TheFriedPotato

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2024-08-03 Unido Global
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TheFriedPotato
TheFriedPotato
4 months ago
Replied to Shehu_Adam

Hey, thanks for the review and the compliments! I'm relatively new on webnovel, so I'd be really grateful for some advice.

TheFriedPotato
TheFriedPotato
5 months ago
Commented

Really like the writing style, just wish the descriptions of the surrounding would be more detailed

TheFriedPotato
TheFriedPotato
5 months ago
Commented

Damn that's actually pretty well written

TheFriedPotato
TheFriedPotato
6 months ago
Commented

I hope there will be more showing instead of explaining the power system and ideas...

Since both Sunny and his shadow were tied to it, strengthening the core would not only increase Sunny's power, but also enhance the shadow. So, if he were to use it to further empower himself, the actual effect would be stacked, producing a twofold enhancement. So, for each shadow fragment he collected, Sunny would actually be able to reap twice as much benefit as an Awakened would from a soul shard.

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TheFriedPotato
TheFriedPotato
6 months ago
Commented

Reminds me of griffith ngl

The brutality of Hero's actions was in such stark contrast with his usually graceful demeanor that Sunny felt blood turning to ice in his veins. This was… scary.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

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