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I rather enjoy this story. Its more of a slow burn in terms of pacing, which can understandably be a bit frustrating. I'm actually not a super big fan of the actiony bits where Ves gets personally involved, but I understand their importance within the context of the story. I started reading this story because I was looking for something a bit more relaxed compared to the normal fare that I read. The MC often has many conflicting goals so it often feels like he's dragging his feet a bit, but I don't necessarily think that's a bad thing. I don't believe its ever been stated that Ves is a super driven person, so bouts of procrastination aren't uncommon and serve to make him seem more realistic. I don't think said dragging of feet has ever been particularly egregious, but at the same time I binged 350+ of the chapters at once so my perspective may be a bit skewed as a result. Since I've caught up to the most recent chapters, the story's been updating at a pace of two per day, so I think the updating pace is pretty stable. I think the supporting cast is fine, but the story is definitely very focused on Ves himself. We know the names of other characters and a bit of their backstories/motivations, but we don't go super in depth about them. I would say this is an area that could be improved upon, but not something that really detracts from the overall quality of the story itself. As for the World Background, we've been given glimpses into the universe as a whole outside of the small bubble the story's been primarily focused on. As a result, we know there is a greater universe with other planets/characters/aliens out there waiting to be explored. From my recollection, I don't believe there's been too many lore dumps. As things become relevant, Ves (and we as readers) learn more about them, but never really to a truly overwhelming extent. All in all, I think this is a fun story that's trying to be a bit different from the normal fare on this site. From that context, I believe the story I've given is fair. There's room for improvement, but nothing that detracts significantly from its overall quality. I think if you enjoy Superstars of Tomorrow this will be something you might enjoy as well.
*I have read every single chapter up to 1736, skipping and skimming nothing* Slight inclusion of very mild spoilers that mean nothing out of context )) First, I have to say that the critics of the Vandal arc aren’t wrong. When I first read about the conscription, I assumed a time skip would be employed at some point. When they arrived at the Aeon corona system, I assumed time would be sped up on the planet rather than slowing down- this seemed like a great chance to accelerate the war ark. Nevertheless, the MC grew a lot during the arc. It is a bit of a stretch, but this is shaping up to be a 5000 chapter story at this rate. Dedicating 600+ chapters to preliminarily shape the MCs character from a timid indoctrinated weakling into a prototype of a business leader able to survive in a cutthroat world has at least some merit. Before you discount me completely- yes, I agree, there was some ‘false advertisement’. Being disconnected from the system for so long was counter to what most system novels do and many fellow readers will be justifiably annoyed at that. Me? I have no issue. Whilst I love your standard system trope chewing gum novels as much as the next guy sometimes, this isn’t that. In one of the recent chapters, the author described serving in the army as a means, not an end. That is the same thing I have to say for my perspective on his usage of the system. Whilst I cannot speak for the author, what I see from his work is an amalgamation. In mech touch speak, the design seed of the novel has taken fractured spiritual pieces from many different genres and used them to craft its own unique identity. Many people comment about the novel not conforming to expectations from various genres. Well... why should it? In webnovel speak, why continue to define a story by the same tags it started with if the story has come to a point where they are no longer the best choice? What if Ves loses the Metal Scroll for good? I’m sure the readers will riot(I’m sure the thought of introducing this plot element gives the author a headache for this reason) , but my point is that what if it makes the story better for it? Unlike so many people saying how the story has deteriorated, I have actually read the whole thing word for word. Whilst I agree that there were times where I was weary with parts of the story, I have never been disappointed. When ves returns from war, the Story picks up and becomes so much more phenomenal. The start of the new mech generation and his new mechs with their expanding repertoire of abilities are increasingly interesting to read about Tbh,I really tip my hat to the author. Perhaps the difference between phase tech mechs and mastercraft mechs are a subtle jibe at the non conformity of this story to cookie cutter ideologies. I’m sure any mildly intelligent person can think up 100 arguments against anything they wish. ‘Mech designers are unstable, hence justifying the MC making retarded decisions that help the plot’ I’ll take that excuse at face value. Why not? It makes for an interesting plot point. ‘the novel is so much about business but the business aspect isn’t realistic’ I’m entertained reading about it. I’m not a business magnate myself, nor do I expect the author to be too perfect? ‘What’s with cultivation? Why doesn’t it work like this or like that?’ Spirituality is obscure. Can the author make it more obvious? Does a massive pirate ship full of spirituality users not hammer home the point that only the strongest organisations really use it? Whilst Ves always calls it his unique advantage, there have been many hints in the story that he is well aware that he is not unique. He is aware that he is reinventing the wheel in some areas. He chooses not to think about that because it is not helpful to him. Many things are inherently open to debate. The author is building a universe. Where’s the fun if it’s perfect? I encourage fellow readers to read everything. This story is worth it. Enjoy!!
honestly only story i read that can be exceting even after 4000 chapters. with explanation of system that isn t some magic geekshit.
