Tales of the Path to Godhood

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NineNetherBird

Hello, author here. I'm planning to make this a romance in an apocalyptic setting with an overpowered MC. It is written in first person and it includes *******-building scenes, horror, as well as romance. I hope that you guys like it.

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Magus

The potential of this novel is extremely high and this was a very interesting read. I especially enjoyed the well crafted battles. They were not meaningless and advanced the storyline. The MC is very likeable and easy to root for. Please keep writing and updating more chapters for us to read.🙃

LV 6

PassTheNoose

A neat little novel following the struggles of a survivor of an apocalypse, as well as his discovery of a whole new world with its own rules. So far the world background isn’t too fleshed out, but the author is slowly dipping his feet into it. As for the protagonist, he is a likeable and determined young mute, albeit a little ***** at times. The ‘system’ is easy to understand, especially with the notes of different skill levels the author has provided us with.

LV 5

OverlordBob

In general, I quite enjoy this story and the mechanics embedded therein. However, the story seems to progress at an overly rapid place, jumping from one scene to the next with little time nor context to acclimate the reader as to what all is occurring. Though I don't mind that very much at all as I find rapid-paced stories to be rather refreshing, what I find to be deplorable is the painful lack of context as to the character, the world around, the apocalypse, and so on and so forth. There just seems to be so little information to soak in and savor. One of the most enjoyable part of stories, in my opinion, is the setting and world(s) that the story encompasses. At the moment, this seems to be sorely lacking, and it heavily impacts the entertainment that can be found therein, at least to me.

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KingBiBiK

GIMME my extra chapter as the 10th reviewer. Pretty good real with amazing descriptions and new game like system. Was little slow in the beginning but picked up very quickly and pacing is good now. A gentleman MC in an apocalyptic world....... Onpy thing is I just want to let the author know there are parts that need little clarity here and there.But am sure he will explain it later well like his descriptions. Good luck.

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Immortal_Potato

Give this book some attention, it's amazing, truly one of the hidden gems of the original book movement. Now I need 140 characters. Time to ramble. I AM A POTATO. BOW BEFORE THE [Potato(Immortal)] LEVEL: ???

LV 5

MrDojo

Only two words describes this novel perfect and they are 'Superb Writing'..... The writing style of the author is really really good.... Very very descriptive. Its like **** your imagination but in a very good way... Had a lot of fun reading the chapters so far... Will definitely be checking out later chapters...for those people searching for a worthwhile original novel to read... This novel is highly recommended... Good luck author.....

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UnKnown1998

Descriptive Writing is always a plus. Fight scenes and background are so well describe, that I felt as if I was right there. Though I'm not sure what to say about some of the ex-machina. It's really interesting to me, and I would recommend this.

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l_ovecraft

As they others said it is a pleasure to read ur writing. Those descriptions and figthing scenes are beautiful. I want to say beforehand that im gonna follow ur novel and add it to my library. ^^ On the other side u have a lot of unused potential in Story development and character design. This is kinda sad because u would be one of the top writers on this website otherwise. What triggered me at time were some logical Paradoxons in ur details but mby thats just my fetish. xDD

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number0NE

Amazing story so far I recommend it strongly ..................................................................................................................................................................................

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Sikria

The story has good potential and the writing is good. There is need of some editing here and there, that at times makes me cringe because they are the same mistakes I tend to make in my writing. But overall really good. The story seems good so far and the characters are slowly being build up. There isn't much to say since I've only got 2 chapters. So far, so good.

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