151รีวิว
4.11
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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why the **** did he bring her with Himont mission to protect the president ? it's not like she's a part of special force team or something. Firstly, the goal she went to that special force in the first place is to learn how to defend herself not to kill or be a member of that team. Second, he asked her to sign agreement or something to monitor and investigate all his family's members. like hell< I don't understand anything here. > . what's the point of marry her in the first place? if his family has a rule that need to undergo training and pass it in order to become his wife, then why did u **** her until the original body owner died? why? Also, do u expect a university student major in jewel to pass all those kinds of thing in the first place? The way he treat her like a playthings to release his sexual things is quite terrible. He didn't treat her like a human being but playthings. Do u expect such a person to hold the position of captain of a special force??? Such a psycho??? Finally, What the **** did his family do exactly here? His grandmother controls nation economic while his grandfather holds the position of commander and he's the captain of special force and here the mission is to protect the president or what not..... Author tell me what do u want to write exactly here??? It's all mess up. I don't know about other comments cos they only mentioned grammar errors but I would like to mention about plots here. Could you please make good structure and set a specific goal or direction for your novel. You can not let MC run around and do things all over the places without direction or goal.
Author I hope that you are fine and I will wait for the updates plz plz plz come back soon 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
It was really good story but to bad there hasn't been any updates in a year now. Too bad I am crying. Oh well thanks anyway. Loved this story.
I really love the character of our fl. She's so cool. I hope she will give the ml a very hard time before she falls in love with him because he's such an asshole from the start.
What happened to the story..its been long time that it is not updated...i always check but no progress...what happened dear author to your story
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why still don't have update.....author please don't drop this story and your story is quite interesting to read even though have some mistake which I don't care
Why always ML not love original owner of the body I feel very pitty novel is very good but lacking of something I can't tell what lacking of something FL lazy but their backround not understand I think have to read lot chapters then I can understand
Oh God FL is a genius plus lazy what combo but she her reincarnation is in miletry family cold husband but what is in his mind what FL past why her father give call for her she pass the test
good story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Love the book very much. I've never been a fan of Sci fi but I must say in this novel I'm quite enjoying it. I'm hoping things are winding up now coz we have gone round and round in circles and it's only now when loose ends seem to be tying up. Please hurry up and finish dear author, do not leave us in such suspense!
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Nice story...I really like the FL character she very likable the ML is kinda hateful at first but gradually he redeem himself... although I skip many chapters because of lack power stone reading is was still satisfying 😉😉😉
The story is so overwhelming. The conflict and plots will ignited your curiosity and that is the one of the charms of this novel. We know that there are no perfect novel out there especially if the writer works alone with no one to rely on. The story is intensifying and good job for the author for having this jewel novel.😊
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Its the best story I have read most importantly I want to say readers that its not a big deal for not writing proper English I support you author I don't care about your language but I am happy that you express your idea very well. U can use grammarly app if you want to but you don't need it any ways.THANKS for best story.
It is hard to find an author like you...I am happy that people like you exist not writing for gaining stones..I am very amazed to read the novel and I have no words to express the helpless way I was reading ...I spend more than 8 hrs in room just read your novel ..I was that much addicted even I stayed up till 3am .....The novel is really something which I was looking for the perfect balance of romance as well as mystery ....I just love it ...
I started reading this and got all confused on the sequence of the chapters. Where should I start reading? Why does it start at 180 something chapter? Where is chapter 1? I have seen comments asking but no one is responding to them which makes us all confused. Hope this can be resolved though I think this is a good novel.. Just don't know where to start.