This nível gabe me countless moments of joy, entertainment, suspense and frustration, The latter one is because I always reached the last chapter available and didn’t want to stop reading.
I like this book But honestly when this book is going to end it went too long already
If I'm been honest, I'm here to seek this author help for him to help me check my new sci fi novel titled The Strongest Interstellar Soldier System so that he can tell me if it's good or not. Also I really loved his novel too.
it's a really great book just limited on how quick you can read it by web novel
I am caught up with all 6k+ chs so I like to think this review will be pretty accurate TLDR: The author (Exolor) has written a story with many ups…and downs. Many parts can feel repetetive and bland which is too be expected with a 3ch per day upload schedule. However, he is pretty good a worldbuilding (by brute force) and characters as well as plot is amazing. Longer review At the beginning I had a lotta questions like “tf are mechs gonna do against a battleship armed with armageddon weapons”. Exolor slowly reveals the power of mechs as our mc becomes more integrated with high society. Minor spoiler: the new question is “tf a whole ass navy gonna do against a single god mech”. It’s this worldbuilding that really gets me so hooked. I feel like an absolute clown dancing to the MTA\CFA (basically the superpowers) propaganda. I love how these organizations have crazy pr but spoiler: are completely fractured and rather insane. They hide and manipulate the public to the point that they can be seen as antagonists. Our boy Ves is also realistically, a really small actor on the grand stage. Until more recent chapters, the MTA and CFA really didn’t give that much of a shit abput him. He is still able to make moves in his local area but the mix between combat and politics really does it for me. The novel has great (if slow) character development and worldbuilding so pretty much everything has buildup and some of my best webnovel moments come from this book. There is a mix of sci-fi and good ol xianxia but it is introduced and integrated in such a clever way that it never felt out of place. The characters are also amazing. Ves can be a little generic in that he is a power obssessed maniac with little to no morals, but he is still very human with a wife (whole can of worms) and children. My favorite characters though are the ones that exist alongside the mc. He has a lotta ppl in his organization but many of them have actual character. They have their own lives, often don’t conform and clash with the mc, and have rather realistic outlooks. I haven’t read RI or LOTM yet (go ahead and call me retarded) so idk if the fights in MT stack up against the gold standards. What I do know is that they are often great. Especially early on, seeing the mechs our boy designs being used in these massive pitched battles (sometimes up to 50+ chapters) often serve as clinaxes to arcs. We also have the legendary debates where mc “Devil Tongue” basically verbally abuses all his attackers and gives crazy speeches (again hyped up by the loooooong chapters of buildup) Flaws Ima be honest, this novel definitely isn’t perfect and a lot of people will drop this. Length: Holy shit is this thing long. A lot of filler and stretched discussions that turn into absolute yapfests That one arc: U know it when u get there. Around 800chs and happens pretty early on. Terrible pacing and often boring as shit. Probably caused people to drop or skip but I swear it gets better and u should at least skim it because some important characters are introduced. Worldbuilding…: As much as I glaze, Exolor will worldbuild and then forget. There are plotpoints and ideas that will either be pulled out his ass or completely forgotten about. Nothing terrible but minor annoyance The wife: Ayy we’re back to her. She is VERY controversial as it seems most either hate her or at least find her annoying. I kinda like her (only because it can be kinda funny the first couple times and I like that she actually talks back) but she feels like a meme character meant to be hated. Not a huge deal but some people are willing to drop over her Overall, if u are patient and are into sci-fi and or xianxia, I recommend
"A Gripping Page-Turner!" The suspense builds steadily, leading to an explosive ending. The intricate plot and deep characters make this a must-read for any thriller fan.
Yo 21 chapter per week is crazy and you been doing this for 7 years? Damn, an adaptation would be impossible at this point.
Amei o livro , ótimos gráficos , boa escrita , enredo top, só acho que tá muito caro para lê-lo todo..
God, when I discovered this story, I was simply hooked. The way the author describes the design of the mechas is simply amazing, intriguing, interesting and complex. Perfect. The adventures, the battles and the mysteries I was fascinated by this world. Unfortunately... this author ruined a good story, after chapter 300 I completely lost my excitement. Two main reasons: Absurd amount of filler chapters. And the protagonist's annoying girlfriend. I really don't understand why there are so many filler chapters. There are 6 thousand chapters released. Dude... this author got lost. And why choose such a hateful character to be the protagonist's romantic partner? Unbelievable. I can't read a single dialogue with that character. Basically torture.
