Ascension of the Lightning God

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Haron

Hi, its the author here! If you are reading this, you must be interested in my novel. This is my first time writing a novel, or anything similar to it. And this means there will be mistakes, but I promise to get better, and hopefully, if you stick around you will see it for yourself. I hope you will enjoy reading.

LV 12

Kerail

As there are not a lot of chapters jet I am not certain how it develops. But right now story development does seem promising. The main characters life has not been nice as his clan has mistreated him a lot. At the start of the story he gets chance to change his fate with development AI. And with it it seems MC goes to somewhat similar journey as the cultivation story's here. I get the feeling that the writing style is bit between how western novels and eastern fantasy is written. During reading it shows that authors first language is not English but the story and writing is fluid enough. So the few odd wordings does not shake me out of the reading experience.

LV 6

VEGEKU

Well, Hello Everyone This Time I'll be Selfish and rate a perfect 5 Star for the novel. I tied that Until now all of Review that I Wrote would be fair and properly rated that others can't say anything. So What's the reason for this 5 Rate? The Answer is very easy to say. It's because that we as reader didn't treat this novel and its Author Properly till now. Story has a fairy good spelling and Grammar writing and we can easily see that the Author tried in each chapter to be perfectly Ready and good in every way. Character Design also was done pretty good and we see different personalty and characters with their own originality. It's almost like some of the translated novels that we can see proper characters and world background, this is a side the very few of the Original novels have in them. and story progress in a very good way and we can see clearly that compare to first chapters of the novels story is becoming better and better Specially ever since MC entered the Academy. Well System and OP for me is a good thing though now we can see this factors in every Novels so this can't be a problem, in this novel MC although has a System but is a very hardworking one and i have a favorable impression of him. So what is that i'm angry about it ? The novel's Ranking !!??? Why is that this novels with the stable Updated chapters and a rather good story-line has no Ranking? Readers at least try to read the novel to this chapter and after that decide to read it or not. Thanks again Everybody and the Author

LV 5

BananaMonkey21

I like it so I'm giving it a 5 star. The pacing at the start was really fast and there are plenty of grammatical errors, but the author is improving and seems to be trying very hard so I will keep reading.

LV 10

Astolfo_My_Waifu

Friendly advice doesn't matter for my rating i'm a little harsh.First i would like to point out that the story pace is fast ... and because of that the novel is being ruined ... in a normal chinese novel the first 20 chapters would be about 70 chapters ... but the author is either impatient or he is an ******* (i understand no need you will ofc learn stuff from the first release) i would like to say that if the author tried to develop the story at the start not like other retarded novels that in 3 chapters the main characters become broken af ...there was no interaction between the readers and the characters at the start which was pretty confusing in my opinion ... hope the author read this and improves this flaw of his ... nonetheless im really enjoying the story hope you aren't offended by my review :)

LV 4

King_Xester

One of my first ever reviews but honestly this is a great novel with a somewhat ok amount of character development I've enjoyed it as it is funny in some aspects few minor grammar mistakes so enjoy

LV 4

Murderer

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LV 12

RagnarokWhite

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Hi,Haron,how brilliant you are,i am attracted by the first chapter.i am eager to read further more.By the way,i am an editor from Stary.ltd. And I'd like to know if you are interested in releasing or distributing your books on our platform. We'll pay you an advance payment as well as royalty if you'd like to work with us.If you are interested ,do let me know and feel free to ask me anytime you like if you have any questions via this email:yxli94@foxmail.com.i am looking forward to your message.

LV 4

Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************* Awesome job! **************************************** *********************** Thanks for the great stories ***********************************

LV 12

Zamo80

I enjoyed the novel but I would have wanted to know if Marcus nd Mei got married or if Ethan came back or Marcus revenge for his treatment as a kid. Missing a lot of information. But thank you

LV 4

khansubhan070

It is as far as I've read and i don't have anything more to say so i am just writing some random **** to get EXP. apparently it isn't enough looks like i have to write some more bull****

LV 6

K9DEMONWOLF

Short and ****** story. It is basically a test novel. Not much world or character development. It is good for people that want a ****** cultivation novel

LV 15

Coldfire142

This story was short but it is still a good read. The main character has good morals and doesn't make any stupid decisions like in other novels. This story also doesn't have the super long descriptions of every move every time there is a battle which is why it is so short. I plan to read more novels by this author.

LV 14

Shogi

So far so good, I’m looking forward to continuing this journey with the writer of this novel. I always did like lightning I hope this novel were my appetite since I’m a avid reader

LV 5

Ultimate_Truth

It was good an ******* novel that you pushed to the end, was a good work and at least ill check your future works too, congratulations finishing it, and it wasn't that messed up it was fun to read.

LV 4

Delarosa61

I have enjoyed this story and I'm happy that you did finished it. I did however think that the end was to rushed. The relationship between the mc and his girlfriend could have been done in a chapter or two not just the couple of lines you gave it. Once again I did enjoy this novel and will read another if you write again.

LV 6

SirVic

The story is an interesting mix of cultvation,mages and a bit of sci-fi. The challenge is that all this elements have been introduced without much development and at it's a bit of a mess. At the moment the story feels more like a number of short stories jumbled together however it is still an enjoyable read.

LV 11

Axem

Quite different from system type novel that i read so far. Nice intro and the plot seems develop well. Looks forward for story building.Keep up the good works ^^.