Julivan

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2017-10-28 Unido Brazil
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Moments 11
Julivan
Julivan
6 months ago
Posted

The chat only has women, you already know the rest... ...............................

Julivan
Julivan
1 years ago
Posted

it's a good romance but if mc's mother gets into the harem i drop the romance, every woman mc knows has to get into the harem it's getting boring. comment made by the translator

Julivan
Julivan
1 years ago
Commented

only the name does not help, it needs the description of the characters

Julivan
Julivan
1 years ago
Commented

If the author puts Anna in the harem I give up on the novel, I still don't understand why everyone treats Leon badly

Julivan
Julivan
1 years ago
Commented

I hope the author doesn't change his parent's relationship!!!

Julivan
Julivan
2 years ago
Commented

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Julivan
Julivan
3 years ago
Posted

First of all I don't know how to speak English, so this comment is made by the translator so I don't know if it will be legible, I liked the premise of the story, I liked the system and I liked the oc but the exaggerated number of women spoils the story for me, for for some reason all deliveries made so far have been for women, i like harem but with a limit. Let's just say that the exaggeration of female characters bothers me.

Julivan
Julivan
3 years ago
Posted

Beta mc!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Julivan
Julivan
3 years ago
Posted

First of all, I don't speak English, so this comment is made by the translator. Now about the fanfic I liked almost everything the powers of the MC, the background story, what spoils the fanfic are women, there are many, when you introduced the chat I was excited but when I saw that all the members were women it destroyed all my expectations, I like the harem genre as long as it has an acceptable number of members and some development, so I only read until chapter 37 so maybe things will change. Obs: The tsunade as a member of the harem was very unnecessary in my opinion, the age difference is very big, he is 11 years old, is she some kind of pervert?

Julivan
Julivan
3 years ago
Posted

First of all I don't know how to speak english, so I don't know if it will be readable since I'm using the r translation. Come on I usually like most chat fanfics but the harems are killing them including yours, mc fell in love with Rias literally out of nowhere, he has a system that summons hot women, let's just say that I don't like where this fanfic is going.