(Hiatus) The Most OP Young Master

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TougherAgenda

I can understand that if you were getting low ratings you would rewrite but you rewrite when doing oretty well, sadly ill be dropping this as its a waste of time to waut for it to start iver again i wish you the best if LuCk mate

LV 14

XXgamer_98

So far I like the fic. The cheats that he(MC) got are not broken. It all depends on how much work he is willing put in his training. For example if he didn't start training early on he would still be a weakling. The cheats does not make him OP without doing anything. The writing quality is pretty good. There are some errors in the sentences that could've been wrote better. There is a little problem with the Author fat-fingering some letters sometimes but it's nothing major. So far I've only noticed 4 or 5 of these mistakes in all the chapters combined. Well that's it. Hopefully the Author read this so he can fix those minor problems. (P.S.- I recomend Author to start using grammarly. Even the free version will be good to have it because it will automatically highlight the words with a red line that have spelling mistakes.)

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

Friendship, justice and good feelings - what a great qualities... Unfortunately they couldn't give you an intresting story by themselves. And that's what happens here. That's just uninteresting. Either way, for akkikan 2.0, at least you have better grammar. And more consistent characters? Hmm...

LV 4

Dekxz

Good start. And i need more chaps,☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 3

Azazel_69

Great story. . . .. . .. . .. . . . . . . .. . .-..-.-..-..---.......-.-..-...-..-..-..-..-......-.-.....-.-..-.-...-.-..-.-..-.-.-.--...

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Silver_Epsilon

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LV 14

I_am_inevitable

I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 14

Fantastic_Spirit

I'm assuming its a crossover world considering the amount of characters in it. But anyway, I've seen other fanfictions where they try to force a scene in, and just please don't do that. I'm not here to discourage you, on the contrary I would like you to continue but there are some things that are very difficult to have to read. Example; MC: Ring that hides magical power from someone close to the top in DxD Redheaded Girl Who can barely classify as high class: Finds out when he did nothing that would warrant attention. Like really don't pull stuff like this. No diss to the author who wrote the novel who's scenario I'm using if you recognize.

LV 2

Infamous_Fitz

The updating and writing quality is good it's just the world background and story development Is what i have a problem with cause we don't know what world the mc is in but eugeo from sao is in the same world as him then right after the mc meets eugeo he tries to adopt him just cause it's eugeo and the parents agreed and the mc and his parents are archdukes so they would never adopt someone just cause their son asked them to another thing that doesn't make sense is the mc found while he went outside by himself with no guards or anybody

LV 13

Yanagi_sense1

Story is good...grammar is good...character interactions are good and the anime worlds that are combined all blend well..overall good job and jeep up the good work

LV 4

JOKER_JAY

this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work

LV 4

FOX_ZRS

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FOX_ZRS

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LV 3

Salmon_El_Solomon

great level, continue with the work, but since it feels a bit forced and pointless, you should change the age of the protagonist, 3 years and he already knows how to read, practice mana and body training, all that is very exaggerated, apart from the wishes you could nephew it, saying go what it has is body potential not a rapid compression, making the childhood arc last longer and explaining more the world and the systems, such as school, etc., since there are amusement parks, as it does not go If there are schools where do they get all the science or studies they require?

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Immortal_HolyWater

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FOX_ZRS

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FOX_ZRS

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FOX_ZRS

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