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Domain of Heaven

Fantasy 10 ตอน 112.4K จำนวนคนดู
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The Heavens haven't been fair to Wu Xi, so she create her own Heaven - a paradise beyond anyone's imagination.

"I dislike the ice of these Heavens."
So she creates her own domain of Ice - the Icy Heaven.

Power is everything in this world, and one day she will stand at the peak of the world.

The history books will record her as a devil, but here the story of the willful Empress of the world begins - and ends.

General Audiences

สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์

Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

4รีวิว

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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yangringdom

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3yr
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Ozzz
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I can't help but praise the promising style of the prologue. Despite some flaws, it delivered spectacularly, and could even be said to be somewhat vivid. And then came the let-down. Switching to first person restrains you too much, which in my opinion does more than just counterbalance the added benefit, of having a better perception of the character's thoughts. On a completely different note, a more attentive proof reading wouldn't hurt

6yr
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FluffyPandas

Pretty good book. Kind of bad update stability, there were about 2 days between the last chapter and the new one. So far, the writing is decent and so is the story. Not much *******, could use a little work on the description. Pretty good describing of the Heavens and the prison. Could use a little more work on developing the personalities of other characters, but then again there are only 4 chapters at this time. Overall, I enjoy the book, and I can't wait for more.

6yr
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AFK_Fluff

I'll be shameless and promote my novel here ^^ Although I don't have the full plot thought out, I have parts of it planned (I hope). Read the prologue, and see if you like my writing style. *clasps hands* I'm sorry if the writing seems immature, I am not the best nor most proficient writer. I'm also not the most efficient writer. If you wanted me to be honest, the plot of this story is probably really generic. There are probably many cliches in here. But I hope something about this is unique. I will try to build the world and the mc's personality. On a side note, I'm very sorry if the updates aren't very stable, but I'm a student and I have exams and such, so please bear with me.

6yr
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