It's disappointing when a story that could be great ends up not being so good. The writing is confusing, the characters aren't interesting, and there is not much world-building. When you read this book, it feels more like reading someone summarizing the story instead of experiencing it. Instead of showing us what's happening, the author just tells us, which isn't very exciting. Also, important parts of the story are rushed through in just a few paragraphs. The action scenes are written with just a few sentences, and the main character becomes very powerful too quickly. He always wins without facing any real challenges, and his decisions are pretty stupid.
That was when she found out her Karma Points were a mere 57.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Ryan took a deep breath, looking at the two companions who had once fought alongside him. After a moment of silence, he found himself unable to go through with it, feeling a reluctance in his heart, and finally decided to let them be. With the"Wings of the Gale" on his back fluttering, he soared into the sky under Evelyn and Olaf's fearful gaze, heading towards the direction Adolf had fled.
Endless Devouring System
Fantasy · JadePhoenixS
Guy shouted enthusiastically, "Good! We will run a thousand rounds around this training ground on our hands!"
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex