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Lengthy chapters, but they're my type, as long as they keep me engaged. This story managed to do that quite well, Ace's past was relentless but nonetheless it was good. I'm sorry if I didn't provide any critic, I enjoyed this story and don't have anything to point out really. Keep working and honing your craft!

Thank you, I can't help but write long chapters, though I'm going to improve and make them more engaging. Appreciate the pointers!

Appreciate it. I'll try to deliver on the next chapters!

Appreciate the honesty. I'm glad the story kept you engaged. Thanks for reading!

I'm no professional reviewer, so there isn't much for me to point out. Characters, world, direction. All of the are fantastic. The world seems vast, and I can already see so much content to be explored. Characters show potential depth through the dialogue alone, and personally, Leo seems cool. Of course, the main character is well written from what I can see. Direction of the story looks extremely promising and I'm hoping it continues to advance and deliver well. All and all, I had to talk about what the contents of the story since the way information is shown really intrigued me. Keep writing this story, I'm already a fan!