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[Heyaaa author here this is actually the first time i write something so i really need your review to fix my writing and I try to fix it and taking you guys feedback]
Rei, a normal student living in normal world, wakes up one day to find himself transported into the gacha game he always play.
Granblue Fantasy, To make things even more weird, he suddenly have the appearance of Lucilius, an astral that want to destroy the world
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Been looking for Granblue Fantasy fanfic for a long time now. So hoping this will not go away. Also, can't wait to see some harvin too
Ey yo, do I need to know about the gbf story to enjoy this fics? Because I don't play gbf and am not familiar with the gbf verse lore. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
granblue fantasy??? dude... so much Harvin Hêntâî XD...... who are in the hârêm? the possibilities are huge... soooooo many awesome waifus
finally a granblue fantasy fanfic, please make rakam explotion more grandeur, the bigger the better, please ride bonito once, and open bobobobobo hair without get killed
I'm rating it high because this is a Granblue Fantasy Fan-Fic and also because I like how this story is going especially when the MC managed to bang crazy Vira.
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It was fun and interesting being the very few Granblue Fantasy Fanfics and the whole concept of being in the body of Lucilius was interesting at first but as the story went, things kinda got dull. While Rei's situation makes him interesting, his overall character has been kinda boring overall. He isn't that generic but nothing about him except for his situation is interesting. I wouldn't say that it was much of an issue but i kinda found the whole harem aspect of the story kinda forced especially when characters were being genderbent just for the sake of being with him. Sandalphon and Belial being turned into women was just their harem's sake. It also suffers from pacing issues and just how random some events are. Not just the Side Stories with it being crammed in the middle of an Arc but even the main plot suffers from pacing issues.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Finally a gbf fanfiction! Will keep an eye for this, so far seems good Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Keep up the good work! Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx