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Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading this awesome novel. First the r-18 comes in later. This is not a story that only focuses on getting lots of girls but giving those girls a good story with the mc. The adventure of the author from layers to layers is amazing. He even goes back to earth which is not something you see much from other novels with same genre. The characters are well written. Its not a novel where he gets a new girl in his harem every 100 chaps. He loves his fam and his scenes with them are pretty wholesome. His fam also plays a role and they are not just in the background. Claire and Logan power couple is one of the best out there. The girls in the harem are not trophies and are trying their best to get stronger. The cultivation systems are unique and might get a bit confusing as you go on but author has a guide for that. The mystery in the novel is even quite intriguing. The world is pretty well built. Author takes time to introduce the territories and its people. There is also a bit of comedy here and there. MOST IMPORTANTLY, he doesnt leave his wives when he goes on an adventure. He bring them and fights with him together. Something you hardly see in other novels. Im not saying that the novel has no problems but they are pretty small and are only at the start of the novel. The author improves along the way and massive improvements can already be seen early on the novel .As you go on you can see that Davis' adventure with his wives are amazing. P.S. : Shirley is a goddess Overall Writing Quality : 4.5/5 Stability of Updates : 5 (Although we would love 3 chaps a day) Story Development : 5 Character Design : 5 World Background 5
When will it end . It been like 6 years O have read this novel in 15 days from 0 to 3800 chaps . But i ma curious when ot will end. Would be appreciated.
This started out good then became trash , then again became hot garbage and now is true shit
Excellent. My only concern is the mc's daughters eventually getting married in the future. I don't like sons-in-law.
The author really did some bullshit with this story. It started off well, but the quality just fell. I couldn't see the previous depth of the characters anymore. Plus the MC has been painful to watch. Anyway, I am glad I haven't continued to waste my time. The author's thought process is funny. Thinking it was a good idea, putting harems of side characters and even R18 scenes!! What a dumbass. And there seems to be whole arcs with side characters, doing what? Nobody fucking cares about that unnecessary crap. Should've known when I saw 4000 chapters and still ongoing. If the author was like this, then no wonder the MC was fucking idiot!
Just one word for this novel:- peak It is one of my favourite novel on webnovel platform and it really got me hooked in first few chapters with its quality Hope author keep going like this
it's great 🔥. At first I thought that there are too many chapters but after reading the novel I have addicted to it due to detailed character development and story progress.
Best harem in all fictions. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Change my mind?! [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Peak writing, If youre a Cultivation fan you will definitely enjoy read this novel, It has very good characters development and my favorite is how the author handles the relationship with mc Wives. Also the occasional lemon is cherry on top. Sometimes the story can feel rushed or not fully explained which takes a bit off the immersion but its not a huge issue that comes often World building - This a 50/50. even though the author draws out the continent or cities whatever, it can feel empty since the mc doesn’t interact alot with his surroundings, not sure how I can explain this clearly But would say a Solid novel 100% read it
Was not a big fan of this book, witch was a disputant beaver a thout I wold like it
One of the best novels I have read so far. The start is slow and u'll have to be patient till atleast 400 chaps for the story to start taking it's flight but let me tell u this, once the story starts from there u won't find it boring for a single second. Many might dislike it because of it's harem tag but every women in the harem has her story of loving the MC and him loving them back. Nothing is forced in that regard since I have read many novels where author keeps adding women in the story without any development to character or romance. U won't find that here. I know that first 100 chaps, the writing quality is not good but it only starts improving from there and has never stopped since. I find it disheartening that people just read 100 chaps and then drop it saying it's cliche, english is not good or simply leave behind hate comments and reviews without reading all the chaps. I guarantee u, it has peak writing style, peak characters, peak power system and a really good plot, so atleast try first 400 chaps before deciding to continue reading it or not. I'd give it nothing less than 5 stars
consistent banger after banger of chapters, all characters are likeable, and best of all it's 3k+ chapters of awesomeness. 10/10
For me, the beginning of the 52 Territory arc was very good and fun. After that, it shifted between high-pressure situations—where nearly everyone seemed to be his enemy—and slower moments where not much seemed to happen. This seems to be the author’s way of keeping the plot moving and maintaining tension, which works well to keep readers engaged. I especially enjoy the romance element; the MC is powerful but not overwhelmingly so, striking a good balance. He’s aware of his surroundings, which, for me, is the best part. Overall, it’s a well-executed journey. I’d rate it a solid 7.8/10.
El único problema que tengo con esta novela es el harem que tiene el MC. Casi cualquier personaje femenino que tenga alguna interacción con el MC se une al Harem sin importar la raza o si ya tiene 20 esposas, sigue coleccionando más.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
The novel is quite good but it becomes boring and repetitive, making it too cautious, most of the novels that exist today are so cliché that you get tired of starting to read them, there are almost no protagonists who face adversity like men and come out ahead . forward victorious Now there are only fools left who think it is okay to hide their power to win, a man is the one who faces the problems ahead, not the one who hides his hand to win.
