47รีวิว
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Gonna be honest here. I have yet to read the novel but from the synopsis, tags and reviews I can see this novel will fail. Harem, 90% of the times ruins good novel. Beta MC who doesn’t learn and is kept under the skirts of the females are just hypocrites and loser no mater the justification for their reasons/actions. “Oh, that beauty is actually evil *****?? We I the MC will just ignore it and help her out! ... Oh, that other beauty will keep bring me troubles and issues none stop? Well that don’t matter, I’ll just keep fighting for her!.... Oh, this other beauty there has family issues. Her mom/dad squander away their centuries accumulated wealth. Well here I can have them leach off me as long as I can get in her pants!” Title of novel is great but pretty sure this is the type of novel this is!
I really liked the stoy and the world set up, the story itself is compelling. It is more interesting than the novels in which the MC has to escape/fight his relatives from his mother's/ father's side. Of course there are few cheats like he is good at everything like alchemy, blacksmith and arrays. Overall the MC' s character is fell flushed out, in the begining he is innocent and naive but that changes as the the story continues. The fighting is good. I would like to see more politics and betrayal in the story. I like MC' s MOM she is badass, powerfull but she is also gentle and warm towards her family. I think the author should focus a little more on his mom. CAN anyone tell me when will the next chapter be released?
Definitely interesting but the lack of continuation chapters is irritating.........the more I love this story the more disappointed I am,for me to not be able to read much depreciate it flavor..
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Poopies stinkies funny funny poop, poop is really funny haha. Poopies stinkies funny fart poo** nice poop dumpies in the toilet yummies yum yum!
Thanks for the novel 😁😃😉🙂😗🤩🤩😘😛😗😝😜🤑🤪🤪🤑☺😙🥰😊🤣😆😅😆😅😁😉😇☺😘😛😗😛😜😋😜😘😍😄😀😀😄😁😃😆🙃☺😘🤪🤑🤑🤪😙☺🥰😊🤣😆🤣😆😝🙂
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I'm really enjoy this twist on wuxia novels, bringing in elements of a different cultural context... definitely a novelty. I'm eager to see how the story continues to develop
I hate the Female lead Anya. Shes a *****, She always get MC into trouble, Fuck her. Everything is great except the female lead. But why do you have the "System" Tag? I dont see any system even in chap 12. Why so late to intruduce cheat? Cheats should be intruduced in first chapters
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Thanks for the novel 😆😉😋😋😉😗😚😚😗😚😗🤨☺️😐🙂🙂😚😎😘😎😘😅😃🤣😄🤣😃😂🤣😁🤣😆😊🥰😙🤩😙😐🤔🤨☺️😙☺️😊😎😄🤣😃😄☺️🤗😚🙂🤨☺️🤔😚😗😚😋😉
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Story line was not bad. But the writing quality and presentation is a mess. I have read only first 15chs ( so far bad) , I hope it will improve in next chapters
Different from the usual run of the mill cultivation novels where the MC fully showcases his"talent" and even more. A different world view from usual ones too.
Please just tell me : is this a system novel or what? Somebody please answer me😭. Bcoz after the first chap I felt like this one is not a system novel , so it’s not my type. But this ffff novel clearly tag word system .
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This is a really good novel some typos but that's manageable (anone you need an editor bro) the story started out pretty good in my opinion i am Nigerian so am a bit biased towards the protrayal of my country's culture. The mc is not arrogant started out a bit naive but at the writing of this review he's lost his naivety. To me it's a plus that he's not made into a loner and has what seems to be dependable friends and a great first love interest not much have been seen of the second one as of yet. The pacing of the novel is nice to me at least and there's regular character development and I really like his alternate earth world that he's developed all in all I will definitely recommend this to anyone.
all of this author's works are super good and underrated. need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters
I really like your story and your way of writing but I just cant further take in and read the fact that his mother is a ***** and a slut but shows concern to him. If only that plot was changed... ha gud luck since i am dropping it.
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Different take on the cultivation novels. Characters are well developed and have their own motivations. Even though some editing needs to be done on some of the chapters for ease of reading, I definitely recommend this one.
Is not going to be long winded review, but the grammar could be improved and also his style of writing. But English is not his first language and I think I don’t have problem with that. I’m just trying to be honest here. But let’s talk about the story itself. Marvelously crafted. Small details decorating the story to know and understand out character is not only one sided but has a human emotion. The world build is pretty interesting too. Sometimes you don’t have to tell everyone what’s going on but can actually show them what they have in the story. Like when the author introduces technology to the era where martial arts reigning supreme. Overall this could be really good story!
