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3.72
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the novel has nothing to do with the villain tag. mc is brain disabled. he trusts everyone, his brain doesn't work, the novel is bad........................
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I dont usually leave negative reviews on original works but why would anyone read this if the author doesnt even make an effort with grammer, word choice and sentence structure. How hard is it to reread your capters? I understand missing errors here and there but when every other sentence doesnt make sense clearly you dont care about your story so why should I as the reader. Save your self some time and dont even give it a chance
This is not the novel I'm looking for. I have read and analyzed 1,2,61,62 chapters. In the beginning, he's like a loser, what I don't like, why complicate everything? Okay, maybe it'll get better. God warns him in a letter about the danger and tells him to show a good show, the latter tells us that he sees him as a toy and something must be done about it, of course, if he does not want to remain a loser until the end. And what's next? We see in 61.62 chapters that he builds relationships and gives items from other worlds to Eric. He does not make any plans and does not think about the consequences of his actions. Is he not aware of the situation on his territory (blockade) and his strength is not mentioned, which is there at all? In short, it did not get better.
Im hon a read because of synopsis. Sounds funny. looooooool. ...............................................................................
I would not recommend this novel, the world building is rrally lackluster and there is almost a total lack of charecter development for the main charecter much less thr different side charecters. Even cringy face slapping novels have more suspensful feelings than this novel. I would hope the author improves in any future works he or she decided to make.
The story is good and I recommend you8 read it. The grammer is not the best, but it is good enough not to be too hard to understand. 👍👍👍
Interesting story I like it so far . The writing quality is not to bad it is still understandable. So far the character building is not to bad we get to see their gradual development. I do recommend reading this story.
