10รีวิว
4.6
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Hope you come back your novel sounds cool sadly you weren't consistent with it and the chapters were too short without the proper lining between the prases but the story is gucci :) hope you come back stronger than ever ^o^.
Okay and well written, but I would say there is a lot of sorcery of one kind. No comment. EXP. EXP. Novel is good, I haven’t read it yet. Thats all!
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Error in chapter 5, pointed out in comments. Poor update stability. Feels more like an informational book than a story... maybe try to incorporate any information you need to give in dialogue between characters with exception to ascetic descriptions.;,;. Positive Feedback: Nice plot concept, and you do develop your characters well despite your shortcomings. Personal Feedback: I thought you did decently well, however, this novel is not really my cup of tea, so I will not be continuing to read it... keep up the hard work.;,;.
Great novel , keep up the updates , it will increase your reader , tell more about the world / or universe , and added to this story he built kingdom for himself
I wanted to review because I just wanted to. I have nothing else to say. Good day to you brother..... Z Z Z Z Z Zz Z ........,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,,.,.,..,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,’zmmx
Hello, guys author here. The first volume of the story will be about army building. In the second we will see territory building. Also, I would also like to say that I will sometimes change the pov to develop other characters. The release schedule will be two chapters, but as I'm going to school, it might drop to 1 chapter a day. Hope you read it and thanks
So far I like it Gziyrsyrsyors6oeaoyezyezktdYoeapydapyapyalyeLysKtsOtwOtwTpsYpsapteapteaypeaotsTeoOteToeOtwTteetleLteLtwapyealyealyeTleTeluorsyprzrpyrzurzrypzryozyroyrozryzpyrz6rze7 140 characters done
Hear ye, Hear ye! Read this novel for the sake of the mountains. It is good stoof!!!! Am I right? Or am I right? 140 characters have been written
Just decided to give this book a try cause sir estacia recommend it, this review has been posted before I started reading, well... Time to dive!!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hope you come back your novel sounds cool sadly you weren't consistent with it and the chapters were too short without the proper lining between the prases but the story is gucci :) hope you come back stronger than ever ^o^.
Okay and well written, but I would say there is a lot of sorcery of one kind. No comment. EXP. EXP. Novel is good, I haven’t read it yet. Thats all!
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Error in chapter 5, pointed out in comments. Poor update stability. Feels more like an informational book than a story... maybe try to incorporate any information you need to give in dialogue between characters with exception to ascetic descriptions.;,;. Positive Feedback: Nice plot concept, and you do develop your characters well despite your shortcomings. Personal Feedback: I thought you did decently well, however, this novel is not really my cup of tea, so I will not be continuing to read it... keep up the hard work.;,;.
Great novel , keep up the updates , it will increase your reader , tell more about the world / or universe , and added to this story he built kingdom for himself
I wanted to review because I just wanted to. I have nothing else to say. Good day to you brother..... Z Z Z Z Z Zz Z ........,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,,.,.,..,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,’zmmx
Hello, guys author here. The first volume of the story will be about army building. In the second we will see territory building. Also, I would also like to say that I will sometimes change the pov to develop other characters. The release schedule will be two chapters, but as I'm going to school, it might drop to 1 chapter a day. Hope you read it and thanks
So far I like it Gziyrsyrsyors6oeaoyezyezktdYoeapydapyapyalyeLysKtsOtwOtwTpsYpsapteapteaypeaotsTeoOteToeOtwTteetleLteLtwapyealyealyeTleTeluorsyprzrpyrzurzrypzryozyroyrozryzpyrz6rze7 140 characters done
Hear ye, Hear ye! Read this novel for the sake of the mountains. It is good stoof!!!! Am I right? Or am I right? 140 characters have been written
Just decided to give this book a try cause sir estacia recommend it, this review has been posted before I started reading, well... Time to dive!!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.