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Author sama !!! Please please morre updates ... even translate google 🙏🙏🙏................._____________________________________________________Heeeelllll.....waiting for your upppp
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História muito original e interessante Muitos memes e referências. Uma das melhores que já li, espero que não perca o foco e continue com as zueras.
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Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!View More
Hey love the story so far hope it gets updated soon I can't to found out what happen next i know it's going to really fun put i can wait as long as i have to to see the rest of the story
good story interesting premise but if this is really dropped I'm gonna have to look for an author to kidnap And since I need 140 Characters, this is here. XPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out I also think that there should be a sequel because that’ll be so awesome
Quando sai o próximo passo capítulo eu gostaria de ler Este CP não deu muita senso de desejo Espero que não demore muito os próximos capítulos
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It's good overall hujbukhin buying guy ugh huh in high school is a good thing for me to do so I don't have to worry about the whole process for a new life in this way of things to say I don't have any other people who have the opportunity and would love it for the next two months of this project I have a great idea for a great time for you to be able to enjoy the rest of your life with the most important things you can do to make your life easier and easier to understand and understand the importance of life and life that you can enjoy and enjoy your life with a
Why haven't you uploaded in so long. I like the story and how you go about the main character. Also he isn't dumb and goes I will beat people who are op because they are op he goes I need to consolidate and think.
Great job i like that jsksksknsmamavahamajajaanbajsjsnssnlsslmssjsKsnsnsjsksksmsmsksmskskksjgzkgdyoflhfoyroycgkdiyfjgxitdkycgkdlyfykdyidjgdtisgixgjdyockhdyichkdlydkgxjtskgxkgst8xGsjtdykdlhcydigua%hizdjcfshchrnchd%xgdufgmbkfh~iyu5jvgsg#udydudul
When update ? Need more or do you post nother story in another sites?.....….....…??¿????????????????2-3&3&7_('9-9&9&9_)_+484748&9--9;);9-9&8&8&8&8&&-&
Tqtqtqttqtqtqtqtqtqtqtqtqtqqtqtqtqtqtqtq .. good story with light comedy...hzhshwhfbjjddjdoettrzjsjwgsev gogoshoheohe u when you're heheiheihoenodnondobrobdoobbdobkdboeiei ejobn atau mbak asti wanita cantik ini kirim dari Uwais dan hal
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Good need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more1😑
Im sorry, i read one and a half chapters and could not get past the spelling and grammer errors. The story looks promising but dude, you need an editor.
AUTHOR-san!! Dude you awesome! IN A NUT: MC was re:inced in a new body in a CULTIVATION WORLD with 2 love interests(that's new).. with cliches happening around him and not TO him (if u know what I mean).. REVIEW: stop wasting your time on reviews and START READING ALREADY!!!
Nice, keep up the good work................................................................................................................................
esperando mas capitulos, esta muy bueno, el protagonista, //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The history is interesting and fun,the main character is very OP.And this is good,the idea of mix wuxia and games is very good.Finishing,good story
TBM sou BRlike, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,
intéressant! plus de chapitres SVP ..........................................................................................................
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Hello there miss /mister author your novel is nice protagonist is not typical retard like in most novels his character is consistent and good the story for noe is great just maybe the world details or more character detail about looks and such would be truly great because many novels are missin on those i cant give any more of a review as there are not many chaps fpr now just point from reader dont lech mc and side chars degenerate into teenager or whatever just for plot free scene , look into details of character like looks shape and blah blah you are not stupid so you know yourself and for example detail of fauna in forest no need to do it like lunatic but base color and forest setup dunno what those secter grounds even look like. Keep up your spirit and imagination its painfull to see novels go to crap with their potential whis is limited only by fantazy. With best regards to you.
I really like this! more chapters please............................................................................................................................................................................ and no harem for god's sake
I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =)
this story seems to have potential keep up the good work mate .................................................................................
seems like Interesting! need more plss!! seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!
Hi, i am the author! I just wanted to ask... who played or still plays ragnarok? I wouldn't say that this story is a ragnarok fan-fiction, but since i use a game-based system, i thought it was better to mark it as fan-fiction. the system, classes and some skills are taken from the game, but the whole background of the story is original. Anyway, I hope you have fun!
Wow I love this story 🤩 it's captures the readers attention and I just wanna keep reading more and more cause the more I read the more interesting it becomes .