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The first novel I ever read One of the novels that I love very much and enjoyed I left it at approximately 2070 chapters and may start from there or re-read it In any case, this novel is simply a unique masterpiece that should not be repeated, I recommend it to you
I read 90 Chapter by now. The story can only be described as cliche and unoriginal. It's the epitome of "Japanese anime protagonist" interactions. MC has the same personality as a standard anime protagonist (positive, tries to be funny, tries to be caring, hopeless romantic but no action) A lot of moments have these cringy and anime standards. It's what you'd expect from a weeb (who's not Japanese) that would write based on what he sees from anime and not experience, the interactions are vomit inducing. Author keeps contradicting his points through his ceaseless yapping. There's also the problem of nonstop yapping by author. Author keeps giving reasons for thing that don't need reasons, and he writes in length about these stupid reasons. The story is all over the place because of this yapping. I can just read the first few words of each paragraph and that's enough to understand the whole chapter. ---------------- The only thing good about this story is that it's fun. But what's the point if I have to skip through most of the chapter? What a drag of a novel.
not a generic cultivation novel. MC's power is interesting. smut chapters blend well with the normal story it doesn't dampen the the story.
I have read the novel and it's pretty good but slightly repetitive(not the plot meaning not generic ) , I just lost interest after reading 3000+ chapters because it means the story is still going to be longer it is beautifully paced and constructed so check it out
Escrita muito boa e de compreensão fácil, história bem elaborada e consistente. Recomendo!!
I left the last comment for all new readers, with this comment I want to express my special gratitude to the author personally. Your story is the best novel I've ever read. From my point of view, everything is fine in it, except that you need to wait for new chapters, and every time I return to reading it, I wait with even more impatience and enthusiasm. (A small remark, I have read this story three times already and I have never tired of it) I like the plot of the novel, with its dynamism and the absence of cliched young masters. I like the lack of pianos in the bushes. I like the structure of the world and its logic. Both in terms of cultivation levels and in terms of building the world as a whole. I like to follow how Davis survives in a new environment, but I also like that the author is in no hurry to reveal all the issues momentarily, each location has its own riddles, its conflicts and its own plot development, which fills the world itself and makes it understandable and close to the reader. I like beautiful female characters with their identity and self-sufficiency. I even like the harem building system proposed by Mingyi. It is very interesting how this will be implemented in practice and will it affect the daily life of the family we are following, and if so, how? I really want to see some everyday stories from the life of the harem and the children of Davis. Who will Etterna and Celestia marry, how will Davis and his family react to this? I want to hear some everyday quarrels of the harem and their solution with the help of established bodies, I want to look at the development of the entire clan and how various characters such as ancestor Alstame, Diane Alstame and Logan and others will get along in it. I like the atypical motivation of the main character to become stronger. Because of how logical and interconnected everything is, it seems that it is not Davis who plays the main role in the work, but the reader himself. I consider this a separate huge advantage of the work. The fate of Gavin Walter and his wife is also very interesting. Will they join the Davis clan? Will Davis get along with his descendant (Ivy)? Such questions create life for the work and it seems that it really happens somewhere beyond our mortal understanding. I like the large number of relationships between chapters, when many moments are revealed from a new side after as many as 500 chapters. As it was with Zenova Arturia, Saint miria, the lord of the world, Saint Lunaria or the heavenly transcendent. Everything in this work is harmonious, stylish and very natural. I like the variability of Davis, how he develops as a person depending on the external environment, because people are not robots! Please keep up the good work! As a fan of your work, I will follow the developments. I have read more than 30 different works in a similar genre and responsibly declare yours to be the best! I am ready to wait impatiently for new chapters for as long as it takes. I am from Russia myself and it is very difficult for me to make a donation on this platform, it is for the sake of your work that I really want to find a way to express my support to you and be somehow involved in this wonderful story. I really hope that the author will notice my laudatory review and continue to please us with high-quality content. Thanks again for your creativity!
good book, love the family, the cultivation system, the fights. sure there's some cliche moments but I haven't found a novel I can call perfect
Alright guys, as the author, I'll be shameless enough to rate my novel 5 stars, hehe. This novel has just started, I'll be mostly focusing on Story Development and Character Design, I want to make the characters as vibrant as possible, each with their own thoughts. The starting of this novel has no adversaries for the MC, he just cultivates to be a genius, after all he'll be a kid in the start. Anyway can't put much spoilers here, hope you'll have fun reading it. Guaranteed 7 chapters a week. Cheers. hehe. If i miss, please remind me about it in the latest chapter comments. Happy reading.
Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading this awesome novel. First the r-18 comes in later. This is not a story that only focuses on getting lots of girls but giving those girls a good story with the mc. The adventure of the author from layers to layers is amazing. He even goes back to earth which is not something you see much from other novels with same genre. The characters are well written. Its not a novel where he gets a new girl in his harem every 100 chaps. He loves his fam and his scenes with them are pretty wholesome. His fam also plays a role and they are not just in the background. Claire and Logan power couple is one of the best out there. The girls in the harem are not trophies and are trying their best to get stronger. The cultivation systems are unique and might get a bit confusing as you go on but author has a guide for that. The mystery in the novel is even quite intriguing. The world is pretty well built. Author takes time to introduce the territories and its people. There is also a bit of comedy here and there. MOST IMPORTANTLY, he doesnt leave his wives when he goes on an adventure. He bring them and fights with him together. Something you hardly see in other novels. Im not saying that the novel has no problems but they are pretty small and are only at the start of the novel. The author improves along the way and massive improvements can already be seen early on the novel .As you go on you can see that Davis' adventure with his wives are amazing. P.S. : Shirley is a goddess Overall Writing Quality : 4.5/5 Stability of Updates : 5 (Although we would love 3 chaps a day) Story Development : 5 Character Design : 5 World Background 5
When will it end . It been like 6 years O have read this novel in 15 days from 0 to 3800 chaps . But i ma curious when ot will end. Would be appreciated.
This started out good then became trash , then again became hot garbage and now is true shit
Excellent. My only concern is the mc's daughters eventually getting married in the future. I don't like sons-in-law.
The author really did some bullshit with this story. It started off well, but the quality just fell. I couldn't see the previous depth of the characters anymore. Plus the MC has been painful to watch. Anyway, I am glad I haven't continued to waste my time. The author's thought process is funny. Thinking it was a good idea, putting harems of side characters and even R18 scenes!! What a dumbass. And there seems to be whole arcs with side characters, doing what? Nobody fucking cares about that unnecessary crap. Should've known when I saw 4000 chapters and still ongoing. If the author was like this, then no wonder the MC was fucking idiot!
Just one word for this novel:- peak It is one of my favourite novel on webnovel platform and it really got me hooked in first few chapters with its quality Hope author keep going like this
it's great 🔥. At first I thought that there are too many chapters but after reading the novel I have addicted to it due to detailed character development and story progress.
Best harem in all fictions. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Change my mind?! [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Peak writing, If youre a Cultivation fan you will definitely enjoy read this novel, It has very good characters development and my favorite is how the author handles the relationship with mc Wives. Also the occasional lemon is cherry on top. Sometimes the story can feel rushed or not fully explained which takes a bit off the immersion but its not a huge issue that comes often World building - This a 50/50. even though the author draws out the continent or cities whatever, it can feel empty since the mc doesn’t interact alot with his surroundings, not sure how I can explain this clearly But would say a Solid novel 100% read it
Was not a big fan of this book, witch was a disputant beaver a thout I wold like it
One of the best novels I have read so far. The start is slow and u'll have to be patient till atleast 400 chaps for the story to start taking it's flight but let me tell u this, once the story starts from there u won't find it boring for a single second. Many might dislike it because of it's harem tag but every women in the harem has her story of loving the MC and him loving them back. Nothing is forced in that regard since I have read many novels where author keeps adding women in the story without any development to character or romance. U won't find that here. I know that first 100 chaps, the writing quality is not good but it only starts improving from there and has never stopped since. I find it disheartening that people just read 100 chaps and then drop it saying it's cliche, english is not good or simply leave behind hate comments and reviews without reading all the chaps. I guarantee u, it has peak writing style, peak characters, peak power system and a really good plot, so atleast try first 400 chaps before deciding to continue reading it or not. I'd give it nothing less than 5 stars
consistent banger after banger of chapters, all characters are likeable, and best of all it's 3k+ chapters of awesomeness. 10/10
For me, the beginning of the 52 Territory arc was very good and fun. After that, it shifted between high-pressure situations—where nearly everyone seemed to be his enemy—and slower moments where not much seemed to happen. This seems to be the author’s way of keeping the plot moving and maintaining tension, which works well to keep readers engaged. I especially enjoy the romance element; the MC is powerful but not overwhelmingly so, striking a good balance. He’s aware of his surroundings, which, for me, is the best part. Overall, it’s a well-executed journey. I’d rate it a solid 7.8/10.
