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บท 290: Shift

After spending nearly twenty minutes in the bath with Aki, the two dried themselves off and Vahn gave Aki some of the clothing he kept within his inventory. She was a little surprised that he had women's clothing, but Vahn just explained it away as having been necessary in the past and he liked to be prepared. She happily accepted the small black shorts and the pale-blue blouse he gave her before wearing them overtop somewhat intricately designed black panties that he handed her. When she had received them, she tilted her head to the side with a thoughtful look before wearing them in a smooth motion.

Vahn was preparing to return to the library to make sure things were cleaned up, but Aki prevented him from doing so and said she would take care of it herself. He assumed she didn't want another person potentially cleaning her pee, so Vahn nodded his head and decided to cool off his head a bit by heading outside and sitting on the balcony. The sky had been cloudy lately and there was even a very short period when some snow had fallen. Unfortunately, it didn't pile up at all and Vahn wasn't able to experience his first snow day.

During the lunch period, Aki had decided to take the opportunity to discuss the various rules and regulations that the girls would have to follow from now on. Though she couldn't do much about the fact that some of the girls had already joined the Familia, Aki still asked that they all take vows related to the non-disclosure of information, working alongside criminal Familia, and compromising the interests of others within the Familia. With Hestia's support, every girl present made vows, including Preasia even though she wasn't actually in the Familia yet. As a show of his own support, Vahn also made the vows in front of the girls with a few minor stipulations related to him specifically.

One of the things the girls had to do, other than their assigned duties, was study information about the dungeon. They were also given price lists, lists of common drops, ingredients for making medicine, and other miscellaneous information that would be useful when they finally entered the dungeon in the future. Since some of the girls didn't know how to read well at all, Aki also pitched in and helped educate the illiterate members alongside Preasia, Haruhime, and Fenrir. Mikoto still spent her afternoon training and honing her skills while Vahn had been preparing to return to his workshop but was stopped along the way by Hestia.

Hestia had a somewhat difficult expression on her face and Vahn could see her aura was drooping pitifully even though it still retained its reddish-pink hue. Before he could ask what the matter was, Hestia spoke up to answer his concerns, "I talked with Hephaestus and Loki earlier...Vahn, am I being a bother to you?" Vahn furrowed his brows a bit and stated firmly, "Hestia, I've told you several times that I like your behavior. Even if it gets a little out of hand at times, its always exciting and I like spending time with you." Instead of showing a relieved expression, Hestia let out a sigh and said, "Loki said you'd say something like that...so it's true, I've been taking things too far lately."

Without continuing the conversation further, Vahn stepped forward and hugged Hestia tightly around her shoulders before pressing her head to his chest and stroking her hair. In response, Hestia grabbed the back of his tunic and held the fabric tightly with her hands and muttered, "Vahn...why is it so hard to be in love with someone? Even though I know you have to be free, I can't help but want to keep you locked away in our room, away from all the terrible things and people you'll face in the future. I don't want to see you in pain while you struggle to help other people's dreams come true..."

Vahn didn't know how to answer her question for a bit and continued to stroke her hair before saying, "I don't know Hestia...I've only ever thought about doing my best. Even when things get hard, the trust people put in me helps drive me forward...it is knowing that there are people that love me waiting for my return that helps me overcome difficulties. Even if I stayed in that room with you for a while, life would eventually find its way to us and force us to face it. I'd rather take the initiative and face life head-on rather than be caught off guard when I least expect it..."

Stroking the side of Hestia's face, Vahn tiled her head and saw the watery blue eyes on the verge of tears. With a gentle and loving smile on his face, Vahn whispered, "Hestia, won't you face it together with me? There is much more to life than being cooped up within that bedroom, or even being here in this Manor. I think you'll find the answer you're looking for if you open your heart to others and see the beauty in the world, not just the dangers...it might be my take as a 'mortal', but I know that you can live forever...without having lived life for a single day. I want to make the most of every moment, and I want you to be there with me during my times of triumph, as well as when I face defeat. With a beautiful goddess like you waiting for me, I feel like I can get back up no matter how many times I fall down..."