Ya mataron a Gloriana !? Quiero leer de nuevo esta obra de arte. Pero me niego a seguir viendo a Gloriana y a la madre de Vez.
I don't like how the story was development ves mother is the very bad and god pilot is also not doing any good working ves has to do something to stop this madness or this story is going to in worst way.
I absolutely love this webnovel, though there are some glaring issues with it. Pacing is slower than a snail. Often the author repeats the same information multiple times and just slightly rewords it. This happens for the entirety of the 6500 chapters that are currently out. I find myself skimming through many parts as it is literally filler bs. I'm assuming this is done to pad out word count and stretch this novel for more than it already has been going on. It's great already, cut out the fluff. It's unnecessary and gives off the impression that the author thinks we have the memory of a goldfish.
story is good. not predictable. not typical . not too op currently compared to op char
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dude, damn, 6000 episodes and you're still writing? considering you write an episode every day..... have you been writing for 6000 days?!!!!! how do you do that? what kind of imagination do you have?
this could have been such a great novel but author ruins it by stretching out events for hundreds of chapters for side quests that are easily forgotten and add nothing to the overall story. the direction of the story is also all over the place as he the author can't seem to follow through on an idea.
This novel is good. But I am not here for this novel today I am here to recommend you all a very interesting,funny and fulfilling novel with a toooooo OP MC. And that is 'You cannot afford to offend my woman'. I think it is very underrated cause many people don't know about this novel. So please go give it a try. I can guarantee you all that you will be very happy to read it.
I have spent a lifetime reading and writing countless stoic management reports, design briefs, equipment analysis reviews, and business presentations. None of which I would ever describe as witty, insightful, or entertaining until I read by chance The Mech Touch by Exlor. His LMC company designs and builds machines of war from the ground up. This novel will leave your nerd senses tingling for more, and if you think flicking a wall switch to light up a room is magic you will find this book magical from chapter to chapter. Toss away your paperbacks, embrace technical devices and immerse yourself in 'The Age of Mechs'!
I rather enjoy this story. Its more of a slow burn in terms of pacing, which can understandably be a bit frustrating. I'm actually not a super big fan of the actiony bits where Ves gets personally involved, but I understand their importance within the context of the story. I started reading this story because I was looking for something a bit more relaxed compared to the normal fare that I read. The MC often has many conflicting goals so it often feels like he's dragging his feet a bit, but I don't necessarily think that's a bad thing. I don't believe its ever been stated that Ves is a super driven person, so bouts of procrastination aren't uncommon and serve to make him seem more realistic. I don't think said dragging of feet has ever been particularly egregious, but at the same time I binged 350+ of the chapters at once so my perspective may be a bit skewed as a result. Since I've caught up to the most recent chapters, the story's been updating at a pace of two per day, so I think the updating pace is pretty stable. I think the supporting cast is fine, but the story is definitely very focused on Ves himself. We know the names of other characters and a bit of their backstories/motivations, but we don't go super in depth about them. I would say this is an area that could be improved upon, but not something that really detracts from the overall quality of the story itself. As for the World Background, we've been given glimpses into the universe as a whole outside of the small bubble the story's been primarily focused on. As a result, we know there is a greater universe with other planets/characters/aliens out there waiting to be explored. From my recollection, I don't believe there's been too many lore dumps. As things become relevant, Ves (and we as readers) learn more about them, but never really to a truly overwhelming extent. All in all, I think this is a fun story that's trying to be a bit different from the normal fare on this site. From that context, I believe the story I've given is fair. There's room for improvement, but nothing that detracts significantly from its overall quality. I think if you enjoy Superstars of Tomorrow this will be something you might enjoy as well.
