Zoi4erom

Zoi4erom

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Cat in a mask

2024-09-09 Unido Global
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Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
1 months ago
Replied to Tony_Rucker

Hmmm... No.

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
1 months ago
Replied to Murrwashere

He is destined for a different fate, recommended by a certain reader in chapter 56 :3

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
1 months ago
Replied to Barbatos_3461

Aaaaa, got it

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
1 months ago
Replied to Barbatos_3461

Oops...

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
1 months ago
Replied to Amataratsul

Your words are partially true. Originally, up until the chapters with Hatred, I had planned to develop the story along a completely different path. However, then I had the brilliant idea to give our heroine Hatred. Let's go back to the moment when Toga forced Kimika to kill two people. Instead of that, I had planned for criminals to come to our heroines to retrieve the same trigger they had obtained almost at the beginning of the story. Toga and Kimika would have handed it over to them, but due to their behavior towards Kimika, an enraged Toga would have tracked them down and killed them. However, since she killed them in their hideout, she was captured after the fight. Kimika, not waiting for her friend’s return, would have started searching for her. Upon overhearing a conversation in an alley (or somewhere else), realizing that she couldn’t handle it on her own, she would have attacked one of the heroes (Leaf or Fluffy — my own original heroes that I didn’t end up using in the story). She would have forced them to call Eraser Head to arrange a meeting. She would have asked for his help in rescuing her friend, and after a brief exchange, they would have reached an agreement. Eraser Head would help save Toga, and in return, Kimika and Toga would peacefully surrender to him and go into rehabilitation (this plan was devised by Nezu, who would have been eavesdropping on their entire conversation). After the fight, Kimika and the rescued Toga would escape from Eraser Head, but he had prepared in advance by attaching a tracker to Kimika’s clothes. In the end, a battle would have ensued between our heroines and many heroes: Eraser Head, All Might, Midnight, and about 5–6 other heroes. During the battle, Kimika would awaken her third eye, which at the time was planned to function similarly to the mechanic in *Undertale*, allowing her to teleport to a checkpoint (but not after death). It would work by setting a checkpoint upon activation, and when desired, Kimika could teleport to it, but without regenerating her injuries. After more than 20–30 jumps, Kimika, severely wounded and with no part of her body left unscathed, would decide to make one last jump. However, Toga would stop her, saying that they had lost. (This would have been more emotional, but I'm too lazy to describe it all.) Afterward, an arc would begin where Kimika and Toga go through rehabilitation, as Nezu wants Kimika to somehow heal All Might. There would have been about 5-10 chapters where our heroine couldn’t activate her quirk, and her physical condition would have been dire. During this time, they would have surprised everyone around them with their behavior, especially their games with Toga. After 10 chapters, the story would have moved to the Sports Festival, where, in the final match, Toga would fight Kimika, demonstrating her ability to copy quirks. After the festival, I didn’t have any plans beyond the idea that they would escape from the academy and live together. (Because I really didn’t want to describe a fight with All For One due to the overwhelming number of quirks he has. :c And most of them are visual, making them difficult to describe. Also, I might accidentally miss one of his quirks, and I’d be destroyed for that.) The end. THIS WAS WRITTEN QUICKLY FROM MEMORY—MOST OF THE IDEAS HAVE ALREADY FADED. But in general, it would have been about 80-90 chapters, if not fewer. I planned it as a short story to improve my writing skills and just to get a feel for what it’s like to be a writer. Then, I would have started the next project, where I would dedicate more time to motivations, characters, making them more complex, and so on.

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
1 months ago
Replied to Amataratsul

There is such a thing, but I think nothing bad happened because of it

Then, noticing that Kimika was starting to worry too much, Toga hugged her tightly, whispering in her ear: "Don't worry, it's still just a game. I don't intend to hurt you, let alone kill you." There was a sincere tenderness in her voice, and the embrace seemed truly comforting, as if she wanted to calm her friend, reminding her that even though everything seemed serious, in the end, it was just a game.

MHA: Time Manipulator

MHA: Time Manipulator

Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
1 months ago
Replied to Amataratsul

Well, maybe you’re right about Toga being used as a plot device, but I didn’t intend to make her that way... I wanted to show her as a living character with her own goals. As for the manipulation — it’s simple, Toga in my fanfic is different from the original because of Kimika, who appeared in her life and accepted her for who she is. (P.S. I guess I did go a bit overboard with Toga’s manipulations.)

Do you like the vibe between Kimika and Toga? It seems like Kimika can't pull herself away from Toga, even doing it in her sleep.

MHA: Time Manipulator

MHA: Time Manipulator

Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
2 months ago
Replied to Magn0lia

Good luck, and thank you for staying with me until this point!

Uncharacteristic Hatred? Does Toga have it too???? What is this HATRED? But how???? It was supposed to be only in Kimika??? WHAT THE F**K???

MHA: Time Manipulator

MHA: Time Manipulator

Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom

Zoi4erom
Zoi4erom
2 months ago
Replied to Magn0lia

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"Hmm, so it really is in you too... I wasn't wrong to be cautious. Well then, now that you can no longer pretend to be asleep and can clearly see the situation you're in, maybe we can finally talk? Though, of course, don't worry, I have plenty of time... just like you do. So we can start the conversation whenever you wish, but..." Nezu didn't finish, as the paralyzed Toga, lying before him, sharply interrupted him. 

MHA: Time Manipulator

MHA: Time Manipulator

Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom

  • MHA: Time Manipulator original

    MHA: Time Manipulator

    Anime & Comics ADVENTURE ROMANCE WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS VILLAIN TRAGEDY ACADEMY YURI MHA BNHA

    In a world where people possess incredible abilities, our protagonist is born into a society obsessed with becoming heroes. As she grows up in this world, she dreams of becoming the Number One Hero. With the power to control time now in her grasp, she faces a choice: Will she fulfill her childhood dream and follow the conventional hero's path, or will she be given a different role? Important Note: The story does not feature a harem, and the protagonist does not start out as all-powerful. Her journey is shaped by the world she lives in and her personal choices. Additionally, the time control in this story will be presented in a unique and non-standard form, different from typical portrayals. As I am just beginning my journey as a writer, my writing style may differ from others, and English is not my first language. I welcome feedback on any mistakes or areas for improvement! * patreon.com/Zoi4erom — here you can read more chapters and faster than others! *

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