Though her expression hadn't returned to normal, Vahn could feel Hestia's aura expand rapidly until the point it had encompassed by their bodies in the reddish-pink atmosphere. After a few seconds, a cheerful smile appeared on Hestia's face and she placed her hand overtop Vahn's before saying, "Vahn, I love you so much~! Even when I feel lost and empty, you're always there to show me the way...and you even 'fill me up' in various ways." Vahn could see the moderately seductive glint in Hestia's gaze as she looked upward at him with her shining blue gem-like eyes.

Vahn leaned down and rubbed noses with Hestia before carrying her off to the side and seating her on one of the nearby sofa. She seemed to be getting in a strange mood, but Vahn placed his hand on her head and used [Hands of Nirvana] to help calm her down. Her aura began to slowly decrease in intensity and she had a difficult time trying to make any advances against Vahn as he gave her a casual smile and continued forcibly calming her down. Eventually, Hestia gave up and allowed Vahn to hug her from behind as she sat in his lap and behaved.

Vahn began explaining everything he had experienced since his first time with Tiona and Ais, as well as the regulations, concerns, and countermeasures that had been put into place to keep him from going down a deviant path. He talked to Hestia about moderation and putting more emphasis on each individual moment instead of over-saturating life with thoughts of sex. Vahn knew Hestia hadn't been associating too much with the rest of the Familia lately, since she spent most of her time within their room and he cautioned her about making a bad impression on the girl's hearts and minds.

Though she seemed a little hesitant at first, when Vahn began explaining to her about the lesson she had given him about treating their Familia like family, Hestia was unable to refute him at all. She just listened silently and asked a few questions to clarify matters which Vahn was able to answer easily. Vahn wanted Hestia to treat everyone in the Familia well, since she was actually the core of the group, even though there were a lot of people that treated him as their focus. Even if Vahn was the representative of the Familia during expeditions, Hestia was the actual face of the Familia and there were various things that could only be managed by her. He talked to her about some of the things he had discussed with Aki earlier, but Hestia had actually told him that she had already heard about them directly from the source.

After nearly three hours of discussion, all while Vahn helped comfort Hestia, it was decided that Hestia would be sleeping in her own room to set a better example for the others girls to follow. If they always saw her sleeping with Vahn and dragging an erotic scent through the house, it would make things difficult for everyone in the future. In exchange for her compliance, Vahn promised that they would be able to spend time together, but had to plan it properly in advance and needed to make sure it was in a location that wouldn't interfere with the lives of others. He pitched the idea about expanding the Manor in the future and even digging further into the ground and foundation around the premises. They already had a wine cellar and a large amount of basement storage space, but Vahn thought it would be a good idea to expand it in the future and even plan for escape tunnels in the event that they needed to move in and out of the Manor stealthily.

Adding onto Vahn's plans, Hestia pitched the idea of breaking down the wall separating the two onsens and segmenting off a private area with adequate soundproofing for private bathing. She also wanted to try building a sauna and even asked if Vahn could build a second private area for things like massages. Because he had plenty of diagram paper on hand, Vahn began to draw out the ideas after quickly sketching out the blueprints of the Hearth Manor using his minimap as a reference. Though he had never studied architecture seriously, Vahn had read several books on it and learned a bit when he was living alongside Eva in the orb. Hestia began to get very excited at the prospect of modifying their home even further since she seemed like the type that enjoyed staying at home. As a final add-on, she even brought up the idea of converting the west wing into a medical ward and daycare since there would probably be a few kids running around in the future.

Long before they were finished drawing up plans, it was already time for dinner and they were both surprised to know so much time had passed. If not for Vahn detecting Haruhime moving through the corridors looking for them, they might have caused everyone to wait for their late arrival. During dinner, Hestia brought up the blueprints they had been working on and starting an exciting discussion with all the girls present about things they'd like to see incorporated in the future. Even Aki got involved in the conversation because she thought it was a very good idea to make modifications in preparation for the future. As of now, the Manor was more so something that had been designed to be lived in as a residence. Most Familia Manors were designed as a central hub and the actual residences for the members were elsewhere.

