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Άδης

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Kaeel desde jovem vive em uma realidade onde portais com monstros e caçadores existem, e após a misteriosa morte de seus pais ele foi obrigado a sobreviver de rações do exército, mas após entrar pela primeira vez em um portal, tudo mudou.

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R0drigues

Muita coisa ainda não foi abordada, mas isso simplesmente pelo motivo de não ter chegado a hora ainda, eu ainda preciso dar uma imagem clara sobre a personalidade e aparência dos meus personagens, tenho que desenvolver a trama principal e deixar o fundo mundial, pois uma das maiores falhas de várias histórias que eu leio são o fundo mundial, tudo acontece em só um lugar e eu não gosto disso. Também tem o caso da forma que eu escrevo e minha gramática, preciso deixar minha forma de escrita consistente e melhorar meus erros de gramática e pontuação. Eu vou tirar uma semana para poder revisar os erros dos quais eu tenho consciência e arrumá-los, mas vou precisar da ajuda de vocês, então se acharem algum erro, por favor me notifique.

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R0drigues

DO YOU WANT ME TO TRANSLATE THIS STORY INTO ENGLISH? I NEED OPI NOT FOR THAT. So please leave your thoughts here and I'll see if it's going to be worth the effort I have to translate.

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