El único problema que tengo con esta novela es el harem que tiene el MC. Casi cualquier personaje femenino que tenga alguna interacción con el MC se une al Harem sin importar la raza o si ya tiene 20 esposas, sigue coleccionando más.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The novel is quite good but it becomes boring and repetitive, making it too cautious, most of the novels that exist today are so cliché that you get tired of starting to read them, there are almost no protagonists who face adversity like men and come out ahead . forward victorious Now there are only fools left who think it is okay to hide their power to win, a man is the one who faces the problems ahead, not the one who hides his hand to win.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The first novel I ever read One of the novels that I love very much and enjoyed I left it at approximately 2070 chapters and may start from there or re-read it In any case, this novel is simply a unique masterpiece that should not be repeated, I recommend it to you
I read 90 Chapter by now. The story can only be described as cliche and unoriginal. It's the epitome of "Japanese anime protagonist" interactions. MC has the same personality as a standard anime protagonist (positive, tries to be funny, tries to be caring, hopeless romantic but no action) A lot of moments have these cringy and anime standards. It's what you'd expect from a weeb (who's not Japanese) that would write based on what he sees from anime and not experience, the interactions are vomit inducing. Author keeps contradicting his points through his ceaseless yapping. There's also the problem of nonstop yapping by author. Author keeps giving reasons for thing that don't need reasons, and he writes in length about these stupid reasons. The story is all over the place because of this yapping. I can just read the first few words of each paragraph and that's enough to understand the whole chapter. ---------------- The only thing good about this story is that it's fun. But what's the point if I have to skip through most of the chapter? What a drag of a novel.
not a generic cultivation novel. MC's power is interesting. smut chapters blend well with the normal story it doesn't dampen the the story.
I have read the novel and it's pretty good but slightly repetitive(not the plot meaning not generic ) , I just lost interest after reading 3000+ chapters because it means the story is still going to be longer it is beautifully paced and constructed so check it out
Escrita muito boa e de compreensão fácil, história bem elaborada e consistente. Recomendo!!
I left the last comment for all new readers, with this comment I want to express my special gratitude to the author personally. Your story is the best novel I've ever read. From my point of view, everything is fine in it, except that you need to wait for new chapters, and every time I return to reading it, I wait with even more impatience and enthusiasm. (A small remark, I have read this story three times already and I have never tired of it) I like the plot of the novel, with its dynamism and the absence of cliched young masters. I like the lack of pianos in the bushes. I like the structure of the world and its logic. Both in terms of cultivation levels and in terms of building the world as a whole. I like to follow how Davis survives in a new environment, but I also like that the author is in no hurry to reveal all the issues momentarily, each location has its own riddles, its conflicts and its own plot development, which fills the world itself and makes it understandable and close to the reader. I like beautiful female characters with their identity and self-sufficiency. I even like the harem building system proposed by Mingyi. It is very interesting how this will be implemented in practice and will it affect the daily life of the family we are following, and if so, how? I really want to see some everyday stories from the life of the harem and the children of Davis. Who will Etterna and Celestia marry, how will Davis and his family react to this? I want to hear some everyday quarrels of the harem and their solution with the help of established bodies, I want to look at the development of the entire clan and how various characters such as ancestor Alstame, Diane Alstame and Logan and others will get along in it. I like the atypical motivation of the main character to become stronger. Because of how logical and interconnected everything is, it seems that it is not Davis who plays the main role in the work, but the reader himself. I consider this a separate huge advantage of the work. The fate of Gavin Walter and his wife is also very interesting. Will they join the Davis clan? Will Davis get along with his descendant (Ivy)? Such questions create life for the work and it seems that it really happens somewhere beyond our mortal understanding. I like the large number of relationships between chapters, when many moments are revealed from a new side after as many as 500 chapters. As it was with Zenova Arturia, Saint miria, the lord of the world, Saint Lunaria or the heavenly transcendent. Everything in this work is harmonious, stylish and very natural. I like the variability of Davis, how he develops as a person depending on the external environment, because people are not robots! Please keep up the good work! As a fan of your work, I will follow the developments. I have read more than 30 different works in a similar genre and responsibly declare yours to be the best! I am ready to wait impatiently for new chapters for as long as it takes. I am from Russia myself and it is very difficult for me to make a donation on this platform, it is for the sake of your work that I really want to find a way to express my support to you and be somehow involved in this wonderful story. I really hope that the author will notice my laudatory review and continue to please us with high-quality content. Thanks again for your creativity!
good book, love the family, the cultivation system, the fights. sure there's some cliche moments but I haven't found a novel I can call perfect
Alright guys, as the author, I'll be shameless enough to rate my novel 5 stars, hehe. This novel has just started, I'll be mostly focusing on Story Development and Character Design, I want to make the characters as vibrant as possible, each with their own thoughts. The starting of this novel has no adversaries for the MC, he just cultivates to be a genius, after all he'll be a kid in the start. Anyway can't put much spoilers here, hope you'll have fun reading it. Guaranteed 7 chapters a week. Cheers. hehe. If i miss, please remind me about it in the latest chapter comments. Happy reading.