Nice story but I can't understand what the hell author trying to do .all storey is messed up .I can't understand how to read this novel anymore . please be considerate of readers . thank you .😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗Hi!!! Glad I found this story😻😻😻😻Yahhhh!!!!!😆😆😆😆😆 is this novel any good????it seems to have so many good reviews🤔🤔🤔🤔the summary seems to make this story to be interesting😁😁😁😁😁maybe I'll give this a read once I've completed my other stories😘😘😘I am very interested... Ookay😳😳😳.....😋😋😋
I really like this novel..but please the writer,how come you don t come with some updates since 2months??we re all waiting for the next chapter 412 and till the end of the story..you can't let us wait and we don't even know the next released update.
This novel is very interesting i love it , great character's especially the FL and ML . Thank you author for this great story I'm waiting for the update every day
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I don't understand the story of their life😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮but maybe i will be interested later ........it's not short and not too long ..........i hope their story to become more and more interesting and will read until i become interested in it😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
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Author when next chapter 412-414 release?????? Where is the end chapter?????????????? Author are you hiatus??????????????????????????????????????????????????? ? ????????????????????
One of the amazing novels that never faltered to amaze me as I read through chapters to chapters. The sense of family, patriotism, and nationalism covered with love beyond power, greed, and rationality is all imbued on this one....never failed to capture one's reader mind into indulgence to seek more intriguing plots and scenes.👍👍😁😁😊😊 Kudos for the author on writing such well-depicted piece with efforts and love in writing.... I hoping for more chapters on this novel and wishing for the author lots of love and vigor to complete this one. A job well done and an additional bundle of applause from such amazing novel. LOVELOTS AND MORE POWER....💞💞💞💟💟
start was good, you keep looking for updates, but later thr was no development in the character. story makes you to catch ur own tail, novel is not complete since long time author has not updated any chapters
why the **** did he bring her with Himont mission to protect the president ? it's not like she's a part of special force team or something. Firstly, the goal she went to that special force in the first place is to learn how to defend herself not to kill or be a member of that team. Second, he asked her to sign agreement or something to monitor and investigate all his family's members. like hell< I don't understand anything here. > . what's the point of marry her in the first place? if his family has a rule that need to undergo training and pass it in order to become his wife, then why did u **** her until the original body owner died? why? Also, do u expect a university student major in jewel to pass all those kinds of thing in the first place? The way he treat her like a playthings to release his sexual things is quite terrible. He didn't treat her like a human being but playthings. Do u expect such a person to hold the position of captain of a special force??? Such a psycho??? Finally, What the **** did his family do exactly here? His grandmother controls nation economic while his grandfather holds the position of commander and he's the captain of special force and here the mission is to protect the president or what not..... Author tell me what do u want to write exactly here??? It's all mess up. I don't know about other comments cos they only mentioned grammar errors but I would like to mention about plots here. Could you please make good structure and set a specific goal or direction for your novel. You can not let MC run around and do things all over the places without direction or goal.
Author I hope that you are fine and I will wait for the updates plz plz plz come back soon 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
It was really good story but to bad there hasn't been any updates in a year now. Too bad I am crying. Oh well thanks anyway. Loved this story.
I really love the character of our fl. She's so cool. I hope she will give the ml a very hard time before she falls in love with him because he's such an asshole from the start.
What happened to the story..its been long time that it is not updated...i always check but no progress...what happened dear author to your story
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ why still don't have update.....author please don't drop this story and your story is quite interesting to read even though have some mistake which I don't care
Why always ML not love original owner of the body I feel very pitty novel is very good but lacking of something I can't tell what lacking of something FL lazy but their backround not understand I think have to read lot chapters then I can understand
Oh God FL is a genius plus lazy what combo but she her reincarnation is in miletry family cold husband but what is in his mind what FL past why her father give call for her she pass the test
good story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Love the book very much. I've never been a fan of Sci fi but I must say in this novel I'm quite enjoying it. I'm hoping things are winding up now coz we have gone round and round in circles and it's only now when loose ends seem to be tying up. Please hurry up and finish dear author, do not leave us in such suspense!
