Lonelythree

Lonelythree

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Just a lonely soul wandering around to find some meaning

2023-11-19 Unido Global
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Lonelythree
Lonelythree
14 hours ago
Replied to NIGGASLAYER

No it mean't right.Abysmal means bad dreadful in that sense

Lonelythree
Lonelythree
4 days ago
Replied to Wodehouse

Thanks for the review

Lonelythree
Lonelythree
14 days ago
Replied to Shadow_1854

Can you give a review?

Lonelythree
Lonelythree
14 days ago
Posted

Hello, I am Lonelythree and this is the first time I am reviewing my book and want to tell you something. First, this book would follow a mixed pov writing style with a majority in the First person and some parts third person. Secondly, this novel would follow a mix of fantasy, lore, secret groups, evil religion, evil gods, the Academy, and Mc having its followers so you can expect a great number of things. The pacing would be a bit slow and world-building would be crafted phase by phase so that there isn't much info dump. This is my first novel with a serious story with a lot of things going so I might make mistakes but do suggest corrections and remind me of plot holes. Before you form your opinion, I would ask you to read the first 20-30 chapters before disliking or commenting on it. Constructive criticism is accepted but doesn't just give 1-star with no feedback and filled with symbols. Give 1 star but have a say about what you disliked and what can be improved.

Lonelythree
Lonelythree
16 days ago
Replied to Glaivco1_A

Exams are going on.Also the novel is nearing its end. You can think of this last arc.Around more 40-50 chapters to go. Btw, you have time can you check my other novel The Huntsman Of Death from profile. Also many, many thanks for the support till now

Lonelythree
Lonelythree
Lonelythree
16 days ago
Replied to omkar_chougule

Waiting for the contract.also, exams are going until then save stockpiles

Lonelythree
Lonelythree
Lonelythree
1 months ago
Replied to AzuraD

No, I won't. Also before you get it wrong, hear my point of things. I never mean to drop it. I planned to continue both the book side by side but in July there as riot in my state and a lockdown was imposed with net being cut of .During that time the book fell and despite that I tried to release for two months but it didn't pick up and earned. Sorry, but I need money man to fill the bill. If you are interested in similar story, I am gonna release one in January after this Tycoon is over,hope you give it a try

Lonelythree
Lonelythree
1 months ago
Replied to BlueCavern

I have changed it.It was wrong upload

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