The conversation was so lively that dinner went on nearly an hour over the usual amount of time they took to eat. Everyone was in a good mood as they cleaned up the dishes and all made their way toward the bath together. Vahn wasn't exactly dirty, but he also decided to take a short bath since it was a pleasant feeling to experience the cold air in combination with the hot water of the onsen. Every time he saw the steamy pools in the low light of the evening, Vahn felt like he had entered a mystical realm that was almost exclusively his own. Other than when he shared it with others, Vahn had the entire men's onsen to himself even though it looked like it could hold more than fifty people.

After soaking in one of the murky pools, Vahn allowed his body to relax and reveled in the experiences of the day. His interaction with Aki had been interesting, and he was looking forward to how things might progress in the future. He really wanted to meet the man named Raul and see what kind of person would be able to ignore the charms of such a beautiful woman. As he was relaxing, Vahn could hear a bit of a commotion from the women's bath, which wasn't that abnormal if not for the fact that he saw several presences near the dividing wall between the onsens...

For a brief moment, Vahn's mind blanked before he recalled Hestia's earlier suggestion about breaking down the wall and creating a private bathing area. Since it made more sense to create the private bath first, Vahn hadn't expected that they might try to immediately implement the idea. He didn't mind seeing the girls naked, but Vahn felt like it would be troublesome if he was in the same bath as eight other girls so he shouted out to stop them but swallowed his words when they turned to walk away without doing anything. Deciding that it might be the precursor to some future development, Vahn finished washing his body before escaping from the onsen...

After he returned to his room, Vahn was curious so he transformed into his Báihǔ form to see what kind of aroma was present in the room. He immediately regretted the decision since Vahn was hit by a literal wave of 'Essence of Hestia' and he could feel his heart begin to itch before dissipating the feeling with [Will of the Emperor] while ceasing his transformation. He had adapted to Hestia's scent a bit and was almost able to ignore it during normal circumstances so he had never noticed how prevalent it was in the room. It was no wonder that Aki had a blushing face when she had been present the night before...she had probably been bathed in the aroma of their 'misconduct' for the several minutes it required for her to have her crest converted.

Vahn changed the bedding and placed a few incenses in the room that had the properties of breaking down scents while also making the room smell like sandalwood. Vahn wasn't sure what sandalwood was before, but he managed to purchase a piece through the shop and noticed it had a robust, yet pleasant, aroma. It strangely reminded him or Ryuu, and Vahn spread a few around the room in the hopes that it might clear up the air a bit. He also opened one of the side vents that were typically closed to retain the heat within the Manor. Since he was essentially immune to the cold, Vahn didn't mind lowering the temperature of the room to let some fresh air spread throughout the interior. For the first time in a while, Vahn laid down in his bed alone and enjoyed the cool air against his skin as he spread his arms wide and released the tensions in his body...

(A/N:Alternate Titles: 'Regulations : Order','Vahn has a moment of inspiration','Relax')

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บท 291: Peace and Quiet?

After the first night 'alone', Vahn felt a bit of incongruity in his own body because he had a phantom sensation that something was 'missing' when he first went to sleep. He woke up several times through the night and realized that his fears that Hestia was adapting his body to her presence became cemented in his mind. Vahn knew she had no malicious intent, but it was still a bit awkward to realize how his own body had changed to have a strange expectation. He had even, for the first time, awoke to find his own penis standing proudly without his consent.

Hestia wasn't much better since Vahn saw a pair of bags under her eyes during breakfast and then carried her back to her own bed because she was lazing about later. He gave her a short massage and noticed she was having the reaction of a 'mature' woman, so he hoped it would help her calm down a bit and give her the opportunity to get some sleep. As for the other things going on in the house, Aki had very quickly become the 'go to' for any matters and concerns had by the other girls. Though they had a fierce 'respect' for Ryuu, most of the girls couldn't mesh with her well since she was relatively taciturn and serious.

It was also through Aki's management of things that Vahn actually had a wealth of time to himself to tend to his own matters. He was surprised that even Haruhime deferred to Aki, even though she still almost always sat next to him during meals. She had adapted her characteristic elegance and Vahn thought she was actually more 'naturally' than she had been when trying to approach him. If not for the fact her aura was usually gravitating toward him, Vahn would have had the suspicion that her mentality had changed and she was beginning to focus more on her own life and development.

