about two weeks to a month
sure thanks bro
Authors Note: What do you think of this chap?? Please inform me of the grammar errors so I can correct them, Please give suggestions and constructive criticism about the storytelling, don't just leave a spam negative review with img=faceslap or I will delete it, please cut the first few chapters some slack bec I'm a newbie author
Video Games · KingBarney
It was very good at the start but it got old quickly because the same " Oh no!! He has suffered so much!! It's my fault!! " happened every 3-4 chapters or so
Physics will apply to him when he gets to other worlds, the items he bring out of the Minecraft world also gets subjected to physics
Picking up the magic crystal he dropped, I decided to continue going deeper into the Dungeon until I reached a new monster.
Video Games · KingBarney
Yeah, he's also not gonna stay put with only rlcraft. There will be a ton more mods in the future
i plan on adding basic introductions in the next chap, the mc is just very excited to go the dungeon in the previous chap
every 100 days
thanks for the advice coco killer. I am just freestyling being a author so any piece of advice helps
the fight scenes are wonderful, the characters have a lot of depth. The main problem though is that there is a ton of filler in each chapter.
So much filler, what happened basically is riezel did one slash and yoirichi died. That's it
Looking Forward to Another World
Anime & Comics · VALRRR