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WARNING: NO LONGER UPDATING ON WEBNOVEL. THIS IS THE DRAFT VERSION. REVISION IS NOW ON WATTPAD AND CHRYSANTHEMUM GARDEN.
In Neo's past life, he was a wicked man who schemed wickedly against those he shouldn’t have. It is what led to his eventual demise at the hands of those people. After dying and reincarnating into the modern world, he became a successful medical researcher in order to pay back all his wicked deeds. He died again from working too hard and is sent back to the beginning, before his schemes and wicked deeds offended the wrong people. This second chance might be his salvation. He must try his best to fix all that he’s ruined!
It is said that the oldest Young Master of the Odum Family has become strange as of late. Perhaps he is plotting something? Aish, that scummy troublemaker better not be thinking of plotting against his younger brother again. Everyone, duck and cover! Don't want to be in the crossfire!
Neo: Alright! My first order of business--repent for my sins!
Neo's Sin-Filled Reputation Meter: Beyond Negative One-Hundred. The Scummy Troublemaker. Bastard. Whoreson. Trash. Worse-than-Trash.
Neo: ............
Also on Wattpad and Chrysanthemum Garden
Published on 4/5/20
Status: This story on Webnovel is the DRAFT and will no longer be updating. Official version is on Wattpad and Chrysanthemum Garden.
Cover by Chaotic. You can check out their other works on Instagram @sg_chaotics!
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Our dear author describes this as a slice of life but I can definitely sense a tangible plot here that is very balanced and paced well. The novel updates really consistently too! (Though we readers are never satisfied, ah). Nazareth/Neo our main character is an intricate character who in another novel would play the part of a cannon fodder stair-step to a dirt-to-riches protagonist. But Naza died to his own foul plans to kill his half-brother, and then was reborn into another world only to later die there to overwork and reawaken in his first life! Throughout story we have a diverse cast that is easily distinguishable (but one can always use some more beauties aaa) from one another from Vespera, a woman of few words, to Finneas, a "colorfully" speaking (and thinking) boy. But ah! This is a BL novel right? Who's the male lead? The answer is Anyway, Naza re-awakened is slowly rebuilding his twisted world. It's truly a story I enjoy! All in all, a book worthy to be in your library! This is still early in the story and I can't wait to watch it develop with you all!!!
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*This contains no spoilers and was posted as of the completion of Volume One.* I say read it: I truthfully enjoy the writing. There are some genuinely beautiful and thought filled passages that I admire. The characters are quirky and with this review being only of only Volume 1 (currently only one published), the character cast is already developing their own individual arcs! I love the world building, and I’m excited to see what MC does within this world. The MC did some horrible things in his past life, and did his best in the modern life where he woke up to be a better person, to save lives rather than take or ruin them. Now that he’s been brought back to his first life, he is determined to help the people he wronged, as a form of atoning for all he did. He doesn’t expect forgiveness or pity. He wants to give back even while he acknowledges that he can’t escape the responsibility for the fact that he still did horrible things, no matter what he does to make up for such actions. It not being a pity party or characters *always easily forgiving him (some do, but even then it feels like there is valid, in-character reasons that allow them to put forward that forgiveness). That to me is important and rare to see in protagonists. They get to have “sins” and past actions erased, when in reality you always hold the actual responsibilty of what you did in your past, no matter what good you do to try and make amends in the future. That alone is worth reading in my eyes.
I really like your story and I can't wait to see what happens next to the Mc in your story😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰😗😗🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍🙄🥰🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰
Book is really good!! Made me cry a couple of times The only thing that I am not satisfied by..... is that the update too little a week for me I want to read more of it So I hope the author will keep updating I hope that the male lead will be able to talk to the other characters and that they won’t misunderstand him and that they will accept the new person he is now And not make things hard for him I want them to be able to get along with him And not hate him
i hope the writer to contue ...........................................................please ...................................................🥺
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I hope you continue to work in this novel because I like it a lot. The main character has this tinge of wholesomeness and maybe cute. I look forward to what you have in store for us author.
Amazing story, I couldn't stop reading. I can't wait for more chapters. I like the reincarnation idea and having the mc change his way. Really like that concept.
I... don’t know what to say anymore. It made me cry too much. Sorry for not writing an in-depth review like I usually do but... I cried so much that I ran out of tissue.
