It was a really great story, original characters, good plot and development, but the ending was off it fealt really rushed
He looked down to see he was still asleep, and Jaime smiled. His son's skin was smooth and soft against his own. The babe was nestled against his chest, a soft snore slipped past small lips. "Tyrone Lannister," He murmured to his sleeping son.
Book&Literature · AlexanderBlackfyre
Absolutly love it till now! I think the bigest problem with fanfic usally is the lack of creativity here we have none of that, full of original charakters who feel realy not just 2 d characters
Very creative fanfic, one of the best i have read so far, i really looking forvard how it will develop ( author please dont be the kind that can be bullied into writting clishe )
Wtf is nobody home ? How did noone came alteady ?
The walls were nothing but curtains of flames. The wall leading to the master bedroom had collapsed. The surrounding frame rumbled, threatening to collapse at any moment.
MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Terrorist
Anime & Comics · Nar_cisse