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Diane woke up, sweating and crying. There was a pain in her chest that she can’t really describe. But it’s there, and it’s intense enough to emotionally hurt her through this dream she has. Every night for the past week, Diane wakes up with the same pain. And the sadness and emptiness inside her when she wakes up kills her. She can’t stand it. She needs to know what the dream’s significance was. The only thing Diane could ever remember were the screams. The terrible shrieks that came from nowhere. And everywhere. All she knows is that in her dream, she’s waiting for someone. Hoping and praying that someone will come back to her, to fill in an empty gap in her heart.
But this was only a feeling. A feeling that eventually fades. And she forgets, only to have it come back to haunt her, in her dreams, in the night. Part of her wants to believe that this is just a dream. Only a dream. But the other side wonders why it feels so real. Why does it feel so much like a memory when she can’t ever remember loving someone that fierce?
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This is just an experimental novel on my part. This is my first novel, so please don't judge. Furthermore, this is just a short story I wrote up some time ago and I merely want feedback. Please go easy on me!
P.S. This is relatively short, and will probably be over in about ten chapters...
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The story was good... I liked the last chapter the most... She tried to forget... but love last always and forever in the Heart... and was completely satisfied with the HAPPY ENDING... good work author... keep it up.!!♥♥
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Amazing story. Enjoyed it alot Story really moved me. It made me cry made me laugh made me angry. It was just too good. Its a story of love buried deep inside so that it doesn't hurt anymore to live through life without it. Thank You
Hmmm,it was a nice short story, but the ending was too soon. It should have at least onr chapter longer to see the more detailed ending..but it was nice, hope more short and concise stories will be published again, soonnnn....
The story is really good. Though short, the storyline provides interesting plot. This is more of a romantic drama that gives tears and all. I would like to see you write more. I hope you'll invest more on Romance. I mean, fast-paced romance, full of face slapping scenes. I think your good in writing. Your grammar is on point. Would be glad to read more of your works!
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