I would appreciate if u have added it like that as if rotten smell egg otherwise feels modern and turn off from immersion
Cannon shells landed on the enemy. The iron shells blasted away scores of infantry into the air, many dying to the cannons. Smoke billowed from the cannons, leaving a sulfuric scent of gunpowder in the air.
Empire of India: Rise of the Ruthless Prince
War · Indian_Painter
Bro i mean the positioning like how many troops, what type of formation? For reference try some chapters from Empire ascension or tyranny of steel. Both are well detailed.
Seeing an opportunity on the right flank. Bhairava looked over at the commander of a war elephant unit.
Empire of India: Rise of the Ruthless Prince
War · Indian_Painter
good book. well written on historical drama on South India . a lot of tension and suspense. but there are few things I felt vague and less described , may be good for others but in my personal opinion author has left it to reader's imagination. and the other thing i craved was lack of romance but the book is based on war and military so ok I guess. hope author makes all indians proud. it has good potential.[img=recommend]
can't u use a bit simple words? douse ?? sorry i m not so good in english
His armor turned red, doused with the blood of his enemies. The unit mowed down the infantry like a sharp knife through the heavy rain. Small wounds appeared on his arms and face. This didn't deter him. The blood of his enemies mixing with the rain filled the battlefield.
Empire of India: Rise of the Ruthless Prince
War · Indian_Painter
can u give map or layout. it's so zig zag. not able to understand how the army is placed. only vague idea.
Seeing an opportunity on the right flank. Bhairava looked over at the commander of a war elephant unit.
Empire of India: Rise of the Ruthless Prince
War · Indian_Painter
sulphuric was known to them? I don't understand what author trying to portray?.wasn't sulphur unknown to them
Cannon shells landed on the enemy. The iron shells blasted away scores of infantry into the air, many dying to the cannons. Smoke billowed from the cannons, leaving a sulfuric scent of gunpowder in the air.
Empire of India: Rise of the Ruthless Prince
War · Indian_Painter
cannons making dent on shields?? wtf
Chandra's army was greeted with a hail of steel right onto their close-knit shield walls. This was coupled with the shells of the Culverins. They made a dent in their shield wall, and the arrows picked apart the infantry through the gaps.
Empire of India: Rise of the Ruthless Prince
War · Indian_Painter
Her mother's advances were bound to fail!
Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades
Fantasy · FailedWriter101
and he moaned for three days?
It took Neo three days to use the Spell.
Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades
Fantasy · FailedWriter101
no worries .u r doing great. don't take my all words to heart as u might be having more depencies . so far entertaining [img=recommend]
Empire of India: Rise of the Ruthless Prince
War · Indian_Painter