Thank you, means a lot!
You won't be missed, have a great day : )
Keep your kisses and hugs—I don’t need them. You skipped most of my novel and then tore into it with this review. MC barely cried—he was pissed about being "NTR’d." And while I won’t deny he had weak moments, what did you expect? That he’d just shrug off his best friends lying to him after ten years of a relationship? His reluctance to use the system stems from relying on someone all his life (Daniel) and wanting to prove himself with his own strength. This was explained in Chapter 16. As for his betrayal of Marcel, you completely skimmed over the reasoning. It wasn’t some petty grudge—it was survival. That was also explained the moment it happened. And Daniel? That was covered in Chapter 27. He did it because he knew MC and the girl liked each other and feared being left all alone once they got together. There is no Japanese mafia anywhere in the novel. The story involves a royal French family, which was established early on and still plays an important role. As for the novel cutting off before he tells her why—Eunhee already knew. That was confirmed in Chapter 27, where Daniel outright tells her, and she stops him from saying anything more. And yet, she still chose to stay with him. Why? Because after MC was presumed dead, Daniel was all she had. Her parents were awful—she clung to the only person left. And Daniel struggling with what he did—being conflicted after betraying his best friend of ten years—is that really so strange? Do you truly not see why, in his mind, he can’t believe someone would accept a lie so easily? And about MC beating his dog when he was five? That was ignorance—a child’s lack of understanding of pain—until his mother taught him otherwise. I’m sorry you felt that way. I do. But I can’t help that. If you’re going to criticize my novel, do it right. Don’t twist things. Don’t omit facts.
sorry I don't reply a lot, busy with other stuff in my life as well as uploading in other websites. thank you for your interest and for reading! imma upload a chapter as soon as I can!
oh Phew. was worried your reaction was due to not reading the final section. I was afraid some might skip it
you've read the whole chapter I hope?
means a bunch. thank you. good on you for working out!
hehe
"...It's Minoru. Nice to meet you." His voice was quiet, restrained, his head kept facing forward as they neared Sakura's room.
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