The most notable change was how Preasia had begun to open up to the other girls more and had actually become very close with Haruhime and Mikoto alongside Fenrir. Since Fenrir liked having her own bush tail brushed, she got along really well with Haruhime as they both groomed each other with brushes. Vahn noticed that Fenrir was getting much better at controlling her own urges because she used to not be able to go three days without venturing into the dungeon to 'vent'. Though it wasn't likely to ever be the case, Vahn wanted Fenrir to be able to live a life without being controlled by her 'hunger'.

After a few peaceful days had passed, Vahn began to realize that a lot of the things that had stressed him out previously were due to his own oversights. Now that there was 'order' and regulations within the Manor, things had suddenly become a lot easier for him. Other than when he approached people, Vahn spent a great deal of his time working and having time to himself. It was a very big shift, since Vahn hadn't realized how important it was to have quality time alone. He learned a bit about management from Aki on occasion, and also shared some intimate moments whenever he was feeling affectionate.

It was during some of his 'intimate' moments that Vahn was able to check the Status Boards of Ryuu and Aki, since he hadn't found the time to do so previously. Ryuu had been happy about the changes in the Manor because there were actually more opportunities for her to spend time alone with Vahn. She wasn't fond of public affection and did a lot to constrain herself so it wouldn't cause disorder within the group. On one of the days she had stayed a bit later, Vahn and Ryuu had cuddled a bit in the library while talking about the progress of the girls. They didn't do anything too forward, but Vahn did get to experience a bit of the bashful side of Ryuu when he nibbled on her long ears a bit.

(A/N: Level 4's have a ton of skills~!)

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[[STATUS]]

Name: Ryuu Lion

Race: Elf

LV. 4

POW: F385

END: F311

DEX: B798

AGI: A804

MAG: C645

Skill: [Aeolus:Innate(sealed)], [Fairy Serenade:C], [Mind Load:C], [Aero Mana:A], [Concurrent Chanting:A]

Magic: [Sovereign of the Wind:Innate(sealed)], [Luminous Wind:B], [Noah Heal:D]

Development Skill: [Hunter:B], [Abnormal Resistance:B], [Magic Resistance:C]

[Fairy Serenade]

Rank:C

Use: Increases the efficacy of magic at night.

[Mind Load]

Rank:C

Use: Increases power in proportion to the amount of mana imbued into attacks.

[Aero Mana]

Rank:A

Use: Greatly increases attack power based on how fast the user is running.

[Concurrent Chanting]

Rank:A

Use: Allows the user to chant while moving about even under intense strain. Provides enhanced control over magical energy and prevents backlash from chant disruption.

[Luminous Wind]

Rank:B

Use: Attack Magic that summons green stardust to attack the enemy

Chant: In the sky of a now distant forest. Infinite stars scattered in the endless night sky. Respond to my foolish voice, give me now divine protection of starfire. Give the mercy of light to the one that abandoned you. Come, wandering wind, the wandering traveler. Cross the sky and run through the wilderness, run faster than anything else. Imbue the light of stardust and destroy the enemy

[Noah Heal]

Rank:D

Use: Healing magic that is capable of healing wounds and restoring the target's stamina

Chant: The song of a now distant forest. The nostalgic song of life. Please bring the mercy of healing to those that seek you

[Hunter]

Rank:B

Use: Improves abilities against monsters that the user has fought before and gained exilia from

[Abnormal Resistance]

Rank:B

Use: Nullifies abnormal status effects such as poison under the given rank.

[Magic Resistance]

Rank:C

Use: Increases resistance against all magical attacks.

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[[STATUS]]

Name: Anakitty Autumn

Race: Cat Person

LV. 4

POW: E441

END: F320

DEX: C605

AGI: C663

MAG: G206

Skill: [Imprint:Innate(sealed)], [Command Howl:D], [Featherfoot:D]

Magic: [Swift Tempo:C]

Development Skill: [Hunter:B], [Abnormal Resistance:C], [Swordsman:B]

[Swordsman]

Rank:B

Use: Increases comprehension of sword skills and techniques. Provides a moderate increase to the kinetic vision and spatial awareness of the user.