This book is really good, I would recommend reading it. While reading the chapters you don't get bored and you really feel for the characters.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ lovely story, light read. The beginning is a bit heavy but it gets really light and fluffy. The MC was forgiven to fast for my liking but overall and amazing read. I would definitely recommend this!!
I really love this web novel. I hope the author can update soon. 🥰 👍👍👍 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i reqlly love the way this book was put together. The chracters reactions and motivations are very intresting. I absolutely love the plot of the story. The protagonist actually feels like a real person with feelings and weaknesses. All in all love the story❤❤. Just hope it gets updated soon. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates. Lots of love towards the godly author 😘
This is one of the stories I'm willing to wait but also eager for it to finish so I can read it. I just love how the MC is trying to somehow make things right and how strong his desire to repent is. There is still a long way to go but he's doing it step-by-step. And I just want to mention how cute the interactions are between him and the people around him(especially Finny and Aurelion).
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This novel is great, every character is well built, no one is perfect. Through this novel I learned forgivenessForgiving someone who has hurt you is not easy, but it is also not easy to hold a grudge for a lifetime. Only learn how to let go of hatred to become easy to breathe, easy to live.(if there is any mistake in my grammar please forgive me because i use google Pandemic)
I have been reading this for a minute now and I absolutely love it! I am excited to figure out who the love interest is even though I have no idea who it is. I'm looking forward to more! Keep up the great work!
I am really enjoying this story and highly recommend to those who enjoy"villain turns good" story tropes. My main criticism is that the story updates are far a part....
The first few chapters really came out strong with a unique plot that not alot of writer use when doing a reincarnation/rebirth story, character descriptions and backstory, plus an added comedy on the side. Those three things captured my interest into continuing to read it further. The story progresses in a manner where the reader will not get bored, instead see the characters and the world setting get developed. Although you might get impatient to find out who’s the ML, but the moments with his family and friends makes up for It. Highly recommend to give it a try as it is a marvelous story after all.
Shameless author, here (*´∀`*). Well, if I’m being honest, this story is kinda cringey and not at all professional. I make fun of tropes, write some sad things, some happy stuff, some filler things and world building, sprinkle in some very, very discreet romance, and plan ahead by two chapters. There’s really no outline, hence the slice of life tag. I just wanted to make a feel good novel for the purpose of a fun read ( ´ ▽ ` ). I have heard in other reviews and comments that I made some people cry, but I’m not very confident in writing anything that’s really tear-jerking, so I was surprised that you guys found it sad. Personally, I think my writing is bland. Too wordy, too descriptive, not enough interactions, all the characters seem to have forced personalities, and the MC is either too depressing and self-centered, constantly throwing a pity party or all smiley and “fairy-like” and blah, blah, blah. At first, when I wrote the story, I was relieving boredom due to quarantine. There isn’t enough of bl otome male villains living in fantasy worlds, trying to be happy, and repenting for what they’ve done stories. And for the ones I’ve read, I wish there’s more that are less pa pa pa, and more plot and development. I don’t mind smut, but, I’m kinda feeling for something more wholesome, ya know? Now, with my rant out the way, here’s the actual review. The story is a slice of life and slow, with time skips that vary from days, to weeks, to months. There are filler chapters meant for characters to bond and some world building. There are lots of characters with long names. There are no real villains and heroes. Any future conflicts have motives and nothing is black and white. No one is truly good and no one is truly bad. That’s just based on perceptions. This includes my main character. He’s not perfect and I’m not bias enough to be blinded by this fact. If I make him seem so, it is due to how he is viewed. I told myself that if a villain can get a redemption, then what right did I have to make another villain go against him? Wouldn’t that be too hypocritical of me? This is a story about the life of my character achieving happiness and atonement of his past sins. He’s done a lot of unforgivable things and he is aware of that. Again, this story is meant to be a fun read. Maybe a little sad, but it’s the journey of a man who has done too many bad deeds and died, living another life (briefly), dying again, and coming back to the beginning where all things started his path to ruins. He is finding his happiness with the second chance he’s been given. This is the story of a boy who is making friends, mending the relationship with his family, tending to his greenhouse, going to school, accepting himself and being happy. With a sprinkle of some bl on the side because Neo deserves everything good in the world and of course he needs several suitors fighting for him while obliviously looking on in confusion during the battle royale because this is my child and no one deserves him 凸ಠ益ಠ)凸. Oh, and theirs some mild cursing, so watch out for that. I hope you will all enjoy it.
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