Plural for life is Lives, not Lifes. And instead of Lifes continue, "Life goes on" might be better
"Let's forget about it. I don't care about that incident nowadays. Lifes continues, and there are plenty of girls out there that might fit old me, quite well. There's so many gorgeous women in this world that also have bright personalities, caring, loving, why would we be stuck with some specific girl? Love? Don't get me started."
Book&Literature · Morpheus146
"had a troubled" might work better
His little brother, Chris, was having a troubled expression initially, as if he was pondering about something, and without bothering him, leaving him to his thoughts, unexpectedly heard him open about something that made him frown.
Book&Literature · Morpheus146
"city adorned with" might work better
As he was watching the city ornamented with the Christmas ornaments from the large windows with no major changes this year too, a journey back home on the bus that in his mind was normal, it didn't stay normal, since his little brother had something to remark.
Book&Literature · Morpheus146
Very nice. I honestly hope he will be able to take the girls out of the game at some point, one way or another.
Steroids? More like the origin of all steroids
Eeeeein! I want more :(
noooo, i want more ;(
I mean A
I vote 1.
A very good story that I would recommend to anyone. The only "downside" that I can point is that the chapters are posted too rarely. Days apart between each chapter (at least 3).
Waking up in a TV Show
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