[Command Howl]

Rank:D

Use: Increases transmission functions of users voice when tensions increase. Allows for commands to be heard clearly across great distances.

[Featherfoot]

Rank:D

Use: Increases comprehension of movement abilities and footwork. Provides a moderate increase to stealth related abilities.

[Swift Tempo]

Rank:C

Use: Increases agility of the target.

Chant: Errant gale, become a swift tempo~!

[Hunter]

Rank:B

Use: Improves abilities against monsters that the user has fought before and gained exilia from

[Abnormal Resistance]

Rank:C

Use: Nullifies abnormal status effects such as poison under the given rank.

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As expected, Vahn noticed that both Ryuu and Aki had Innate abilities so he was able to intuit that a person would have, at the very least, one Innate skill. For characters that had more impact to the main story, they seemed to have stronger Innates, or in the case of Haruhime and Ryuu, more than one Innate ability in their repertoire. Vahn began to compile all of the Innate skills he had seen into a journal and wanted to keep track of their influence on a person's growth as well as their activation, assuming he was able to help any of the girls unseal their abilities. He knew it required a great amount of strain, as well as mental development for an Innate ability to awaken but, even if they were exposed to a real life-and-death situation, they may not awaken at all...

By the time the weekend had come, a lot of things had changed in the Manor and things had calmed down a great deal. When Milan and Tina visited, they were received by all of the current residents of the Manor in high spirits and Vahn got to spend some quality time with the Mother-Daughter duo. Tina had calmed down a lot compared to her past self, and she was actively talking with the other girls to improve their relationships. She got along best with Preasia and Fenrir, but she also played with the twins a bit. Haruhime wanted to grow closer to the tiny cat girl, but Milan and Mikoto had stepped in because they were afraid she might be a bad influence on Tina.

However, the calmer and more peaceful things became, the more unnerved Vahn was feeling about everything that was happening. He felt like he needed to be taking proactive action instead of spending his time cooped up in the Manor and 'relaxing'. Though he liked having time to work on the clothing and equipment designs, Vahn felt a bit anxious about how smoothly things were developing. The Denatus was only two weeks away, and Vahn felt like the coming two weeks would be full of challenges and developments that he may not be prepared for. On his immediate list of things that needed to be taken care of, there was the matter of Loki's pregnancy, trying to spend time with some of the girls outside of the Manor, as well as taking counter-action against the movements of the Ishtar Familia.

Though he still spent some intimate moments with Hestia, Vahn felt a strange 'itch' within his heart when he thought about the other girls like Loki and Hephaestus. He also began to have fantasies about his potential relationships with other girls and Vahn realized he might be developing the 'deviant' tendencies that he had been cautioned about previously. Since he had so much 'free time', Vahn spent a fair amount thinking about possible date ideas, how he should interact with the girls, and potentially how they would spend their first time together. As he hadn't been able to visit the Hostess of Fertility recently, Vahn had begun to miss Chloe, and to a lesser extent, the other girls like Syr, Arnya, and Lunoire. He also wanted to check up on Mona and Shizune, since he hadn't seen the two ever since he helped save them from the clutches of the slave trader.

Of course, the more Vahn thought about that type of thing, the more he wanted to associate with other guys since he still knew he was missing a few things to function properly. Though he knew a few people that had several wives, Vahn noticed there weren't many, if any, guys that were surrounded by as many women as he was. Since he had seen Welf's reaction in the past, Vahn knew his situation was somewhat precarious and was afraid things would devolve to a point where he couldn't manage everything. Vahn was hoping that Eina would be able to help him manage things when she moved in after their marriage. Though he had an interest in several women, Vahn knew it wouldn't be possible for him to show every girl the same amount of attention and he was very worried about the future.

Ever since Aki cautioned him about turning the Familia into his own 'Harem', Vahn had been thinking about what steps he needed to take to prevent people from seeing him in a strange light. He decided that it would be best to defer to his wives on the matter and only proactively pursue a small number of women. Because of his interactions with Aki and Hestia, Vahn knew there were different levels of intimacy he could have with women. Even though they had 'played' around a bit, Aki's affection had never increased over 85 and usually returned to 80 after she had calmed down. Hestia, however, was always in a high-tension state and Vahn had to tend to her occasionally in fear that she might overburden herself.

