seishan stated talking
most of the sentences with "would" should be in past tense. started breaking .. acting quickly took... Kai spoke
archer of the end..... this is actually peak.
bro, you came up with this or is it from G3? this is so good!
These runes would be shown simultaneously on both Effie's and Kai's status.
Revenge of the Treacherous Shadow
Book&Literature · ace_monkey_0410
W direction for the story. Exactly how I imagine Kai to react here.
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Revenge of the Treacherous Shadow
Book&Literature · ace_monkey_0410
for flashbacks you can write the time itself: A month ago two years ago for pov I think you can put these *** then start writing directly below. in this chapter, it starts with dialogue from Nephis pov so it's clear it's her pov , there's no need to tell us. **** "I can't believe I left him there"......
There's a lot of potential here. I really want to know how it'll continue. One thing though, I think you should find a better way to change pov than actually writing Nephis POV and Flashback
author, you alive man?
So.....a new chapter will release 6pm tomorrow🥳
Shadow Slave: Chain Breaker
Others · GiveMeYourMoney
Yeah, shorter chapters with regular updates = true addiction. that's what we all are here for. so more chapter PLEASE....thank you
excuse me...🙃
[Your shadow, Marble Saint has been destroyed]
Revenge of the Treacherous Shadow
Book&Literature · ace_monkey_0410