I dont know how i stumbled upon this novel but its really bad. Starting from messed up story developement, no world background, horrible characters to an angry author that cant take criticism and denies that he wrote some bullshit thats barely readable
just from the sypnosis I can clarify that this god literally murdered someone across the internet .̷̧̻̟͙͎͇͔̪͖͖̜̻͆̈́̃̆̾̏̐̓͆̇̒͌̀̒͜ͅ.̶̝̖̞̞̺̝̈́̂̍̀̔͐̆̍͊̊͋̕.̸͍̻̘̩͎̑̃̍̽̍̈̐͠͝.̷̢͖̦̩̤͙̞̮̭̰͍̯̜̏̊͋̈͗̈̂̈́̓̐̊̕͜ͅ.̶͓͔̘͗̂͗̎͐̈́͝.̷̡̛͎̫̼̼͉͔̮̯̹̗̳̱͋͗͐̊̕͘͝͠.̸̨̢̡̱͚̪̳̱͓̜͙̗͎̉̈͆̉͠.̴̳̖̥̣̦͕͚͌͜.̷͍́͌.̵̨̰̖͔͎̳̤͖̰͚̠̋͘.̶̢̨͓͕͔̪̩̼̂̉.̸̞̰͈̥͔̂̅͛̈́.̶̡̮̞̙̠̖̬̬̯̼̖͈͎̣̯̅̽̋̉͗̒͊͌̏̊̌̾͐͠.̴̡̧̛̮̜̜̲̫͖̖̺͔̼̇͑̈͐́̔̎̃̈.̶̡͉̹͇̳̜̟̪͎͖̦̖̼̩͝.̴̻̱͙͚͇͒͆̽̅́̄̍̓͗̽̃́̑̕͝.̴̺̬̀͌͆̎͋.̸̧̨̛̘̻̘͙͖͉̗͈̥̙͙̖̇̀̄̄̋͑͌́͘͘͝͝.̷͇̭̖̭͚͊́̌̅̀̽͊͒̃̅̚͠͝.̸̢̧̨̱͓̜̘̺̙̑̈̉̓̔̕.̸̰̗̗̰̮̟̆̒̍́̓̉̊͑̔̽̎̕.̷̖̦̇̈͑̃̍̎̄́̇̚͜.̶̢̭̳̘̥̈̍̈́̇.̵̛͓̪̤̖̩̳̙͂̅͑̾̄͋̅̌̍͂̈́͘͠͝.̶̧̠̝̭͎̟͚̯͚̦̾͐͗̈́̈̉̍͘͘͝ͅ.̷͕̙̲̺̟̦̣̜͍̬̼̿͋̋̎̈́͆̽̄̌̕͝.̸̨̡̢̹̳̻͕͚͓͛͐̕͜͝.̸̢̨̨͕̹̜̘̼̭̦̥͙̝̈͌͌̒͛͜.̵̥͓̝̱̳̰̟͌̄̎̊̑̊̔̓̕͝.̵̪͇͓̱̗͍̪͖͋̾̀̈́͛ͅ.̸̨̨̺̩̫̣̘̭̞͔̳̈́͑̌͋͋̽.̵̛̰̓̄͐̓.̸̙̎̌̐̐͠͝.̷̡̛̠͚͚̭̬̰͖͎̭̏̊͛͊̓̾̂̍̉͛͐͋͘.̸̧̢͉̠̇̓̊̋̿̓́͐͛͆́̏̚̚.̷̫̰̠͓͂̏͑̌̽.̴̩͆̿̌͒́̑̔͊͌̓̆̐͘͝.̶̝̩̥̼̪̆͋̄̋̆͋̔̽̾̌̇̚͝.̵̰͚̠̋̍.̶̡͍̭̼̗͉̤͓̝͕͍̣̱̟̒͂͆͌̐̿̕͘͘͠͠.̴̙̼̘̟̼̞͈̹̆̓͘͝ͅ.̴͖̠̙̝̥̗̥͈̓̂̿̚.̷̼̺̟̦̘̠͚̤̙͓͖͉̗̫̽̐͊̈́̄́̂̈͝.̴̧͕̞̻̌̓͐͗̂̄̎͛̋̈́͊̍͒͠.̵̛͈̻͎̰̠̑̀̏͐͊̑͛̆́̇͑͗͌͜.̵̨͚̞̻̥͉̪̲̣͕͎͊̓̽̈́̎͆̽̏̉̈́̕̕͜͜͠.̵̛͍͋͊̅́̓̉͊͊̀͝.̶̢̧̭͖͕͙̰̝̩̟͚̹͐̐̀͆̒͋̉̑͑͘.̵͚̖̯̠̘͕͔͈̖̘͖̯͕̉̂̾.̶̢̟̣̖͙͚͔̜̉͑̔́̓̂́̉̀̃̒̎ͅ.̷̛̖̹͕͈̜̯̮̭̈̌͑̊̊͒͒̃̚.̸̙͈̅͐̈́͂̓̿́̓̂͑̋͗͆.̸̤͙̓̾͂̾͘.̵̤̼͔̽͐̈́̒͆̍̀͛̚͠.̷̨͍̰̗͎̘̠͗̓̆̓̓́̀̈́͗̕̚̚͝.̴̨̢̛̟̭̫̫̫̅̐̊̇͋̽͌͌̾͜͠͝͝.̷͚̺̭̪̜̬̘̘̫̟̬͂̄͂̽̅̀̉̿̍̈́̂̾̌.̴̫͓̭͇̠̋̈ͅ.̸̧̧͕̫̝̤̮͔̫̽̒̀̊̈́̂͘͜ͅ.̷̺̼̎.̷̻̲̜̗͎͍̐̅̈́̆̌̂͂̽.̴̨͛̐̍̂͒̈́͆̅.̶̘̞̗̘͐̈̏̄̂̇̿͋̂͂̿͑.̴͚̻̫̜̙̫̜̣̙̻̾̾̀̏̎́͑͂̽͊̔͋͋̃͜͝.̵̧̧̠͚̺̦̱̟̱͎͑ͅͅ.̶͂͋̆̓̑͒͂̈́̅̕̚͘̚͜͝ͅ.̵̧̢̦͕̳͉̺͎̝̖̞͇͕͙̇̉̐̈́̏̈́̑́͊̓͜͠.̴̡̨̢͍̹̙̥̂͆͒̾͆̆̐͛͑̂̈́̚.̶̨̢͈̗̦̼̙̰̻̗̎̈̈.̷̧̻̩͔͎͖̭͉̼̻͍͓͆̽͊̃.̸̧͚̜̔̒̍́͒͂͋̕̚͝͝.̸͖̻̫̘̇́̊̈́̔͒̂̿͐̚͝.̶̢̲̦̹̰̦̘̗͖͇̄̎̌͑́͐̂̽͛͒͗͌̑̅̃.̶̰̞̥͓͇͑́̃̎̈̚͠.̵̡̭̲̳͈̺̻͙̣̃͊̐̑͂̈̿̾̾͠.̸̢͉̱̳̯͔̫͚̰̄̂͛̀̈́̓̈͋̉̔͒̋͘̚̚.̸̹̪͍̱̤̳̖̳̆̚͝ͅͅ.̶̨̛̝̠̱͇̖͍̮͓̝͂̏̌̾̓͐̊͆̂̿̇̏̚͜.̶͔̝̖̥̲̦̹̺̈́͋͗̄̈̓̃͠.̷̢̨̥̗̟̻̣̲̪̗̹̰̭̘̏̊͆͂͝͠.̷̢̢̡̙̬̝̭̳͋̍̓͋̾̈̈̉͘̚͠͠.̷͚̗̼̘͑̅̒̔͆̊͠.̵̨̛̗̦̘͖̟̲͓̗̣͍̦̼̔̽̇̉́͐̆͘͘͝ͅ.̵̛̰̪͍̝̙̘̪̯̱̪̈̿̿̃̒̑ͅͅ.̴͍̗̳̺͗̂̀.̶̰̾́͛̽͛̌̀̕͘.̵̢̹̼̰̪̠͎̺̗̄̽͒͊̏́́͌̆.̶̡̛͍̪̲̙̤͍̼̮̯͍̺̼̊̉͆̈́̅̅̏̓̈́̑̂͊̇.̵͚̹̦̱͖̝̮͈͖͖̓.̵̢̨̼͕͈̤͔͓͋̎̈́̍̓͠.̸̨̪̝͙͚̣͉͍̝̳̳̭̈́̒̒̈́.̶̮͙̇̚ͅ.̶̦̟̗̘̳͕̯̘̙̱̝̏̆͑̆̎̚͠͝͝͝͝͠͝.̴̡̡͚̜͕̦͇̹̟̺̪̹͈͖̋̉̇͑̑́͛̔̾̍͗͌͒̕.̷̠̗̲̭͈̞̥̉̎́͆̂.̶̢͖̫̞̗͓͍̻̮̮̥̇̄̈̅̌͋̓͒̚.̷̛̬̳̲̝͙͇̝͙̗̗͇̝͆.̶̧̛̼̪͍̤͎̫͙͍̺̭̥̯̬͗͂̈́̇̾̄̚͝͝͝.̶̨̨͍̗̝͈̠̞͍̻̠̹̤̄͛̊͆ͅ.̴̡͎̙͉̲̗͒.̸̤͂̌͑̆̀̇͛̇̎̿͘͝.̶͈͖̻̳̲̻͗̈̏͋̃̓͗͐́̆̂ͅͅ.̷̛̛͍͖̥̃͊͆̆̅̒̒̏͝.̷̡̗̦̟̗̱̠̗͕͉̬̝̱͆̇̎͜͝.̷̗͙̯̄̈̅̈͆̅̔̊̓̂͊̏̓̈.̴̢͔̺̩̩̦̠̳̘̒́͗͐̐́̔̇̚͘͜͜.̴̧̝͈̹̖̰̪̳̑̅̈́͌͒̌̃͘.̶͖̗͚͍͊͗̌.̶͙̿̅̔̏̉̉̃̌͒̊̀̌̃.̸̢͚̫̩̯̩̪͕̤̣̤̠̊.̵̢̡͓̖̳̟̮̘͔̱͆͛͛͊̈̃̄̄̊̑͝.̶̨͚͚̙͇̖̮̙̱̖͉̬͑́͑̋̿͋̓̕͜.̷̟̩̗̝̫̪͓̖͌̃.̵̝̠̤̗̞͇̝̭̗̱̣̈̈́ͅ.̴̡̧̠̬̺͖̙͖͚̳͈͕͕̞̒ͅ.̴̢̢̫̘̺͓͉̘̥̮̮̲͍͍̟͝.̵̟̪̮̟̲̩͎̦͔̦̫̲̫͈̏͆.̴̢̢̢̼̺͚͎͉̠̳̩̘̜̬̰̀̌̑̄̄̈́̿̂̈͝͝.̴̡̢͍͓̼̗̞͎̪͕̯͛̿̔̽̈́̎.̴̛̥͉̗̠͎͒͌͐͜
