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DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
11 months ago
Commented

This format for texting is sooo good. Is it alright if I use this in my books too???

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DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Commented

Forever? Is she crazy? -Sorry, just caught me off guard at 2 in the morning.

Amy sat there in stunned silence. What happened? Why was Sonic rejecting her? Wasn't she pretty enough for him? Or maybe he just didn't care. But why wouldn't he care about her? Amy couldn't help but start to feel hurt. Maybe he liked another girl. Maybe he never loved her in the first place. All Amy cared about was being together with him forever. That was all she ever thought about. And suddenly he broke up with her.

Sonic Adventure 2: Sonadow

Sonic Adventure 2: Sonadow

Video Games · Daoistl56epw

DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Posted

I loved how the story intrigued me to read more. I only wish that some punctuation, such as commas, would have been used. Aside from that, I think this really beautiful, for what you can read.

DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Replied to david200

I'm working on your request right now! You can read the first chapter right now! It's called: Different to the World.

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DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Replied to david200

That's an amazing idea! I can definitely try a book like that! Thank you for the support and idea!!! I hope you have a good morning/evening/afternoon/night!!!

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DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Replied to Arianna_Davies

Does this actually mean this story is Done DONE

DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Commented

I think it is a mound trap or something like that

We were so close to where Rouge was but I stopped when I felt the ground get uneven and the walls shake. Sonic noticed it too. "Are we seriously having an actual earthquake?!" I looked around everywhere, eyes wandering. I looked down to see my foot on some kind of trap trigger. (I forgot what it was called) Then out of nowhere, a rope that was hiding in the middle of the floor cracks sprung up, trapping me and Sonic.

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Others · shadowxsonic

DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Commented

Sonic, Rouge, and I- Just an error, Amazing work!!!

Sonic, Me, and Rouge were walking/flying, looking for an exit. "Im boreddd" Sonic complained, dragging the 'd', Rouge roll her eyes at the hedgehog's behavior and ignore him. "Then why did you even come to the cave in the first place?" I remarked.

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Others · shadowxsonic

DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Commented

Little did they know, a surprise was waiting for them, or at least two of them. -Just a few error; Great chapter BTW!!!

Little did they know I surprise was waiting for them, or at least two of them.

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Others · shadowxsonic

DeletedAccount78
DeletedAccount78
1 years ago
Commented

I <3 this. Real funny!!! LOL

~After the Fight~ (Im sorry, I have no motivation)

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Need love again (Sonadow Fanfic)

Others · shadowxsonic

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