Rushed? Hm... it was the normal pacing for that particular chapter. But I get it pacing can be relative. And someone writing my chapter is a weird thing to say; I'm not sure any writer would let others write a book they've been working so hard to create. My work is my baby🥰🥰, and I don't let anyone touch it except my readers.
Lyn knew she had to force herself to look away and maybe think about something innocent at the moment, but nothing came to her mind except what Iva had asked her to do the next time she met with Kael.
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Belated Consummation
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no she was really unconscious but healed along the way. it just took her a little time to heal🫠
Iva chuckled. Without saying anything, she struggled to her feet while still holding Layla. "I'll hold off the smacking for tomorrow," she turned and walked into the castle, leaving Ryver alone outside.
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if you read slowly you'll see Kael was watching Avyssa's move instead of her face. Avyssa was also doing something in the circle while Adele was also chanting her own spell. The demoness did something to protect herself.
Kael pushed himself forward again. His golden eyes glowed even in the dark, his fangs elongated as he tried to push through the spell around the circle. Dark veins popped under his eyes and forehead. The veins trailed down to his neck and hands.
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It's the scene you're talking about. I added the bunny because it was cute🫠😋
The next thing Jacquelyn saw was Kael holding a little girl who was close to a coffin and sinking his fangs into her... eyes.
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No, but I'll announce the new book from the Queens' Trilogy before the month ends. So two new books coming up next😊😊
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Doom raised her face. "K-ael? What are you—oh, you have come to take my hands finally?" Doom stood on her feet, feeling a little itch on her hand. She rubbed it again, this time vigorously. "That is still perfect...I will show you." The demoness raised her hand up and chanted,
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Thank you😘😘It's a scene from the book...you'll find the pic as you read on💕
The next thing Jacquelyn saw was Kael holding a little girl who was close to a coffin and sinking his fangs into her... eyes.
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I appreciate your apology, dearest Nosliw. I want to assure you that I'm the sole author of my work, never letting anyone add anything to it. Which is why I skim through my readers' comments well for critics and review. I'll probably read the chapter again and make changes, okay, dear? Thanks for your constant feedback.💕
Cursed Bride Of The Damned Vampire King
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