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Eh, good idea bad execution. The Writing quality is fine it's readable so 5 stars. Stability of updates is another 5 star for it being consistent. Story development is going to be 3 star's mostly because of it being rushed. Character Design is gonna be a 1 star because of shallow side characters,semi-beta-idiotic MC, and worst of all no character logic. World Background is another 1 star because of NO common sense,potholes,logic, and whats worst of all is that the MC has an upgraded plot armor/ luck. Other than that its a ok read, if the author could fix up the Character's and Background this would be a very good read and if you wanna learn how to just read "Start by becoming a Mangaka". Peace ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Worldbuilding is pretty good, MC does get great treasures and powers along the way and while they are interesting they're never super OP, where he's beating guys multiple realms above him. This happens once early in the novel, but you can actually see the growth of the author as he adjusts this treasure to give a good but not overwhelming advantage against geniuses, who in turn have their own OP cheat. The OP items usually also have drawbacks to balance them out. Other characters are okay, nothing special. They generally have their own goals though it does feel like the whole world revolves around the MC. Unfortunately we do have some word count padding with the multiple opinions and reactions POV common to Chinese LN. We also get the generic sect politics and the fight-train-fight routine. But there are almost no immersion destroying moments and MC never goes full retard. Recommended if you are craving a dose of wish fulfillment LN.
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This world is set on easy mode. There is no strife for the MC. He has money, the system and if there is a need for anything then magically it appears with no repercussions
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its good but has a lot of confusion in it... iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Thys is ****! MC & Plot armore & luck on evry step. Its to simple. ................................................................................
