DaoistthV4aQ

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
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Amazing! In the first chapter i had the Mafia romance vibes, but as the story paced it also put Emotions like Sadness and pity for Characters. Keep it up, and there are a few mistakes in Punctuation and Dialogues. You can fix them just by giving them a re-read

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
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The story is developing really nicely since it's the start but Readers can tell that the story is pacing really nicely. (Loved the bit of humour you added.) I really liked it keep it up.

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
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I honestly found the Characters kinda Cute, Beside that the novel is really capable of keeping a reader on track, It is one of the amazing novels i have read nowadays. Keep it up <3

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
Replied to Sie_Ryu

I am so sorry for misconvenience, Can you point a Something out as an example so i can improve, Please it will help me alot

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
Posted

Amazing story, It is such interesting yet confusing story, Haven't read such one in the genre of vampires, I enjoyed it so much, keep it up.

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
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The book is really gripping and the way the emotions (especially Pain) are explained is truely amazing and fascinating. Keep it up and Waiting for the update <3

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
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The story is keeping the grip even tho It's just started and the characters development is amazing, I really loved the writing style as well.

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
Posted

SUPER AMAZING! Not really a fan of the supernatural but the way author got me hooked on this story is so so amazing. +It's rare to see books with such strong female leads

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
Replied to XOXO_LtlSunFlwr

I am so sorry to ask, but will you mind leaving a review and ratings please? I am a beginner I really need that. <3

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DaoistthV4aQ
1 years ago
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It really got me hooked since the first chapter, The way you make the storyline unfold is worth appreciating dear, It is also such a unique story. I really love it. (Waiting for update) <3

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  • Mr Nightmare's Ex. original

    Mr Nightmare's Ex.

    Urban R18 WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK VILLAIN TRAGEDY

    4.47

    How wrong meeting your Ex-boyfriend can go? The ex whom he broke up with 10 years ago. What will possibly happen when, Oliver, A 27 years old Boxing champion finds the person he hates the most, His ex girlfriend Mercy applying for the position of his personal assistant? What lies will get unfolded? Will he ever know the actual truth of what really happened 10 years ago? What truth their past are hiding? And where will their Future end up? "H-Help! Someone's following me." "Who?" "My stalker." "What will i get in return, My dear Mercy?"

    16 Chs 9 Coleções