Another vehicle joined up on our other side, a trucked-up speeder with the windows down. The driver of that one — I'll admit — made me blink. Just for a moment but she was fucking gorgeous. Dusky-skinned like the guy, dark and soulful eyes, hair in a bun, and with curves that wouldn't quit. S-tier scrap bunny tomboy. 10 out of 10, no comments or critiques.
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Another vehicle joined up on our other side, a trucked-up speeder with the windows down. The driver of that one — I'll admit — made me blink. Just for a moment but she was fucking gorgeous. Dusky-skinned like the guy, dark and soulful eyes, hair in a bun, and with curves that wouldn't quit. S-tier scrap bunny tomboy. 10 out of 10, no comments or critiques.
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I have a tendency towards monologue to 'get into' the POV character's head -- both for myself as a writer and for the readers. I perfectly understand why you might find it tedious, but I don't think it's unnecessary. I'll try to be more aware of getting carried away with it going forward, though. Good criticism!
She didn't let the slight blush at how utterly hopeless she was at romantic endeavors show on her face, simply answering Atom's question with a bowing nod of her head.
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Once more, the partition parted. A tall, curvy, and ethereally elegant woman entered. She seemed practically untouchable to the world around her. As if reality itself wouldn't dare. Elven ears peeked out from beneath almost glowing golden hair. And those curves were damn-near holy. No other word could do them justice.
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Asajj's admittedly fine but rarely 'beautiful' features scrunched up in disgust and confusion as she saw what Dooku had been working toward during their conversation, "What? It's just a bunch of stuffy old records."
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Their extract target had been identified and scouted. She was a Sakiyan woman named Sstala. Green skin, pointed ears, a slim and trim figure, severely attractive features, and not a single hair on any part of her body. According to Suunri, Sstala was dangerously competent and firmly entrenched in Zorba's upper circle. She wasn't so much a 'vassal' as she was one of his key assistants.
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Another vehicle joined up on our other side, a trucked-up speeder with the windows down. The driver of that one — I'll admit — made me blink. Just for a moment but she was fucking gorgeous. Dusky-skinned like the guy, dark and soulful eyes, hair in a bun, and with curves that wouldn't quit. S-tier scrap bunny tomboy. 10 out of 10, no comments or critiques.
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