Overall I'll give you 4.2 stars. All the very best. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😩😩😩😩😩😵😵😵😵😵😵😵🤯( I don't have more words, but 140 characters is too much😡)
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the novel has nothing to do with the villain tag. mc is brain disabled. he trusts everyone, his brain doesn't work, the novel is bad........................
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I dont usually leave negative reviews on original works but why would anyone read this if the author doesnt even make an effort with grammer, word choice and sentence structure. How hard is it to reread your capters? I understand missing errors here and there but when every other sentence doesnt make sense clearly you dont care about your story so why should I as the reader. Save your self some time and dont even give it a chance
This is not the novel I'm looking for. I have read and analyzed 1,2,61,62 chapters. In the beginning, he's like a loser, what I don't like, why complicate everything? Okay, maybe it'll get better. God warns him in a letter about the danger and tells him to show a good show, the latter tells us that he sees him as a toy and something must be done about it, of course, if he does not want to remain a loser until the end. And what's next? We see in 61.62 chapters that he builds relationships and gives items from other worlds to Eric. He does not make any plans and does not think about the consequences of his actions. Is he not aware of the situation on his territory (blockade) and his strength is not mentioned, which is there at all? In short, it did not get better.
Im hon a read because of synopsis. Sounds funny. looooooool. ...............................................................................
I would not recommend this novel, the world building is rrally lackluster and there is almost a total lack of charecter development for the main charecter much less thr different side charecters. Even cringy face slapping novels have more suspensful feelings than this novel. I would hope the author improves in any future works he or she decided to make.
The story is good and I recommend you8 read it. The grammer is not the best, but it is good enough not to be too hard to understand. 👍👍👍
Interesting story I like it so far . The writing quality is not to bad it is still understandable. So far the character building is not to bad we get to see their gradual development. I do recommend reading this story.
