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4. Daphne Greengrass
Book&Literature · Clean_Wizard
Hope you feel better soon!
no idea
please dont stop. its a great story. so good it should be in the top 10.
Some truly awful MTL fanfics, giga harem stories where none of the original characters behave anything like in their original story, or 5 chapter stories with word count fillers in them and two 1k word chapters a week receive more recognition (stones, collections, comments,...) than this story. And I'm not saying there's something wrong with it, I recognise that either my writing sucks or just isn't appealing to the audience on this platform. But it's also not encouraging me to work on something when I could just procrastinate in some other way.
Book&Literature · Nuclide
Thats something i never undertood, the process of creating a hurcrux, a supreme act of evil, to be "just" murder someone. To me it shoud be to murder a innocent soul, like a child or an infant. I think thats more evil than the broad and original explanation.
Harry took a deep breath and spoke, "A Horcrux is an extraordinary and malevolent magical creation. It serves as a vessel in which a Dark wizard or witch hides a detached fragment of their soul. The purpose? Immortality. As long as the receptacle remains intact, so does the soul fragment inside it, anchoring the maker to the world of the living—even if their body suffers fatal damage" At their horrified reactions, he continued "The process of creating a Horcrux is deeply sinister. It involves committing murder, the supreme act of evil, which tears the soul. Herpo the Foul, an ancient wizard from Greece, is credited with creating the first known Horcrux."
Book&Literature · Chelshokk
I love the ideal of Arya and Eragon together. I get her responsibilities, but if her Mother survives i dont see a problem with her following eragon off wolrd.
3. Love interest. Who should Eragon fall in love with? I have left his options open for the most part but I could easily decide to wait until he goes to LOTR or the multiverse. If he does choose someone from here, will they follow him in his journey or stay in their respective worlds?
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
i think its to train the Magic for it, stamina and control, to make her flames more intense and also so she gets less tired when she uses in battle for a longer period.
Saphira, on the other hand, has been training with Glaedr, teaching her about the history of their kind, how to use air currents to make flight less strenuous, and having her breath fire for hours at a time without stopping. (Yes this doesn't make sense but it's what's written in the books sooo…)
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
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This is THE BEST naruto fanfic i have read in a while. No complaints so far. Its realy good.
there's an error here. it's gnomes, not goblins. goblins are the bankers in the book, not a Garden pest.