't really wanna make this serious writing like my punctuation and all that stuff we learn in school so please if you get annoyed with how this looks you won't like my story and I'm sorry that you might not understand anything that's going on in my story which is which happens everyday in my life no one understands what I say but that don't matter well thank you for reading till the end and yeah