Author sama !!! Please please morre updates ... even translate google 🙏🙏🙏................._____________________________________________________Heeeelllll.....waiting for your upppp
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História muito original e interessante Muitos memes e referências. Uma das melhores que já li, espero que não perca o foco e continue com as zueras.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!View More
Hey love the story so far hope it gets updated soon I can't to found out what happen next i know it's going to really fun put i can wait as long as i have to to see the rest of the story
good story interesting premise but if this is really dropped I'm gonna have to look for an author to kidnap And since I need 140 Characters, this is here. XPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out I also think that there should be a sequel because that’ll be so awesome
Quando sai o próximo passo capítulo eu gostaria de ler Este CP não deu muita senso de desejo Espero que não demore muito os próximos capítulos
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's good overall hujbukhin buying guy ugh huh in high school is a good thing for me to do so I don't have to worry about the whole process for a new life in this way of things to say I don't have any other people who have the opportunity and would love it for the next two months of this project I have a great idea for a great time for you to be able to enjoy the rest of your life with the most important things you can do to make your life easier and easier to understand and understand the importance of life and life that you can enjoy and enjoy your life with a
Why haven't you uploaded in so long. I like the story and how you go about the main character. Also he isn't dumb and goes I will beat people who are op because they are op he goes I need to consolidate and think.
Great job i like that jsksksknsmamavahamajajaanbajsjsnssnlsslmssjsKsnsnsjsksksmsmsksmskskksjgzkgdyoflhfoyroycgkdiyfjgxitdkycgkdlyfykdyidjgdtisgixgjdyockhdyichkdlydkgxjtskgxkgst8xGsjtdykdlhcydigua%hizdjcfshchrnchd%xgdufgmbkfh~iyu5jvgsg#udydudul
When update ? Need more or do you post nother story in another sites?.....….....…??¿????????????????2-3&3&7_('9-9&9&9_)_+484748&9--9;);9-9&8&8&8&8&&-&
Tqtqtqttqtqtqtqtqtqtqtqtqtqqtqtqtqtqtqtq .. good story with light comedy...hzhshwhfbjjddjdoettrzjsjwgsev gogoshoheohe u when you're heheiheihoenodnondobrobdoobbdobkdboeiei ejobn atau mbak asti wanita cantik ini kirim dari Uwais dan hal
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Good need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more1😑
Im sorry, i read one and a half chapters and could not get past the spelling and grammer errors. The story looks promising but dude, you need an editor.
AUTHOR-san!! Dude you awesome! IN A NUT: MC was re:inced in a new body in a CULTIVATION WORLD with 2 love interests(that's new).. with cliches happening around him and not TO him (if u know what I mean).. REVIEW: stop wasting your time on reviews and START READING ALREADY!!!
Nice, keep up the good work................................................................................................................................
esperando mas capitulos, esta muy bueno, el protagonista, //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The history is interesting and fun,the main character is very OP.And this is good,the idea of mix wuxia and games is very good.Finishing,good story
TBM sou BRlike, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,like, like, like, like,
intéressant! plus de chapitres SVP ..........................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Hello there miss /mister author your novel is nice protagonist is not typical retard like in most novels his character is consistent and good the story for noe is great just maybe the world details or more character detail about looks and such would be truly great because many novels are missin on those i cant give any more of a review as there are not many chaps fpr now just point from reader dont lech mc and side chars degenerate into teenager or whatever just for plot free scene , look into details of character like looks shape and blah blah you are not stupid so you know yourself and for example detail of fauna in forest no need to do it like lunatic but base color and forest setup dunno what those secter grounds even look like. Keep up your spirit and imagination its painfull to see novels go to crap with their potential whis is limited only by fantazy. With best regards to you.
I really like this! more chapters please............................................................................................................................................................................ and no harem for god's sake
I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =)
this story seems to have potential keep up the good work mate .................................................................................
seems like Interesting! need more plss!! seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!
Hi, i am the author! I just wanted to ask... who played or still plays ragnarok? I wouldn't say that this story is a ragnarok fan-fiction, but since i use a game-based system, i thought it was better to mark it as fan-fiction. the system, classes and some skills are taken from the game, but the whole background of the story is original. Anyway, I hope you have fun!
Wow I love this story 🤩 it's captures the readers attention and I just wanna keep reading more and more cause the more I read the more interesting it becomes .