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4.38

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Felthat
LV 15 Badge

The story starts out well, and just devolves into a mess once the main character leaves the first area. MC going to random places with no explanation, countries out of nowhere, areas from earth appearing, AI's all around. It feel like you played a demo for a fantasy game and then downloaded the real thing only to find it's a space adventure. Or maybe it's the translation that leads me to think that way. Speaking of translation, this reads like a machine translation that forgot that commas are a thing. World building is decent, though lacking on a feel for the politics and relative strengths of the various sects, characters are your typical wuxia fair, arrogant young masters, useless women, mentally deficient MC, pets named little ....., Etc. Overall I give it 3 stars, though it could be 4 if the translation and editing were to be overhauled.

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
endri_dushi

Is a nice start with a nice plot but everythimg need to be writen in a more funny way since is a fantasy since we all like to have a little fantasy whsn we read

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

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5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

Great novel !! keep the good work. ........................................................................................................................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
matasean

thanks for new update......................................................................................................................................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lazyman
LV 11 Badge

Güzel bir bölümdü. .... . ......... .........................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

Please update more!!! I wish the updates came out at a faster pace. I’m all excited every time I see and update, but sad because I read them so fast.

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

Great novel !! keep the good work. ........................................................................................................................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Esperto02

Moron if you are alive fucking update this novel lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll#######

5yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
jayare
LV 13 Badge

Please update more!!! I wish the updates came out at a faster pace. I’m all excited every time I see and update, but sad because I read them so fast.

6yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
demioch

Needs more info more story better translation and a longer story relatively speaking so far if thats the ending it's terrible and hes got 3 or more people waiting on him so need to make more chapters

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Brian371

I fucking wait in wattpad for the next 40+ chapters Then here its 80+ Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyshss yahabwhw wuuahabababajajaj Is it over 140 yet Ahwhwgsushzx Whyhyyyyyyywywhwywhwywhwywgw

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Li_Xiao_Xiao

He's gonna start doing regular updates now, for more info go to his discord, the reason he stopped for a little was because an accident happened or something

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
webnovel_ancestor

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 author why the update stability is getting worse day-by-day😢😢😢😢😢😢😢..........f*ck this 140 character's limit.......Still not enough

6yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
webnovel_ancestor

This story has fallen from top 20 to top 60 please improve the update rate otherwise Add some bonus chapters........this 140 characters limit ........**** it

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ashwatthama

Nice keep up buddy , Story good Just make sure to make him arrive at a level or go in a direction which no one have ever walk ok Make him strong

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
OnePandaLord

Love it! Thanks for your hard work, keep it up! Love dis story! Love it! 🐧👍💯

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Tired_Eyes

Death God System is an enjoyable read in my opinion. I love the idea so far but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't worried. I really hope this book differs from the norm. Rather than a ****** OP main character like usual, I'd like to see more of a death god character. As of now everything's good, I'm just worried it'll change in the future. Just my opinion though, others might prefer a ****** OP character

6yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
webnovel_ancestor

Please don't drop or give an unnatural, incomplete, terrible, stupid ending...............................................😎 140 character limit 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

6yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
SubtomicLine80

Hmmm 1.Great book 2.Great author 3.I want bonus chapters 4.i adore this book that is why this review exists filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun

6yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
KrFC
LV 13 Badge

Keep up your good work Live the development od story and characters overall. Dont overwork please. Cant ,...................

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Vsntiroe

Great novel!! It will be top 1 one day ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

6yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Croaker
LV 15

This is a good novel with a lot of potential. I recommend reading this one with the others out there. They story is progressive but can be slow at times. Worth reading!

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
NoNameP

Great novel, i hope yoou continue like that, i'm loving this novel <3 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SilverEmpyrean

wow this is a gem! something you dont want to miss! sat on one spot and read 50 chapters in one! give it until chapter 15 to 20, see how you feel about it

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Otakusalem

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6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ilovecarbs

Very interesting story mc gets to have a personality of his own driven by characters around him. Would like the author to get a editor though

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Edric
LV 6 Badge

As of chapter 67 Interesting story, it's simplistic, but there are several plots being worked that gives a certain depth to it anyway. The language is reasonably good, but still are certain mistakes and fluidity errors, however it isn't nothing that can't be understood. The world so far isn't exactly clear, but it has been nicely developed in the last few chapters, In resume, I have high hopes for the future development. Anyway, I'm not an expert in any form, so take whatever I say with at least a grain of salt.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
InsaneBeast303

I like it so far, hope it isn't like ELCL (too much "comedy" for me). Also, does the MC effect plants? It wasn't mentioned. 140 characters!!

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoMaster123

The synopsis is kind of movie trailer cringe, I'd change it up to copy others. The world needs more detail to give it life. Other than that it looks like a mainstream story that'll have a fanbase.

