Thank you for your words. It is a shame that my novel did not meet your expectations, according to the reviews that were genuinely written by some people who actually liked my work. However, I would like to clarify that the characters are not 1-D as more of their selves are revealed later on, and it was not that stupid of the mc to really reveal his identity as the Grand Duke, because what can she even do if she knew? It doesn't change anything, does it? and he knew she wouldn't believe him, anyway. Nevertheless, thank you for giving this a shot. I hope you find better stories that you will enjoy. Thank you for your time ❤️
Aww, thank you so much for your kind words 😭😭😭 Glad you have been enjoying my work 💘
aww, thank you for being so understanding 🥺🥺 I am really trying my best to keep it in mind to not get their dialogues too moderny😭
Oh, I see. Don't worry about that. She is not one-dimensional evil, that I can assure at least. Her character will unfold as we progress 🫡
Haha, thank you for giving this a shot. Too bad it wasn't up to your taste. Hope you find something better to read ☺️☺️
Haha, sorry if that's not something you like. He is not being evil for the sake of evil, though. He has always had a cold heart. He just used to have quiet and defeated nature since he knew speaking up would only earn more punishment. He was only soft to Iyana, so her betrayal stung him the most here. He never did anything against anybody because he still had her. But now that is gone, he has no reason to maintain a good composure. Idk if that made sense 😓
Yes, I will be sure to keep that in mind. I did better in the future with dialogues. I will be editing the first chapters 😄 Thank you+
I thank you for giving this a chance and sorry if it wasn't up to your taste. Hope you find other great stories 😄
I will be sure to do better in the future. The first chapters are not pretty good in their dialogues. Thank you for your words, though 😄
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original Ascension Of The Villain
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In a world where villains are crafted, not born, Vyan's life takes a detour from dull to downright dramatic faster than he can say "abracadabra." Meet Vyan, the most ordinary knight in the realm, with all the magical prowess of a damp sock. Loyalty? He's got it in spades. Betrayal? Well, that's the surprise twist in his not-so-fairy-tale life. Framed and forsaken, Vyan is left with nothing but a grudge and some pretty gnarly scars, courtesy of his once-master, Iyana. Oh, did he mention she is the daughter of a marquess and the object of his unrequited affection? Talk about adding insult to injury. Just when he is ready to unleash his inner berserker, a butler comes along with news that makes his hair stand on end: Vyan is the last heir of the Grand Duke's mage dynasty! With power crackling at his fingertips and more mana than he can shake a wand at, Vyan is ready to show the world what happens when you underestimate the underdog. Will Vyan rise from the ashes like a phoenix, or will he crash and burn like a fire-breathing chicken? There's only one way to find out.257 Chs 2k Coleções
Haha, you are right, it can be very romcom. I try to put it in action scenes, then I end up scratching it, hehe. This is my first time writing this genre. I guess I have a long way to go before I can master up writing actions and all. But I am glad you enjoyed it though. Thank you for giving it a chance! ❤️
Ascension Of The Villain
Fantasy · _Snow_flake_