Rain_Dome

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Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Replied to Eat_Who_Mel

That's great. you are so cool as a writer. Write when you get time

Moeata jogs down the stairs with a light bounce in his step. The smell of pancakes wafts into the air and teases his senses like fingers gently massaging his nostrils. He cannot help the deep inhale he takes. Normally, he does not eat breakfast as his older sister prompts him to do because eating a full meal after eating supper does not sit well with his stomach. His mum is also usually too hungover to make breakfast.

Hey, Jude

Hey, Jude

Urban · Eat_Who_Mel

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Posted

you write very well. I loved how the story started, it was too drawing and I was immersed. It is written very well with good characters and settings . Worth reading definitely

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

😦😦😦😦

Upon arrival, I found the door wide open. My jaws dropped with shock as I tried to wrap my head around the three figures that stood in front of me that I'd just witnessed: Mr. Miller, his wife, Mrs. Miller, and Becky, his soon-to-be daughter-in-law. In that moment, I heard a gunshot sound, and in an instant, Mr. Miller was on the floor, blood gushing through her chest wound where he had been shot, and a gun next to him. 

Driven By Revenge

Driven By Revenge

Urban · VickyGV

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

oh come on

"No problem, but I will go with you so that you don't get lost like you always do." She forced herself to laugh. She walked behind me as we went to the bathroom. Just before I reached the bathroom, I heard a scream coming from one of the rooms upstairs; it sounded like that of a female. I stopped and looked back to see if my mother had also heard it. Instead of being shocked, my mother was worried, and again, that was strange. 

Driven By Revenge

Driven By Revenge

Urban · VickyGV

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

maybe things changed

"Non, no, no, you can't go upstairs. Let's just sit here in the living area and catch up." She prevented me from going upstairs, and her actions were odd because she knew how much I adored touring the beautiful residence every time I went there. As we sat there chatting, I could tell that her mind was occupied with something else; she was not her usual self; she was ill at ease and acting strangely. After spending about five minutes with her, she insisted that I get going, and she promised to pay me a visit later that day. In my mind, I had a lot of questions, and I decided to take my chances and question her.

Driven By Revenge

Driven By Revenge

Urban · VickyGV

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

pretty strong and attractive start

"Thank you, officer; you may be seated," the lawyer said. He then faced me and said, "Can you explain to us why you had Mr. Miller's blood on your hands and a gun next to him?" I nodded lightly and began, "I had gone to work." The lawyer didn't let me finish my sentence: "The coffee shop owner already said it was your day off, and you didn't come to work."

Driven By Revenge

Driven By Revenge

Urban · VickyGV

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

it's so cool. all your books are contracted and two are on ranking

"I will not let go of this", A young man in his 24 was on a bed naked. His body was full of bite marks which seemed to be like he got abused. Tears kept falling from his cheeks. His eyes, which were full of tears, showed that he had a lot of regrets.

Born Again(BL)

Born Again(BL)

LGBT+ · Sweet_Vanilla553

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

Just saw your profile. two of your stories are ranked and except two all are contracted. it's really cool

Guqin - Seven string instrument, sometimes translated as zither, even though the two ar nothing alike and produce completely different sounds. It's long and made of several types of wood, can be played on the players lap or on a low table.

Heaven's Gambit [BL]

Heaven's Gambit [BL]

LGBT+ · ThirtyTyrants

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

please write synopsis

An ancient family that is publicly known for its work, assistance and support to the government, but in secret they are a mafia family consisting of two parents. The eldest son ((Warut)) is an icon of society and everyone loves him. He is the face or mirror that reflects his family's work. It hides the illegal activities that are taking place. As for the younger son (Pravat), he is his father's right arm in criminal activities, such as smuggling weapons and so on. He appears with his brother, but in very rare cases.In bad circumstances, Pravat meets a young man with a bad past between them. Without knowing him, he decides to help him ((This is where the cards are revealed)).

.. The Rain / ฝน ..

.. The Rain / ฝน ..

LGBT+ · Edith_7_7

Rain_Dome
Rain_Dome
7 months ago
Commented

It's cool to see your progress on your profile how you became a signed author

Long time ago when magic and sword do exists, the world was divided into kingdoms ruled by kings who drew power from gods of Olympus through prayers and beliefs.

Judgement of Demon God

Judgement of Demon God

Fantasy · Promezus