I dont know how i stumbled upon this novel but its really bad. Starting from messed up story developement, no world background, horrible characters to an angry author that cant take criticism and denies that he wrote some bullshit thats barely readable
just from the sypnosis I can clarify that this god literally murdered someone across the internet .̷̧̻̟͙͎͇͔̪͖͖̜̻͆̈́̃̆̾̏̐̓͆̇̒͌̀̒͜ͅ.̶̝̖̞̞̺̝̈́̂̍̀̔͐̆̍͊̊͋̕.̸͍̻̘̩͎̑̃̍̽̍̈̐͠͝.̷̢͖̦̩̤͙̞̮̭̰͍̯̜̏̊͋̈͗̈̂̈́̓̐̊̕͜ͅ.̶͓͔̘͗̂͗̎͐̈́͝.̷̡̛͎̫̼̼͉͔̮̯̹̗̳̱͋͗͐̊̕͘͝͠.̸̨̢̡̱͚̪̳̱͓̜͙̗͎̉̈͆̉͠.̴̳̖̥̣̦͕͚͌͜.̷͍́͌.̵̨̰̖͔͎̳̤͖̰͚̠̋͘.̶̢̨͓͕͔̪̩̼̂̉.̸̞̰͈̥͔̂̅͛̈́.̶̡̮̞̙̠̖̬̬̯̼̖͈͎̣̯̅̽̋̉͗̒͊͌̏̊̌̾͐͠.̴̡̧̛̮̜̜̲̫͖̖̺͔̼̇͑̈͐́̔̎̃̈.̶̡͉̹͇̳̜̟̪͎͖̦̖̼̩͝.̴̻̱͙͚͇͒͆̽̅́̄̍̓͗̽̃́̑̕͝.̴̺̬̀͌͆̎͋.̸̧̨̛̘̻̘͙͖͉̗͈̥̙͙̖̇̀̄̄̋͑͌́͘͘͝͝.̷͇̭̖̭͚͊́̌̅̀̽͊͒̃̅̚͠͝.̸̢̧̨̱͓̜̘̺̙̑̈̉̓̔̕.̸̰̗̗̰̮̟̆̒̍́̓̉̊͑̔̽̎̕.̷̖̦̇̈͑̃̍̎̄́̇̚͜.̶̢̭̳̘̥̈̍̈́̇.̵̛͓̪̤̖̩̳̙͂̅͑̾̄͋̅̌̍͂̈́͘͠͝.̶̧̠̝̭͎̟͚̯͚̦̾͐͗̈́̈̉̍͘͘͝ͅ.̷͕̙̲̺̟̦̣̜͍̬̼̿͋̋̎̈́͆̽̄̌̕͝.̸̨̡̢̹̳̻͕͚͓͛͐̕͜͝.̸̢̨̨͕̹̜̘̼̭̦̥͙̝̈͌͌̒͛͜.̵̥͓̝̱̳̰̟͌̄̎̊̑̊̔̓̕͝.̵̪͇͓̱̗͍̪͖͋̾̀̈́͛ͅ.̸̨̨̺̩̫̣̘̭̞͔̳̈́͑̌͋͋̽.̵̛̰̓̄͐̓.̸̙̎̌̐̐͠͝.̷̡̛̠͚͚̭̬̰͖͎̭̏̊͛͊̓̾̂̍̉͛͐͋͘.̸̧̢͉̠̇̓̊̋̿̓́͐͛͆́̏̚̚.̷̫̰̠͓͂̏͑̌̽.̴̩͆̿̌͒́̑̔͊͌̓̆̐͘͝.̶̝̩̥̼̪̆͋̄̋̆͋̔̽̾̌̇̚͝.̵̰͚̠̋̍.̶̡͍̭̼̗͉̤͓̝͕͍̣̱̟̒͂͆͌̐̿̕͘͘͠͠.̴̙̼̘̟̼̞͈̹̆̓͘͝ͅ.̴͖̠̙̝̥̗̥͈̓̂̿̚.̷̼̺̟̦̘̠͚̤̙͓͖͉̗̫̽̐͊̈́̄́̂̈͝.̴̧͕̞̻̌̓͐͗̂̄̎͛̋̈́͊̍͒͠.̵̛͈̻͎̰̠̑̀̏͐͊̑͛̆́̇͑͗͌͜.̵̨͚̞̻̥͉̪̲̣͕͎͊̓̽̈́̎͆̽̏̉̈́̕̕͜͜͠.̵̛͍͋͊̅́̓̉͊͊̀͝.̶̢̧̭͖͕͙̰̝̩̟͚̹͐̐̀͆̒͋̉̑͑͘.̵͚̖̯̠̘͕͔͈̖̘͖̯͕̉̂̾.̶̢̟̣̖͙͚͔̜̉͑̔́̓̂́̉̀̃̒̎ͅ.̷̛̖̹͕͈̜̯̮̭̈̌͑̊̊͒͒̃̚.̸̙͈̅͐̈́͂̓̿́̓̂͑̋͗͆.̸̤͙̓̾͂̾͘.̵̤̼͔̽͐̈́̒͆̍̀͛̚͠.̷̨͍̰̗͎̘̠͗̓̆̓̓́̀̈́͗̕̚̚͝.̴̨̢̛̟̭̫̫̫̅̐̊̇͋̽͌͌̾͜͠͝͝.̷͚̺̭̪̜̬̘̘̫̟̬͂̄͂̽̅̀̉̿̍̈́̂̾̌.̴̫͓̭͇̠̋̈ͅ.̸̧̧͕̫̝̤̮͔̫̽̒̀̊̈́̂͘͜ͅ.̷̺̼̎.̷̻̲̜̗͎͍̐̅̈́̆̌̂͂̽.̴̨͛̐̍̂͒̈́͆̅.̶̘̞̗̘͐̈̏̄̂̇̿͋̂͂̿͑.̴͚̻̫̜̙̫̜̣̙̻̾̾̀̏̎́͑͂̽͊̔͋͋̃͜͝.̵̧̧̠͚̺̦̱̟̱͎͑ͅͅ.̶͂͋̆̓̑͒͂̈́̅̕̚͘̚͜͝ͅ.̵̧̢̦͕̳͉̺͎̝̖̞͇͕͙̇̉̐̈́̏̈́̑́͊̓͜͠.̴̡̨̢͍̹̙̥̂͆͒̾͆̆̐͛͑̂̈́̚.̶̨̢͈̗̦̼̙̰̻̗̎̈̈.̷̧̻̩͔͎͖̭͉̼̻͍͓͆̽͊̃.̸̧͚̜̔̒̍́͒͂͋̕̚͝͝.̸͖̻̫̘̇́̊̈́̔͒̂̿͐̚͝.̶̢̲̦̹̰̦̘̗͖͇̄̎̌͑́͐̂̽͛͒͗͌̑̅̃.̶̰̞̥͓͇͑́̃̎̈̚͠.̵̡̭̲̳͈̺̻͙̣̃͊̐̑͂̈̿̾̾͠.̸̢͉̱̳̯͔̫͚̰̄̂͛̀̈́̓̈͋̉̔͒̋͘̚̚.̸̹̪͍̱̤̳̖̳̆̚͝ͅͅ.̶̨̛̝̠̱͇̖͍̮͓̝͂̏̌̾̓͐̊͆̂̿̇̏̚͜.̶͔̝̖̥̲̦̹̺̈́͋͗̄̈̓̃͠.