Awesome characters🎭🎭🎭sweet read overall, lurve luuuuvvvvvv♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ keep the chapters coming fastest please💨💨💨ok🥰🥰🥰🥰 plz...mmmmmm😲
I love the progression of the novel it's very fascinating but it's been 10 month since you last updated the novel I will love to know how it really ended. Or is that the end?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can earn from your current story or new ideas, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Gonna be honest here. I have yet to read the novel but from the synopsis, tags and reviews I can see this novel will fail. Harem, 90% of the times ruins good novel. Beta MC who doesn’t learn and is kept under the skirts of the females are just hypocrites and loser no mater the justification for their reasons/actions. “Oh, that beauty is actually evil *****?? We I the MC will just ignore it and help her out! ... Oh, that other beauty will keep bring me troubles and issues none stop? Well that don’t matter, I’ll just keep fighting for her!.... Oh, this other beauty there has family issues. Her mom/dad squander away their centuries accumulated wealth. Well here I can have them leach off me as long as I can get in her pants!” Title of novel is great but pretty sure this is the type of novel this is!
I really liked the stoy and the world set up, the story itself is compelling. It is more interesting than the novels in which the MC has to escape/fight his relatives from his mother's/ father's side. Of course there are few cheats like he is good at everything like alchemy, blacksmith and arrays. Overall the MC' s character is fell flushed out, in the begining he is innocent and naive but that changes as the the story continues. The fighting is good. I would like to see more politics and betrayal in the story. I like MC' s MOM she is badass, powerfull but she is also gentle and warm towards her family. I think the author should focus a little more on his mom. CAN anyone tell me when will the next chapter be released?
Definitely interesting but the lack of continuation chapters is irritating.........the more I love this story the more disappointed I am,for me to not be able to read much depreciate it flavor..
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Poopies stinkies funny funny poop, poop is really funny haha. Poopies stinkies funny fart poo** nice poop dumpies in the toilet yummies yum yum!
Thanks for the novel 😁😃😉🙂😗🤩🤩😘😛😗😝😜🤑🤪🤪🤑☺😙🥰😊🤣😆😅😆😅😁😉😇☺😘😛😗😛😜😋😜😘😍😄😀😀😄😁😃😆🙃☺😘🤪🤑🤑🤪😙☺🥰😊🤣😆🤣😆😝🙂
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I'm really enjoy this twist on wuxia novels, bringing in elements of a different cultural context... definitely a novelty. I'm eager to see how the story continues to develop
I hate the Female lead Anya. Shes a *****, She always get MC into trouble, Fuck her. Everything is great except the female lead. But why do you have the "System" Tag? I dont see any system even in chap 12. Why so late to intruduce cheat? Cheats should be intruduced in first chapters
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Story line was not bad. But the writing quality and presentation is a mess. I have read only first 15chs ( so far bad) , I hope it will improve in next chapters
Different from the usual run of the mill cultivation novels where the MC fully showcases his"talent" and even more. A different world view from usual ones too.
Please just tell me : is this a system novel or what? Somebody please answer me😭. Bcoz after the first chap I felt like this one is not a system novel , so it’s not my type. But this ffff novel clearly tag word system .
Stay safe, 👇🙄👇 u bhajapa Stay safe, 👇🙄👇 u bhajapa Stay safe, 👇🙄👇 u bhajapa😂 Stay safe, 👇🙄👇 u bhajapa Stay safe, 👇🙄👇 u bhajapa Stay safe, 👇🙄👇 u bhajapa
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This is a really good novel some typos but that's manageable (anone you need an editor bro) the story started out pretty good in my opinion i am Nigerian so am a bit biased towards the protrayal of my country's culture. The mc is not arrogant started out a bit naive but at the writing of this review he's lost his naivety. To me it's a plus that he's not made into a loner and has what seems to be dependable friends and a great first love interest not much have been seen of the second one as of yet. The pacing of the novel is nice to me at least and there's regular character development and I really like his alternate earth world that he's developed all in all I will definitely recommend this to anyone.
all of this author's works are super good and underrated. need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters
I really like your story and your way of writing but I just cant further take in and read the fact that his mother is a ***** and a slut but shows concern to him. If only that plot was changed... ha gud luck since i am dropping it.
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Different take on the cultivation novels. Characters are well developed and have their own motivations. Even though some editing needs to be done on some of the chapters for ease of reading, I definitely recommend this one.
Is not going to be long winded review, but the grammar could be improved and also his style of writing. But English is not his first language and I think I don’t have problem with that. I’m just trying to be honest here. But let’s talk about the story itself. Marvelously crafted. Small details decorating the story to know and understand out character is not only one sided but has a human emotion. The world build is pretty interesting too. Sometimes you don’t have to tell everyone what’s going on but can actually show them what they have in the story. Like when the author introduces technology to the era where martial arts reigning supreme. Overall this could be really good story!
Awesome characters🎭🎭🎭sweet read overall, lurve luuuuvvvvvv♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ keep the chapters coming fastest please💨💨💨ok🥰🥰🥰🥰 plz...mmmmmm😲
I love the progression of the novel it's very fascinating but it's been 10 month since you last updated the novel I will love to know how it really ended. Or is that the end?