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บท 5: mother /1

the light was very strong that the little child couldn't help but to close his eyes

but after sometimes feeling that his eyes could be open

the child open his eyes quickly and what he sees make him believe that he enter the haven

because what was in front of the child an exquisite view, a place fouled by different colored flowers everywhere you can see flowers, the smell of this place makes you fly from happiness, and

with the sound of a small running river, It becomes the perfect heaven to everyone,

when anyone sees this view will wish that they can stay here forever, the word beautiful will lose its effects in front of these views

in the middle of this imaginary garden, stand a beautiful woman wearing a red dress, a long black hair flying back and front because of the air

the child move toward the woman to ask her where this place, but just moved the woman in the red move her head in his direction and no one knew why the woman in red when she sees him started to cry

hearing the sound of women cry, the child harts become uncomfortable and the more he listens to this voice his heart feeling becomes unstable and tears flow

a little child and a middle-aged woman stained in front of each other and crying

after sometimes

the child asked " why are you crying, can you stop, I don't know why but seeing you crying makes me sad "

trying to stop her tears the woman in red

with a happy voice said, "its happiness tears, seeing you after waiting a long time, you become so big, you even have my eyes, but your face looks like him, anyway with my eyes I still beat him, so I am the big winner haha ".

the child stop hearing after the word 'have my eyes ' the woman who for years want to see her, the woman who always comes to his dreams but no matter what he can't see her face

"m , m , mother, " said the child while hugging the woman in red and at the same time crying

this word finally comes from his mouth, before he was jealous of other children who can call for their mother and go out with their mother but today he can see his mother

today he can be happy for the first time in his life

today he has a mother

no one will take her away from me

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halo everyone

I will start to write again and with the help of an editor

I hope you like my novel

if you find anything wing please tell me

with your help, I will make this novel the best


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