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4.04
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Nice buh you should complete the story you should also change your style of writing.i love your description style but sometimes it seems repetitive
Nice writing............,....................................... ........................ More episodes to read...... ..................
Wow!!!! I'm loving this story already. I can't wait to see how the young master meets yue and I can't stop imagining how they will both fall in love. Thank you author
Wow!!!! I'm loving this story already. I can't wait to see how the young master meets yue and I can't stop imagining how they will both fall in love. Thank you author
The language facility of the writer is flawless on the other hand the development of the story is dragging.The characters just revolve around the same plot over and over again that it seems they are stuck in a particular world disconnected to many.
Good description of each scene...keep it up...... Kudos to the writer, job well done................................................................. ...... ....
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
This story is stolen, as is, I suspect, every story on this author's profile, including one of my stories. Do not give this thief a moment of your time.
Old but Gold...!!! Sure the old literature makes it more harder to read, since it use old grammar or old style for telling stories and old way to pronounces the dialogue. But the story progress was great.
Just cane across this haven't read yet but hoping it Will be intriguing, romantic, lots of face slapping, revenge, betrayal and fun. I kinda like the title already... Just hope I won't be disappointed. Well done author and translator
This is a complete revelation of what happens in life. Most kids are introduced into stuffs they are not ready for without their knowledge. I feel sorry for teenagers these days. Well done author for the exposure of things...
This is a complete revelation of what happens in life. Most kids are introduced into stuffs they are not ready for without their knowledge. I feel sorry for teenagers these days. Well done author for the exposure of things...
Dear author and translator...please update if you have a time....more chapters please...🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
M o r e p l e a s e ..........🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ More update please.......🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Thank you my dear translator.. Update as soon as possible author.. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
I’m so glad to finally have more chapters. I’ve been waiting to see if Charlie, and Ellen would unite again. And now that the Aunt is involved in the situation it’s even more orgies to read about.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
ok. nice story,...... it is so soooo. good for those open minded people like me. yet why are there no updates.???? it's been 2 or 3 months already 😅 can you pls. continue this novel please.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
This book is lit fam! The author sure knows what they are talking about and it's actually very educational when it comes to Sex. I have never been so engrossedin a story and I couldn't put it down. However it may be a little inappropriate.
Amazing this is...the words, the way of writing and all. Language used is also quite good. 🔥🔥😍😍😍I loved this fiction, it is just really fantastic
Although the author is anonymous, you have done a great job, what I would really like to get out there is please make a stable update schedule,by the way I love your grammar it's just PERFECT 😍😍😍😍
If u are bored and u don't kw what to do but love romance stories try did it is really bad, and hell I let leave the rest for another dayhhhhhhhhgdfkkffdo DJ do so do so do do Co do so do
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
The story is very challenging to read imagining the real situation does it really existed in real life. So painful full of guilt. However the next Chapter is long awaited to be updated. Looking forward for it.
The story quite wonderful because there are also things that expressed in a quite extravagant mode. It encourages to go through the Chapters because it made me half baked if I will miss the things that might happen in the next chapters.
It's just awesome. Love to read it's all chapters. Turning out more sensual in further chapters. Hope to get more than that in later ones. Can't wait more.
Excellent read.. I'll keep coming back. Although some of the stories are difficult to handle(like *** with siblings) I guess it's happens in some part of the world.. Good work n very interesting read.
Awesome................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm really surprised to find it here. I think this is the best erotic novel ever written, by the popular erotic author "Anonymous" (I'm his biggest fan). Except for zoophilia, this book has it all: ****** (in all it's varieties), adults with minors, gay (both), **, orgies, etc. It's well written, exciting and it has little repetition. A masterpiece
Keep an open mind because it's really exciting and different. The main character is definitely the most amusing. It also very stimulating so be careful where you read. I really like it so far and can't wait for more but I might just be a pervert 😋
dear author,, as you know ROMANCE story pertain to intimacy of man & woman hope since i pick this story we parents wish to adopt in the world you are creating in this novel. makes us inlove w our husband, dream with your world & let us inspire to fell inlove w/ our partners eorship their being in the real world....my old friend whose her partnerbis gone for a decade was still inspire to read ROMANCE novel maybe they could remember their partners when they sre still alive it makes them lively & forget their illness when they could read intimate moment
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Very very interesting and fascinating, educating, enlighten, arousing , I love all coded titles used in the novel very great , understandable simple and lovely. A job well done to the writter and looking forward to read the next available chapters thanks.
