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I really enjoyed this book and was wondering if it was evergoing to continue or if it was suddenly and prematurely dropped for some reason???
This is a story of what really happens when a regular guy transmigrats to a cultivation world he has sex, fights, and tries to get rich. Love how this is going keep it up author.
A decent read and I want to continue but it doesn't seem to get updated anymore. I am sad about this and wish it would update..............
Yeah...... I can't. Didn't develop an interest in this. Somethings are too outrageous for even "screw physics." Bye bye Apologies, I have to bullsh*t a little more for the review to be accepted. Lallalalalalalalalalalalalala I think that ought to do it
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Well there were some parts that didnt make the slightest sense and it lacked explanation. .
It is hilarious and very great wish it had more chapters )lllkkihdhdsheyelueitwoysjraskysgsfsggsiteylatoeysosydgZgzgxgoxoydfiesottwyowotstoskgskgxh
First 30 chapters in...I like the system so far but I’m interested to see where it goes. Lots of fluff and doesn’t seem super focused on the assassins aspect but it should pick up soon I’m imagining. Definitely worth checking out if you like the system genre of novels
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Me gusto mucho pero la verdad hace falta mucha explicacion. No entiendo como es que un otaku que nunca a peliado sin explicacion de entrenamiento puede pelear mejor que un soldado que lleva años entrenando. Luego me dicen que el clan viene de un dios del trueno y ahora puede sscar rayos y antes ni se avia mencionado. En resumen me gusto pero no seguire leyendo ase falta fundamentos no es por ser cliche si no que no me le das historia y explicaciones que de cosas que no tienen sentidos si retrosedes en la historia
This is an original novel, although some elements are a bit inspired by other novels. But there's something that bothers me: Each skill consumes a fixed percentage of Qi. For example the skill 'Stealth' that costs 10% Qi. It's good in the first chapters, but when the MC advances, even the consumption would increase, right? Example: with 100 'units' of Qi it would cost 10 but if he had 1million 'units' of Qi he would need 100k ?
At first you think it would be cliche trash but once you get into it you realize that despite the plot which is cliche its a lot better than most other just like it
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Extremely inconsistent pacing. There's absolutely no build up to events, no motivation explained, nor any indicative description - instead, this novel just skips through entire scenarios, somehow expecting the reader to connect the dots. If that wasn't enough, the story rapidly changes direction. One minute it's an empire destroying catastrophe, next minute the MC is in love with a women, and announcing to the world that she's his wife. Of course, if that wasn't enough there's suddenly a dozen chapters of MC and Natalie's love story. The author has a horrible tendency of wish-fulfillment, it's evident from how randomly the fe-tis-hes are thrown into the story. Completing ruining a prospective marvel. Sad. Comment might be deleted.
This book is quite an interesting one. Although it doesn’t have much of the “promised” assassinations as I wished for, it has a quite good lead and story. A novel with a story that includes things of family and relationship development. It’s a well laid back novel although there are some quirks I have with this novel. These quirks are how the MC is just overall too underpowered - his wife was just some random homeless girl he fancies basically but she got stronger than him..., the kid that his wife had previously also is stronger and beat him in a match because of techniques (but realistically this shouldn’t happen... the difference in power is immense... basically like saying a highly skilled child in martial arts is able to beat a trained soldier who doesn’t have formal training of the arts), the amount of depressing chapters of rap* and people taken advantage even though it kinda doesn’t do anything for the story. I’d have to rate this out of the novels I’ve read a read but be sure you are able to hold in the pain for some scenes depicted. (THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION and although it may be a little indifferent to others deal with it) TLDR: Read but hold in pain and clench for some scenes. The family moments are enjoyable to read though. Also don’t expect too much assassinations.
Has a nice design and fun to read. The plot has a okay build up and could be nicer if you had more character development but dont regard this comment to much I've only read one chapter.
..............................Is this novel dropped?. ................................... Is this novel dropped?..............................
Left after reading starting chapter's. Mc suddenly becomes all knowing powerful person.his actions are kind of stupid.he is able to kill assassin's when he is trash .. no background about cultivation.dont know about the later chap but from what i read story disappoints.
Could improve , hope author comes back. Start was a little wabbly , rushed could go more into detail . But overall it caught my interest . Not a bad world setting could make more out.of it , again more detail. But to those who wana drop the novel do so and not blame the author for your lack of interest.
Calling it an absolute trash is an insult to the word trash. If you want to know why read it and experience the pain first hand ..........................................................................................
This is a great novel I fell in love with, but unfortunately it has not been updated in the last 8 months, I hope the author starts writing new chapters.
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Y u recommend Me when dropppppped?¿?¿???????????hueshedidjfjehdhdjdbdbdhdvddhdhdhshshegvdejjsjejekshdjdodjjdjdkddkdjkdjdjdkdkdjdjdd d qidian dumbjjddjdjdjdjr
I really enjoyed this book and was wondering if it was evergoing to continue or if it was suddenly and prematurely dropped for some reason???