̷̢̨̥̗̟̻̣̲̪̗̹̰̭̘̏̊͆͂͝͠.̷̢̢̡̙̬̝̭̳͋̍̓͋̾̈̈̉͘̚͠͠.̷͚̗̼̘͑̅̒̔͆̊͠.̵̨̛̗̦̘͖̟̲͓̗̣͍̦̼̔̽̇̉́͐̆͘͘͝ͅ.̵̛̰̪͍̝̙̘̪̯̱̪̈̿̿̃̒̑ͅͅ.̴͍̗̳̺͗̂̀.̶̰̾́͛̽͛̌̀̕͘.̵̢̹̼̰̪̠͎̺̗̄̽͒͊̏́́͌̆.̶̡̛͍̪̲̙̤͍̼̮̯͍̺̼̊̉͆̈́̅̅̏̓̈́̑̂͊̇.̵͚̹̦̱͖̝̮͈͖͖̓.̵̢̨̼͕͈̤͔͓͋̎̈́̍̓͠.̸̨̪̝͙͚̣͉͍̝̳̳̭̈́̒̒̈́.̶̮͙̇̚ͅ.̶̦̟̗̘̳͕̯̘̙̱̝̏̆͑̆̎̚͠͝͝͝͝͠͝.̴̡̡͚̜͕̦͇̹̟̺̪̹͈͖̋̉̇͑̑́͛̔̾̍͗͌͒̕.̷̠̗̲̭͈̞̥̉̎́͆̂.̶̢͖̫̞̗͓͍̻̮̮̥̇̄̈̅̌͋̓͒̚.̷̛̬̳̲̝͙͇̝͙̗̗͇̝͆.̶̧̛̼̪͍̤͎̫͙͍̺̭̥̯̬͗͂̈́̇̾̄̚͝͝͝.̶̨̨͍̗̝͈̠̞͍̻̠̹̤̄͛̊͆ͅ.̴̡͎̙͉̲̗͒.̸̤͂̌͑̆̀̇͛̇̎̿͘͝.̶͈͖̻̳̲̻͗̈̏͋̃̓͗͐́̆̂ͅͅ.̷̛̛͍͖̥̃͊͆̆̅̒̒̏͝.̷̡̗̦̟̗̱̠̗͕͉̬̝̱͆̇̎͜͝.̷̗͙̯̄̈̅̈͆̅̔̊̓̂͊̏̓̈.̴̢͔̺̩̩̦̠̳̘̒́͗͐̐́̔̇̚͘͜͜.̴̧̝͈̹̖̰̪̳̑̅̈́͌͒̌̃͘.̶͖̗͚͍͊͗̌.̶͙̿̅̔̏̉̉̃̌͒̊̀̌̃.̸̢͚̫̩̯̩̪͕̤̣̤̠̊.̵̢̡͓̖̳̟̮̘͔̱͆͛͛͊̈̃̄̄̊̑͝.̶̨͚͚̙͇̖̮̙̱̖͉̬͑́͑̋̿͋̓̕͜.̷̟̩̗̝̫̪͓̖͌̃.̵̝̠̤̗̞͇̝̭̗̱̣̈̈́ͅ.̴̡̧̠̬̺͖̙͖͚̳͈͕͕̞̒ͅ.̴̢̢̫̘̺͓͉̘̥̮̮̲͍͍̟͝.̵̟̪̮̟̲̩͎̦͔̦̫̲̫͈̏͆.̴̢̢̢̼̺͚͎͉̠̳̩̘̜̬̰̀̌̑̄̄̈́̿̂̈͝͝.̴̡̢͍͓̼̗̞͎̪͕̯͛̿̔̽̈́̎.̴̛̥͉̗̠͎͒͌͐͜
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It’s okay..........................................................................................................................................
Eh, good idea bad execution. The Writing quality is fine it's readable so 5 stars. Stability of updates is another 5 star for it being consistent. Story development is going to be 3 star's mostly because of it being rushed. Character Design is gonna be a 1 star because of shallow side characters,semi-beta-idiotic MC, and worst of all no character logic. World Background is another 1 star because of NO common sense,potholes,logic, and whats worst of all is that the MC has an upgraded plot armor/ luck. Other than that its a ok read, if the author could fix up the Character's and Background this would be a very good read and if you wanna learn how to just read "Start by becoming a Mangaka". Peace ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Yeah boy ya' got some more??? When will ya' come back??Yeah boy ya' got some more??? When will ya' come back??Yeah boy ya' got some more??? When will ya' come back??Yeah boy ya' got some more??? When will ya' come back??
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Worldbuilding is pretty good, MC does get great treasures and powers along the way and while they are interesting they're never super OP, where he's beating guys multiple realms above him. This happens once early in the novel, but you can actually see the growth of the author as he adjusts this treasure to give a good but not overwhelming advantage against geniuses, who in turn have their own OP cheat. The OP items usually also have drawbacks to balance them out. Other characters are okay, nothing special. They generally have their own goals though it does feel like the whole world revolves around the MC. Unfortunately we do have some word count padding with the multiple opinions and reactions POV common to Chinese LN. We also get the generic sect politics and the fight-train-fight routine. But there are almost no immersion destroying moments and MC never goes full retard. Recommended if you are craving a dose of wish fulfillment LN.
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This world is set on easy mode. There is no strife for the MC. He has money, the system and if there is a need for anything then magically it appears with no repercussions
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ its good but has a lot of confusion in it... iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Thys is ****! MC & Plot armore & luck on evry step. Its to simple. ................................................................................
Overall I'll give you 4.2 stars. All the very best. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😩😩😩😩😩😵😵😵😵😵😵😵🤯( I don't have more words, but 140 characters is too much😡)
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