DivineMelon

DivineMelon

male LV 4
2023-05-29 Unido Ascension Island
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DivineMelon
DivineMelon
3 months ago
Posted

Pretty good read. Binge read it until the latest. There's some boring parts because some of the canon still happened despite the butterfly effect but it's bearable. Mc was likeable, good but not too much. He put up a mask but so far, he doesn't look like one that will turn evil. Romance was done well imo. It builds up pretty well and not just s*x after one chapter.

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
5 months ago
Posted

This is good, one of the unique GOT fanfiction that I've read. The story was done well and realistic but the pacing was really slow. Rody was one of the protagonist that I've like despite not having any ambition. He is loyal and persistent. His battle prowess came from training consistently and not on lucky encounter. World background was decent. Writing Quality was good but sometimes there are unnecessary words in paragraphs which made me skim some while reading. 4.2/5

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
6 months ago
Posted

Good Game of Thrones fanfiction. decent Mc with likeable but still doesn't stand out. The story was decent with really slow pacing. The writing quality was great and the chapters were long. World Building were also decent. 4.2/5

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
6 months ago
Replied to TheLadyWhosCurious

I will update it soon, just getting back to writing again.

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
6 months ago
Posted

I wrote this story based on all the things I like in a story. Hope you all enjoy it.

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
6 months ago
Posted

Peek story. One of my favorite fanfiction and also Kingdom Building story. The writing quality was great and immersive. Azrael, the Mc, is a great OC as his personality was perfect for me. He was kind to his people but is willing to kill if needed. His character develop through experiencing the new world he was in. As for the side characters, they're likable and I can say that the Author new his way with it. The World Background was detailed that you can really imagine the face of characters and image of the structures. Adding to it is that the Author also put images to the paragraph comments to make it more immersive. 5/5

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
7 months ago
Posted

One of my favorite fanfiction in this platform. Great story, writing quality was above the standard and there is barely errors or mistakes. Characters were good especially the Mc, has a kindness but still would hold his sword and kill as mean to protect his love ones. I can't comment much to other characters since I've never read the original book yet but soon.

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
7 months ago
Posted

Great story as always. The Mc was the perfect definition of someone with the OCD, he wants perfection to all things. The pacing was also balance with time skip here and there. The writing quality is also good. Overall, 5/5.

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
7 months ago
Posted

A really good fanfic. It was one of my favorite sport fanfic that I binge read this till my eyes started heating up. Mc was a good but not too good, he act like any normal person would do Infront of arrogant people; Not bow your head or be intimidated. The story progression was quite good, the pacing was slow but not too slow. Good side characters that act as they were in thier original series or anime. Overall, 4.4.

DivineMelon
DivineMelon
7 months ago
Posted

I have finished reading till 79 chapters. The story was good. The protagonist was good and kept his character as a villain, he never hesitate to k1ll anyone who comes to his way or don't benefit anymore. There were many spelling and grammar and spelling error but it was bearable. I gave this a 5 despite the flaw as I really like the story. Hope to see more chapters.