This is a story of what really happens when a regular guy transmigrats to a cultivation world he has sex, fights, and tries to get rich. Love how this is going keep it up author.
A decent read and I want to continue but it doesn't seem to get updated anymore. I am sad about this and wish it would update..............
Yeah...... I can't. Didn't develop an interest in this. Somethings are too outrageous for even "screw physics." Bye bye Apologies, I have to bullsh*t a little more for the review to be accepted. Lallalalalalalalalalalalalala I think that ought to do it
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Well there were some parts that didnt make the slightest sense and it lacked explanation. .
It is hilarious and very great wish it had more chapters )lllkkihdhdsheyelueitwoysjraskysgsfsggsiteylatoeysosydgZgzgxgoxoydfiesottwyowotstoskgskgxh
First 30 chapters in...I like the system so far but I’m interested to see where it goes. Lots of fluff and doesn’t seem super focused on the assassins aspect but it should pick up soon I’m imagining. Definitely worth checking out if you like the system genre of novels
🥑😴🌰👏👋🌰🥜🤙🥔🥜👋🍌🥜👋🥔☝️🖐🥔☝️🤙🍌🥑🥕🌶🌽🥬🌶🥜👋🌰🥔🥜🥕🌶🌽🍋🌶☝️🤙🥔🥔🥜🥕🍌🌽🍋🥦☝️🖐🥔☝️🖐🥔🥜🥕🌶🥒🍋🌶☝️🤙🥔☝️🥕🌶🌽🍋🌰☝️🖐🥔🥜🍉🍋🌶☝️🤙🥔
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Me gusto mucho pero la verdad hace falta mucha explicacion. No entiendo como es que un otaku que nunca a peliado sin explicacion de entrenamiento puede pelear mejor que un soldado que lleva años entrenando. Luego me dicen que el clan viene de un dios del trueno y ahora puede sscar rayos y antes ni se avia mencionado. En resumen me gusto pero no seguire leyendo ase falta fundamentos no es por ser cliche si no que no me le das historia y explicaciones que de cosas que no tienen sentidos si retrosedes en la historia
This is an original novel, although some elements are a bit inspired by other novels. But there's something that bothers me: Each skill consumes a fixed percentage of Qi. For example the skill 'Stealth' that costs 10% Qi. It's good in the first chapters, but when the MC advances, even the consumption would increase, right? Example: with 100 'units' of Qi it would cost 10 but if he had 1million 'units' of Qi he would need 100k ?
At first you think it would be cliche trash but once you get into it you realize that despite the plot which is cliche its a lot better than most other just like it
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Extremely inconsistent pacing. There's absolutely no build up to events, no motivation explained, nor any indicative description - instead, this novel just skips through entire scenarios, somehow expecting the reader to connect the dots. If that wasn't enough, the story rapidly changes direction. One minute it's an empire destroying catastrophe, next minute the MC is in love with a women, and announcing to the world that she's his wife. Of course, if that wasn't enough there's suddenly a dozen chapters of MC and Natalie's love story. The author has a horrible tendency of wish-fulfillment, it's evident from how randomly the fe-tis-hes are thrown into the story. Completing ruining a prospective marvel. Sad. Comment might be deleted.
This book is quite an interesting one. Although it doesn’t have much of the “promised” assassinations as I wished for, it has a quite good lead and story. A novel with a story that includes things of family and relationship development. It’s a well laid back novel although there are some quirks I have with this novel. These quirks are how the MC is just overall too underpowered - his wife was just some random homeless girl he fancies basically but she got stronger than him..., the kid that his wife had previously also is stronger and beat him in a match because of techniques (but realistically this shouldn’t happen... the difference in power is immense... basically like saying a highly skilled child in martial arts is able to beat a trained soldier who doesn’t have formal training of the arts), the amount of depressing chapters of rap* and people taken advantage even though it kinda doesn’t do anything for the story. I’d have to rate this out of the novels I’ve read a read but be sure you are able to hold in the pain for some scenes depicted. (THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION and although it may be a little indifferent to others deal with it) TLDR: Read but hold in pain and clench for some scenes. The family moments are enjoyable to read though. Also don’t expect too much assassinations.
Has a nice design and fun to read. The plot has a okay build up and could be nicer if you had more character development but dont regard this comment to much I've only read one chapter.
..............................Is this novel dropped?. ................................... Is this novel dropped?..............................
Left after reading starting chapter's. Mc suddenly becomes all knowing powerful person.his actions are kind of stupid.he is able to kill assassin's when he is trash .. no background about cultivation.dont know about the later chap but from what i read story disappoints.
Could improve , hope author comes back. Start was a little wabbly , rushed could go more into detail . But overall it caught my interest . Not a bad world setting could make more out.of it , again more detail. But to those who wana drop the novel do so and not blame the author for your lack of interest.
Calling it an absolute trash is an insult to the word trash. If you want to know why read it and experience the pain first hand ..........................................................................................
This is a great novel I fell in love with, but unfortunately it has not been updated in the last 8 months, I hope the author starts writing new chapters.
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really good book.