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while anos smiled sadistically was in third person pov meaning in the perspective of everyone present.

and all the explanations will be given in next chapter about Gods ,Venuzdonoa. And I can't cut the conversation part because that will be a clue to all Anos's questions.

well I know but Venuzdonoa part is to develop future plot I know he failed to summon it so I made him use Venuzdonoa despite knowing that but why, that's a secret that people will know in the next chapter.

and well him being a sadist also have different meanings like he toys with his opponents while being nonchalant which makes him appear to have sadistic tendencies due to his indifference in battle but it is more a facet of his complex character rather then a defining trait.

that was a fine advice, so I'll keep that in mind. thank you man, BTW I was just thinking too much how to progress the story while putting Anos here because that was an Arthur moment and I was wondering how I can put him in here so I thought since he knows virion personally so he can ask him to send the lances here as virion is part of the Council since after the turmoil anyone could tell there was something fishy going on inside the barriers that just suddenly popped out of nowhere, and about the reactions You're right I'll fix these kinds of mistakes in the future, and the sadist part was a joke which I thought would look cool since in the fight with zapes Anos did enjoy these 'gentle' moments which does in a sense give him a little side of being a sadist and moreover Anos is a man who would accept these things if asked while I know Anos is a good person and is a protector to his people, it doesn't change the fact that he is a king who massacred all in the war while being the one in the Frontline, last but not the least about Elijah and Lucas while in the chapter turning point after the white light disappeared the traitors were separated and Elijah wasn't in the hands of Draneeve so I thought why don't make him witness the flexing while Draneeve didn't left for Lucas to start rampaging not to mention everyone were perplexed as how all the barriers shattered. these were good criticism I'll fix them especially the reactions but I don't know now how to fix their knowledge of Gods so...I'll leave that to the readers to put that little detail aside and just enjoy.

I'll see if I can make that a bit longer, but don't expect it to be cause I also have job and I'm not fixing it I'm writing it from scratch.

nah man the thing is. I didn't like the chapter there were some inconsistencies here and there but when I started to fix them I thought, Hmm, this is trash. So I decided to rewrite the chapter from the start.

sorry for the inconvenience, but it might take some hours, 4-5 approx because I didn't like the new chapter because there were some inconsistencies here and there so it will take some time to fix it. or you can say you will see it tomorrow early morning in my country time which is 8:50 pm right now

the new chapter is written by me after getting adopted, you can also give your criticism for me to improve in the future