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Cross is a person who doesn't have a friend because for him ,it's just a waste of time. In simple term, he is a loner. He doesnt have a family because they already died. When our protagonist is walking on a road bridge suddenly a truck out of no where is coming on his way and he died.
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(But he did'nt died because of truck-kun but he's just so scare that he felt on the bridge and died)
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But little does he know this is not the end for him.(of course he know, why? Because im the one telling you.)



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(A/N: English is not my mother tongue so dont expect much, and im not really good at writing story actually im suck so just bash me if you want promise im gonna cry and i dont think i can't do a daily update so im just gonna update when i finish one. Oh yeah this is just me writing what's on my mind. Bye love you all)


-The Great Buggy-Sama





(Buggy wont be part of the crew. Just saying)

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TOFIE
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What exactly does your synopsis have to do with the story? So the main character believes friends to be useless? I know these people think their family and the people they know as the same it does not limit to only friends. So when you give us that and then immediately he kisses a stranger's ass and including a god's ass. What crack are you on? That drug will wear off soon and you will drop the story as all Authors have. Your story does not make sense even if it is a power trip, think about it. What could being in the grand line give you, if you have everything? You may think it's cool, but it's not. You as a devil fruit user is putting yourself in harm's way and even if you take 10 years to train, that is nothing. I'm not going to waste my time with this story. It's terrible. It's just simply not exciting to read about.

3yr
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suicide_Elf

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3yr
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Buggy_The_Clown

I know it's trash but what do you expect just drop a 5 star and done.😙 (I know it's now good so i will accept every bash you says😣 and used it as a motivation to improved🙃)

3yr
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