Nice buh you should complete the story you should also change your style of writing.i love your description style but sometimes it seems repetitive
Nice writing............,....................................... ........................ More episodes to read...... ..................
Wow!!!! I'm loving this story already. I can't wait to see how the young master meets yue and I can't stop imagining how they will both fall in love. Thank you author
Wow!!!! I'm loving this story already. I can't wait to see how the young master meets yue and I can't stop imagining how they will both fall in love. Thank you author
The language facility of the writer is flawless on the other hand the development of the story is dragging.The characters just revolve around the same plot over and over again that it seems they are stuck in a particular world disconnected to many.
Good description of each scene...keep it up...... Kudos to the writer, job well done................................................................. ...... ....
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This story is stolen, as is, I suspect, every story on this author's profile, including one of my stories. Do not give this thief a moment of your time.
Old but Gold...!!! Sure the old literature makes it more harder to read, since it use old grammar or old style for telling stories and old way to pronounces the dialogue. But the story progress was great.
Just cane across this haven't read yet but hoping it Will be intriguing, romantic, lots of face slapping, revenge, betrayal and fun. I kinda like the title already... Just hope I won't be disappointed. Well done author and translator
This is a complete revelation of what happens in life. Most kids are introduced into stuffs they are not ready for without their knowledge. I feel sorry for teenagers these days. Well done author for the exposure of things...
This is a complete revelation of what happens in life. Most kids are introduced into stuffs they are not ready for without their knowledge. I feel sorry for teenagers these days. Well done author for the exposure of things...
Dear author and translator...please update if you have a time....more chapters please...🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
M o r e p l e a s e ..........🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ More update please.......🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Thank you my dear translator.. Update as soon as possible author.. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I’m so glad to finally have more chapters. I’ve been waiting to see if Charlie, and Ellen would unite again. And now that the Aunt is involved in the situation it’s even more orgies to read about.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ ok. nice story,...... it is so soooo. good for those open minded people like me. yet why are there no updates.???? it's been 2 or 3 months already 😅 can you pls. continue this novel please.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This book is lit fam! The author sure knows what they are talking about and it's actually very educational when it comes to Sex. I have never been so engrossedin a story and I couldn't put it down. However it may be a little inappropriate.
Amazing this is...the words, the way of writing and all. Language used is also quite good. 🔥🔥😍😍😍I loved this fiction, it is just really fantastic
Although the author is anonymous, you have done a great job, what I would really like to get out there is please make a stable update schedule,by the way I love your grammar it's just PERFECT 😍😍😍😍
If u are bored and u don't kw what to do but love romance stories try did it is really bad, and hell I let leave the rest for another dayhhhhhhhhgdfkkffdo DJ do so do so do do Co do so do
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story is very challenging to read imagining the real situation does it really existed in real life. So painful full of guilt. However the next Chapter is long awaited to be updated. Looking forward for it.
The story quite wonderful because there are also things that expressed in a quite extravagant mode. It encourages to go through the Chapters because it made me half baked if I will miss the things that might happen in the next chapters.
It's just awesome. Love to read it's all chapters. Turning out more sensual in further chapters. Hope to get more than that in later ones. Can't wait more.
Excellent read.. I'll keep coming back. Although some of the stories are difficult to handle(like *** with siblings) I guess it's happens in some part of the world.. Good work n very interesting read.
Awesome................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm really surprised to find it here. I think this is the best erotic novel ever written, by the popular erotic author "Anonymous" (I'm his biggest fan). Except for zoophilia, this book has it all: ****** (in all it's varieties), adults with minors, gay (both), **, orgies, etc. It's well written, exciting and it has little repetition. A masterpiece
Keep an open mind because it's really exciting and different. The main character is definitely the most amusing. It also very stimulating so be careful where you read. I really like it so far and can't wait for more but I might just be a pervert 😋
dear author,, as you know ROMANCE story pertain to intimacy of man & woman hope since i pick this story we parents wish to adopt in the world you are creating in this novel. makes us inlove w our husband, dream with your world & let us inspire to fell inlove w/ our partners eorship their being in the real world....my old friend whose her partnerbis gone for a decade was still inspire to read ROMANCE novel maybe they could remember their partners when they sre still alive it makes them lively & forget their illness when they could read intimate moment
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Very very interesting and fascinating, educating, enlighten, arousing , I love all coded titles used in the novel very great , understandable simple and lovely. A job well done to the writter and looking forward to read the next available chapters thanks.