Alright here. There are so many grammar mistakes. Not spelling correctly amongst the story is like just passing by. Seriously rethink this story and try again. I'll check on it in a month. I don't think a fantasy world is a problem but your just go way to fast and I can't even understand it. I turned my brain off and still can't.
Webnovel
Alright here. There are so many grammar mistakes. Not spelling correctly amongst the story is like just passing by. Seriously rethink this story and try again. I'll check on it in a month. I don't think a fantasy world is a problem but your just go way to fast and I can't even understand it. I turned my brain off and still can't.
starting a new in a fantasy world
Fantasy · red_skull225