*I have read every single chapter up to 1736, skipping and skimming nothing* Slight inclusion of very mild spoilers that mean nothing out of context )) First, I have to say that the critics of the Vandal arc aren’t wrong. When I first read about the conscription, I assumed a time skip would be employed at some point. When they arrived at the Aeon corona system, I assumed time would be sped up on the planet rather than slowing down- this seemed like a great chance to accelerate the war ark. Nevertheless, the MC grew a lot during the arc. It is a bit of a stretch, but this is shaping up to be a 5000 chapter story at this rate. Dedicating 600+ chapters to preliminarily shape the MCs character from a timid indoctrinated weakling into a prototype of a business leader able to survive in a cutthroat world has at least some merit. Before you discount me completely- yes, I agree, there was some ‘false advertisement’. Being disconnected from the system for so long was counter to what most system novels do and many fellow readers will be justifiably annoyed at that. Me? I have no issue. Whilst I love your standard system trope chewing gum novels as much as the next guy sometimes, this isn’t that. In one of the recent chapters, the author described serving in the army as a means, not an end. That is the same thing I have to say for my perspective on his usage of the system. Whilst I cannot speak for the author, what I see from his work is an amalgamation. In mech touch speak, the design seed of the novel has taken fractured spiritual pieces from many different genres and used them to craft its own unique identity. Many people comment about the novel not conforming to expectations from various genres. Well... why should it? In webnovel speak, why continue to define a story by the same tags it started with if the story has come to a point where they are no longer the best choice? What if Ves loses the Metal Scroll for good? I’m sure the readers will riot(I’m sure the thought of introducing this plot element gives the author a headache for this reason) , but my point is that what if it makes the story better for it? Unlike so many people saying how the story has deteriorated, I have actually read the whole thing word for word. Whilst I agree that there were times where I was weary with parts of the story, I have never been disappointed. When ves returns from war, the Story picks up and becomes so much more phenomenal. The start of the new mech generation and his new mechs with their expanding repertoire of abilities are increasingly interesting to read about Tbh,I really tip my hat to the author. Perhaps the difference between phase tech mechs and mastercraft mechs are a subtle jibe at the non conformity of this story to cookie cutter ideologies. I’m sure any mildly intelligent person can think up 100 arguments against anything they wish. ‘Mech designers are unstable, hence justifying the MC making retarded decisions that help the plot’ I’ll take that excuse at face value. Why not? It makes for an interesting plot point. ‘the novel is so much about business but the business aspect isn’t realistic’ I’m entertained reading about it. I’m not a business magnate myself, nor do I expect the author to be too perfect? ‘What’s with cultivation? Why doesn’t it work like this or like that?’ Spirituality is obscure. Can the author make it more obvious? Does a massive pirate ship full of spirituality users not hammer home the point that only the strongest organisations really use it? Whilst Ves always calls it his unique advantage, there have been many hints in the story that he is well aware that he is not unique. He is aware that he is reinventing the wheel in some areas. He chooses not to think about that because it is not helpful to him. Many things are inherently open to debate. The author is building a universe. Where’s the fun if it’s perfect? I encourage fellow readers to read everything. This story is worth it. Enjoy!!
honestly only story i read that can be exceting even after 4000 chapters. with explanation of system that isn t some magic geekshit.
This nível gabe me countless moments of joy, entertainment, suspense and frustration, The latter one is because I always reached the last chapter available and didn’t want to stop reading.
I like this book But honestly when this book is going to end it went too long already
If I'm been honest, I'm here to seek this author help for him to help me check my new sci fi novel titled The Strongest Interstellar Soldier System so that he can tell me if it's good or not. Also I really loved his novel too.
it's a really great book just limited on how quick you can read it by web novel
I am caught up with all 6k+ chs so I like to think this review will be pretty accurate TLDR: The author (Exolor) has written a story with many ups…and downs. Many parts can feel repetetive and bland which is too be expected with a 3ch per day upload schedule. However, he is pretty good a worldbuilding (by brute force) and characters as well as plot is amazing. Longer review At the beginning I had a lotta questions like “tf are mechs gonna do against a battleship armed with armageddon weapons”. Exolor slowly reveals the power of mechs as our mc becomes more integrated with high society. Minor spoiler: the new question is “tf a whole ass navy gonna do against a single god mech”. It’s this worldbuilding that really gets me so hooked. I feel like an absolute clown dancing to the MTA\CFA (basically the superpowers) propaganda. I love how these organizations have crazy pr but spoiler: are completely fractured and rather insane. They hide and manipulate the public to the point that they can be seen as antagonists. Our boy Ves is also realistically, a really small actor on the grand stage. Until more recent chapters, the MTA and CFA really didn’t give that much of a shit abput him. He is still able to make moves in his local area but the mix between combat and politics really does it for me. The novel has great (if slow) character development and worldbuilding