Since there was no way Vahn could marry every woman around him, he knew that a lot of his relationships with girls were probably temporary. He was a bit sad about it, since he had an interest in many of the girls both physically and mentally. Vahn didn't know if it would be appropriate for him to actually take action against them if they would eventually move on. The only thing he was truly concerned about was their happiness, but it still felt a little sad to think about separating from people he cared for. He knew that, if he couldn't provide for their heart and offer them peace of mind, it was very possible the girls would grow distant from him just like Aki had been doing with Raul. The fact that he could still see Aki had affections for Raul prevented Vahn from thinking everything would always go as smoothly as they had been...

One of the big impacts Vahn had suffered was knowing that Tione and Tiona weren't able to visit him due to 'personal reasons'. Ever since he had 'defeated' her in combat, Tione had been on edge and had been struggling with her own emotions. After the matter of their duel spread on the network, Tione had been severely reprimanded and denied any opportunity to approach Vahn in the near future. Since she couldn't be 'trusted' to control herself properly, Tiona also couldn't visit the Hearth Manor for the time being so she had been venting a few her frustrations with Tione as they went into the dungeon and caused a rather large amount of devastation with Riveria and Gareth watching over them.

This led to the unique situation where Ais and Lefiya visited the Manor as a duo and lounged about in Vahn's workshop. When they had seen the 'mannequins' of themselves, Ais had a glint in her eyes and Vahn was given the opportunity to take her measurements and have her try on some of the clothing he had been designing for her. Since she was the type to get wrapped up in the momentum, especially when the matters concerned Ais, Lefiya also abashedly had her measurements taken by Vahn and had him promise to keep the information a secret.

Though he already suspected it would be the case, Vahn was in very high tensions and felt happy whenever he saw the girls in outfits of his own design. Ais even pushed things further and had Vahn help her dress whenever he was explaining matters. Since he also got to appraise their body from various angles, Vahn began humoring the idea of mastering the trade of being a tailor and dressmaker in the future. Seeing the various reactions of Ais and Lefiya was a very refreshing feeling for Vahn and he realized that he was the type that liked creating things to be used by the people he cared about.

Vahn didn't really like blacksmithing that much, and had only put in the effort because he wanted to keep his promise with Hephaestus. Ever since then, Vahn had been somewhat lax and hadn't been working on his forging much and instead focused on creating diagrams and blueprints for future projects. He figured that he would be able to focus his efforts more when he had a reason to create items versus when he was just working to make money. The final nail in the coffin had been when Vahn was asked by Ais to help design a pair of form-fitting of undergarments for her since she didn't like the constrictive feeling of most fabrics. She often wore open-backed clothing which meant she only wore tape to cover her breasts normally. Piggybacking off her words, Lefiya also muttered through stuttered sentences about wanting a pair for herself as well. When Vahn saw their reactions, his heart practically melted and he felt a powerful motivation rising up inside of him.

(A/N: It wasn't specifically stated, so this 'time skip' was between Tuesday-Monday of the following week. So roughly six days, which makes the Denatus is 14 days~! Also, for those that keep making comments about Aki's presence...she is necessary to actually 'manage' the Familia and was sent by Loki to keep an eye on both Vahn and Hestia. Vahn might be powerful, but he has few leadership qualities and no management capabilities. Ryuu might be strong and stoic, but she also lacks the qualities of a good leader and is more likely to follow order than dish them out. Aki was an active lieutenant and knows what it takes to make a Familia function and properly prepared before they enter a dungeon. She was a supporter when she was 12, and became an active adventurer when she was 14. She has a great deal of experience to draw from and is also a stable existence that isn't overly-reliant on Vahn. People compare her to Eina, but they serve two fundamentally different roles. Aki is there to make sure the Familia functions, while Eina's main purpose is to make sure Vahn functions o3o.)

(A/N: Alternate Titles: 'Stable Living Conditions','Level 4 OP','Vahn Doesn't Simply Slice Life, He Makes A Twelve-Layer Sandwich And Is Afraid To Eat It')

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