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Vastitus, Failure Planet

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นักเขียน: Lieutenant_Jaku

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it's sort of a cross between sci-fi and fantasy just to give you an idea.
This book is a story that takes place in a distant world, focusing on three friends leading a group of people who just want to survive amidst the planet-wide faction wars going on.
thank you to Shadox for editing a few chapters of my book (i think)
I am not sure how often chapters will come out.
my writing is not great but I enjoy writing this, and I hope that by writing this my writing will improve.

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สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์

Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

6รีวิว

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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TigerBlooImmortal

It good, the writing quality is good , but it's not really my genre I like opening badasssery, conquer all beauties type of story, but for those into sci-fi it's a good choice

6yr
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Susan001

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2yr
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Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

2yr
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3yr
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zd4zaaa

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3yr
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Lieutenant_Jaku

no shame in reviewing your own novel I hear. a few useful things: a klick is defined as one kilometer a day on Vastitus is 34.5 hours what the names mean: Narchean- no meaning Buvin- possibly means the name of my god but I can't confirm that, it is normally a surname Jaku- means "me" and is also the name of a mountain in india Yalson- no meaning Ruby- a stone with many color varieties Kitt- a mountain in arizona Io- named after the moon of jupiter this is a story I am writing for fun, it is a military fiction/ science fiction novel based on a dream that I had one day. it features fighting, a decent story, OP characters, more fighting, betrayal, corruption greed, and of course, even more fighting.

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