so pretty much everything has buildup and some of my best webnovel moments come from this book. There is a mix of sci-fi and good ol xianxia but it is introduced and integrated in such a clever way that it never felt out of place. The characters are also amazing. Ves can be a little generic in that he is a power obssessed maniac with little to no morals, but he is still very human with a wife (whole can of worms) and children. My favorite characters though are the ones that exist alongside the mc. He has a lotta ppl in his organization but many of them have actual character. They have their own lives, often don’t conform and clash with the mc, and have rather realistic outlooks. I haven’t read RI or LOTM yet (go ahead and call me retarded) so idk if the fights in MT stack up against the gold standards. What I do know is that they are often great. Especially early on, seeing the mechs our boy designs being used in these massive pitched battles (sometimes up to 50+ chapters) often serve as clinaxes to arcs. We also have the legendary debates where mc “Devil Tongue” basically verbally abuses all his attackers and gives crazy speeches (again hyped up by the loooooong chapters of buildup) Flaws Ima be honest, this novel definitely isn’t perfect and a lot of people will drop this. Length: Holy shit is this thing long. A lot of filler and stretched discussions that turn into absolute yapfests That one arc: U know it when u get there. Around 800chs and happens pretty early on. Terrible pacing and often boring as shit. Probably caused people to drop or skip but I swear it gets better and u should at least skim it because some important characters are introduced. Worldbuilding…: As much as I glaze, Exolor will worldbuild and then forget. There are plotpoints and ideas that will either be pulled out his ass or completely forgotten about. Nothing terrible but minor annoyance The wife: Ayy we’re back to her. She is VERY controversial as it seems most either hate her or at least find her annoying. I kinda like her (only because it can be kinda funny the first couple times and I like that she actually talks back) but she feels like a meme character meant to be hated. Not a huge deal but some people are willing to drop over her Overall, if u are patient and are into sci-fi and or xianxia, I recommend
"A Gripping Page-Turner!" The suspense builds steadily, leading to an explosive ending. The intricate plot and deep characters make this a must-read for any thriller fan.
Yo 21 chapter per week is crazy and you been doing this for 7 years? Damn, an adaptation would be impossible at this point.
Amei o livro , ótimos gráficos , boa escrita , enredo top, só acho que tá muito caro para lê-lo todo..
God, when I discovered this story, I was simply hooked. The way the author describes the design of the mechas is simply amazing, intriguing, interesting and complex. Perfect. The adventures, the battles and the mysteries I was fascinated by this world. Unfortunately... this author ruined a good story, after chapter 300 I completely lost my excitement. Two main reasons: Absurd amount of filler chapters. And the protagonist's annoying girlfriend. I really don't understand why there are so many filler chapters. There are 6 thousand chapters released. Dude... this author got lost. And why choose such a hateful character to be the protagonist's romantic partner? Unbelievable. I can't read a single dialogue with that character. Basically torture.
Ya mataron a Gloriana !? Quiero leer de nuevo esta obra de arte. Pero me niego a seguir viendo a Gloriana y a la madre de Vez.
I don't like how the story was development ves mother is the very bad and god pilot is also not doing any good working ves has to do something to stop this madness or this story is going to in worst way.
I absolutely love this webnovel, though there are some glaring issues with it. Pacing is slower than a snail. Often the author repeats the same information multiple times and just slightly rewords it. This happens for the entirety of the 6500 chapters that are currently out. I find myself skimming through many parts as it is literally filler bs. I'm assuming this is done to pad out word count and stretch this novel for more than it already has been going on. It's great already, cut out the fluff. It's unnecessary and gives off the impression that the author thinks we have the memory of a goldfish.
story is good. not predictable. not typical . not too op currently compared to op char
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dude, damn, 6000 episodes and you're still writing? considering you write an episode every day..... have you been writing for 6000 days?!!!!! how do you do that? what kind of imagination do you have?
this could have been such a great novel but author ruins it by stretching out events for hundreds of chapters for side quests that are easily forgotten and add nothing to the overall story. the direction of the story is also all over the place as he the author can't seem to follow through on an idea.
This novel is good. But I am not here for this novel today I am here to recommend you all a very interesting,funny and fulfilling novel with a toooooo OP MC. And that is 'You cannot afford to offend my woman'. I think it is very underrated cause many people don't know about this novel. So please go give it a try. I can guarantee you all that you will be very happy to read it.
I have spent a lifetime reading and writing countless stoic management reports, design briefs, equipment analysis reviews, and business presentations. None of which I would ever describe as witty, insightful, or entertaining until I read by chance The Mech Touch by Exlor. His LMC company designs and builds machines of war from the ground up. This novel will leave your nerd senses tingling for more, and if you think flicking a wall switch to light up a room is magic you will find this book magical from chapter to chapter. Toss away your paperbacks, embrace technical devices and immerse yourself in 'The Age of Mechs'!