Afjfbb dhh qdb ah ah af haf hafbacbac ngsnag wg a aff g sg emeg w gne e w wjnt ek ehmhw wg meh m e m w mwmw.egm.wg.sgn gs sg sgmgwmw wgmngnwgess s snw a afvan g jsg jgaj agjvajqg
Nice story...I really like the FL character she very likable the ML is kinda hateful at first but gradually he redeem himself... although I skip many chapters because of lack power stone reading is was still satisfying 😉😉😉
The story is so overwhelming. The conflict and plots will ignited your curiosity and that is the one of the charms of this novel. We know that there are no perfect novel out there especially if the writer works alone with no one to rely on. The story is intensifying and good job for the author for having this jewel novel.😊
Zvsveg geg egeh dhrhqfjab ad djthfh sv arwww ngj tj tjatfshGvjtabdbmdvls c scjaf adaydwd scskca cacajcnfegjwkgw f snfaf wgbscsf ehegr titurh rhrhrhrhrhd hdhdh rh dh gjykfjd jd
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Its the best story I have read most importantly I want to say readers that its not a big deal for not writing proper English I support you author I don't care about your language but I am happy that you express your idea very well. U can use grammarly app if you want to but you don't need it any ways.THANKS for best story.
It is hard to find an author like you...I am happy that people like you exist not writing for gaining stones..I am very amazed to read the novel and I have no words to express the helpless way I was reading ...I spend more than 8 hrs in room just read your novel ..I was that much addicted even I stayed up till 3am .....The novel is really something which I was looking for the perfect balance of romance as well as mystery ....I just love it ...
I started reading this and got all confused on the sequence of the chapters. Where should I start reading? Why does it start at 180 something chapter? Where is chapter 1? I have seen comments asking but no one is responding to them which makes us all confused. Hope this can be resolved though I think this is a good novel.. Just don't know where to start.
Nice story but I can't understand what the hell author trying to do .all storey is messed up .I can't understand how to read this novel anymore . please be considerate of readers . thank you .😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗Hi!!! Glad I found this story😻😻😻😻Yahhhh!!!!!😆😆😆😆😆 is this novel any good????it seems to have so many good reviews🤔🤔🤔🤔the summary seems to make this story to be interesting😁😁😁😁😁maybe I'll give this a read once I've completed my other stories😘😘😘I am very interested... Ookay😳😳😳.....😋😋😋
I really like this novel..but please the writer,how come you don t come with some updates since 2months??we re all waiting for the next chapter 412 and till the end of the story..you can't let us wait and we don't even know the next released update.
This novel is very interesting i love it , great character's especially the FL and ML . Thank you author for this great story I'm waiting for the update every day
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I don't understand the story of their life😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮but maybe i will be interested later ........it's not short and not too long ..........i hope their story to become more and more interesting and will read until i become interested in it😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Ogegmsfnsfe fsjfwf efjwjfsce gefhebgs fenfsc efehgjefe gefw fwbef efjefkef ejsfeg gjeg egegje edbsg egnsgeg egjegnegneg rgbejrg gneg eheg rgrbr gdgjd bdbefr vrb
Author when next chapter 412-414 release?????? Where is the end chapter?????????????? Author are you hiatus??????????????????????????????????????????????????? ? ????????????????????
One of the amazing novels that never faltered to amaze me as I read through chapters to chapters. The sense of family, patriotism, and nationalism covered with love beyond power, greed, and rationality is all imbued on this one....never failed to capture one's reader mind into indulgence to seek more intriguing plots and scenes.👍👍😁😁😊😊 Kudos for the author on writing such well-depicted piece with efforts and love in writing.... I hoping for more chapters on this novel and wishing for the author lots of love and vigor to complete this one. A job well done and an additional bundle of applause from such amazing novel. LOVELOTS AND MORE POWER....💞💞💞💟💟
start was good, you keep looking for updates, but later thr was no development in the character. story makes you to catch ur own tail, novel is not complete since long time author has not updated any chapters