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Felthat
LV 15 Badge

The story starts out well, and just devolves into a mess once the main character leaves the first area. MC going to random places with no explanation, countries out of nowhere, areas from earth appearing, AI's all around. It feel like you played a demo for a fantasy game and then downloaded the real thing only to find it's a space adventure. Or maybe it's the translation that leads me to think that way. Speaking of translation, this reads like a machine translation that forgot that commas are a thing. World building is decent, though lacking on a feel for the politics and relative strengths of the various sects, characters are your typical wuxia fair, arrogant young masters, useless women, mentally deficient MC, pets named little ....., Etc. Overall I give it 3 stars, though it could be 4 if the translation and editing were to be overhauled.

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
endri_dushi

Is a nice start with a nice plot but everythimg need to be writen in a more funny way since is a fantasy since we all like to have a little fantasy whsn we read

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

Great novel !! keep the good work. ........................................................................................................................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
matasean

thanks for new update......................................................................................................................................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lazyman
LV 11 Badge

Güzel bir bölümdü. .... . ......... .........................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

Please update more!!! I wish the updates came out at a faster pace. I’m all excited every time I see and update, but sad because I read them so fast.

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TonhaoSpawn

Great novel !! keep the good work. ........................................................................................................................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Esperto02

Moron if you are alive fucking update this novel lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll#######

5yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
jayare
LV 13 Badge

Please update more!!! I wish the updates came out at a faster pace. I’m all excited every time I see and update, but sad because I read them so fast.

6yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
demioch

Needs more info more story better translation and a longer story relatively speaking so far if thats the ending it's terrible and hes got 3 or more people waiting on him so need to make more chapters

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Brian371

I fucking wait in wattpad for the next 40+ chapters Then here its 80+ Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyshss yahabwhw wuuahabababajajaj Is it over 140 yet Ahwhwgsushzx Whyhyyyyyyywywhwywhwywhwywgw

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Li_Xiao_Xiao

He's gonna start doing regular updates now, for more info go to his discord, the reason he stopped for a little was because an accident happened or something

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
webnovel_ancestor

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 author why the update stability is getting worse day-by-day😢😢😢😢😢😢😢..........f*ck this 140 character's limit.......Still not enough

6yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
webnovel_ancestor

This story has fallen from top 20 to top 60 please improve the update rate otherwise Add some bonus chapters........this 140 characters limit ........**** it

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ashwatthama

Nice keep up buddy , Story good Just make sure to make him arrive at a level or go in a direction which no one have ever walk ok Make him strong

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
OnePandaLord

Love it! Thanks for your hard work, keep it up! Love dis story! Love it! 🐧👍💯

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Tired_Eyes

Death God System is an enjoyable read in my opinion. I love the idea so far but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't worried. I really hope this book differs from the norm. Rather than a ****** OP main character like usual, I'd like to see more of a death god character. As of now everything's good, I'm just worried it'll change in the future. Just my opinion though, others might prefer a ****** OP character

6yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
webnovel_ancestor

Please don't drop or give an unnatural, incomplete, terrible, stupid ending...............................................😎 140 character limit 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

6yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
SubtomicLine80

Hmmm 1.Great book 2.Great author 3.I want bonus chapters 4.i adore this book that is why this review exists filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun

6yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
KrFC
LV 13 Badge

Keep up your good work Live the development od story and characters overall. Dont overwork please. Cant ,...................

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Vsntiroe

Great novel!! It will be top 1 one day ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

6yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Croaker
LV 15

This is a good novel with a lot of potential. I recommend reading this one with the others out there. They story is progressive but can be slow at times. Worth reading!

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
NoNameP

Great novel, i hope yoou continue like that, i'm loving this novel <3 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SilverEmpyrean

wow this is a gem! something you dont want to miss! sat on one spot and read 50 chapters in one! give it until chapter 15 to 20, see how you feel about it

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Otakusalem

Nice😄😄😄👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ilovecarbs

Very interesting story mc gets to have a personality of his own driven by characters around him. Would like the author to get a editor though

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Edric
LV 6 Badge

As of chapter 67 Interesting story, it's simplistic, but there are several plots being worked that gives a certain depth to it anyway. The language is reasonably good, but still are certain mistakes and fluidity errors, however it isn't nothing that can't be understood. The world so far isn't exactly clear, but it has been nicely developed in the last few chapters, In resume, I have high hopes for the future development. Anyway, I'm not an expert in any form, so take whatever I say with at least a grain of salt.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
InsaneBeast303

I like it so far, hope it isn't like ELCL (too much "comedy" for me). Also, does the MC effect plants? It wasn't mentioned. 140 characters!!

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoMaster123

The synopsis is kind of movie trailer cringe, I'd change it up to copy others. The world needs more detail to give it life. Other than that it looks like a mainstream story that'll have a fanbase.

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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