/ Fantasy / [Origin]
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Welcome to the Earth and it’s nice to meet you. Who am I you’re asking? I’m the author of this wonderful story. So let’s continue. This is a wonderful place where you can find anything you need. If you look at your left, you could clearly see the brand new dead body of a teenage girl. Look closely how skinny she is, this of course shows that she died of starvation. And I’m truly happy for her as there are a lot worse ways to die. Let’s not dig the specifics but I think you know what I’m talking about.
Now let’s look at your right side. There you can spot a wonderful creature in full glory. This creature looks like a juicy pieces of meat mashed together to create it. But beware and never eat a meat of that creature. Or you’re gonna look like that young woman who is now melting after experiencing the divine taste of this creature’s meat. I think now you know the general setting of this story.
Now enjoy a good read!
แท็ก
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
9รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Whew... This novel really has a Impressive World Background. The characters too And the grammar is so good, it's really easy to understand. Overal 5 stars 😊
Almost no one is giving a good reviews about my novel. Last review was few months ago so I want to give it a great review. I’m the author so I can do anything I want. 5 stars, 5 stars, 5 stars
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I really like your story and I believe it has a lot of potential. I, with your permission, would personally love to proofread the chapters and make them grammatically correct. If we work together this story can become a great one. I’m currently at chapter 6 and it’s really good so far. The main problem is the grammar and I’d like to help with that.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
A great idea for a novel as well as implementation. Not many people can write an interesting story about OP characters. The flow of writing also improves as the story goes as I assume the author gets more comfortable. I reccomend it to anyone who likes OP original characters
bom vamos la sou brasileiro e curti a premissa dessa historia por isso estarei acompanhando aqui, espero bastante dessa historia e espero q nao pare de postar.
Its a great story with an impressive world background and an OP protagonist but it's the good kind were he does not some stupid **** and goes for a harem.
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