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Immortal System

Eastern 56 ตอน 1.0M จำนวนคนดู
นักเขียน: SuuSoJeat

4.15 (15 เรตติ้ง)

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เรื่องย่อ

Waking up in a new world, Tian Feng finds himself become a 1-year-old child once again. Along with this weird phenomenon, a seemingly omnipotent system awaken within him.

To become the most potent being, to live without regret; Possessing this OP system, he thought it would be smooth sailing. Little did he know that it couldn’t be further from the truth.

This is a melancholy story of a man and his companions, adventuring from one world to another; Discovering the meaning of life and regret.

General Audiences

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คุณอาจชอบ

15รีวิว

4.15

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
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  • พื้นหลังโลก

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butthead

Mc is stupid,selfish,*****,dumb,ignorant. Reading this made me stupid. I wanted to read more when I started reading but mc got dumber and dumber

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
demioch

Improvement on grammar and some more updates and more chapters and a little more about the world and everything else in it like details not just about skills but people and the world

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
kenstory

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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
butterwolf22

This is a different type of story I read. It's very interesting to read. It has new aspects that I never read before. I really enjoy reading this novel.

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
LaharZero45

Guys i recommend this novel to whose who enjoy cultivation and RPGlike to readers, for now i cant say 100% that its one of the best, but im sure our dear author didnt disappoint his readers so read this ^^ Ps: im not one of his family member ok? Im not even a donator, i only just love reading and not on comment type person but, u see im elated huehuehue, let's support this.!!

6yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
LaharZero45

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6yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Katheriner

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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
4_greenbeans

it takes a werido turn with the MC development because it makes home seem real real dumb. I couldn't even finish is before I got tired of his bs

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Uchiha_Tenshi

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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
God_King

Rather cliche system story, but that doesn't mean it's bad. What I dont like is how bad the grammar is and there is no improvement in fact i feel like it got worse, and since there is nothing new and interesting about this novel I'd rather not have to struggle to decipher what the author meant.

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
nivekwikiwiki

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5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
thirtum

Rateplosiooon! Must be 140 character... I hope spamming space bar will count. Rateplosiooon! Must be 140 character... I hope spamming space bar will count.

6yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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